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Kiri in Arda
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It's a reasonable enough thing to do to call the nearest prime when a bizarre monster appears out of thin air and starts eating people.

Inconveniently, the nearest prime is distracted long enough by a hysterical woman begging her not to burn it, to please see if there's a way to get her son back out of it again -

- that the bizarre monster slithers right up to them.

Kiri tries to shove the woman out of the way, and succeeds; Aleko tries to shove Kiri out of the way, and manages only to get himself and her tangled in a heap when the monster's face passes around them.

And now -

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Araman gets uglier the farther north they travel.

"We can't do this," Macalaure says to his father after the second day, but then they also cannot defeat Moringotho and they cannot save everyone and they are trying anyway, so sheer physical impossibility no longer moves his father. 

"It would be faster to get boats," Maitimo attempts, the next day. Efficiency might serve where nothing else will. "I could go to Alqualonde and petition for aid-"

"Mmm," says their father. He is in too much pain to think straight but it's not a no and the Ice will kill them all and so Maitimo carefully keeps pressing the subject. 

And then there's an uproar outside.

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"Kiri it is real fucking cold," is the first thing Aleko says.

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"...that, at least, I can fix," she says, and it warms up around them. She brushes street dust off her and looks around.

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It is, in fact, really fucking cold. Also completely dark. It's also very rocky, very windy, and totally barren of life except for a distant line of marching people, inadequately dressed for this, bearing northward while angling away from the winds.

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"There's some people over that way."

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"Over what way, it's pitch dark."

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Kiri picks up his hand and points. "Not sure if we want to be obvious to whoever is wherever we are, but that way."

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They're obvious; a person's heat alone would be impossible to miss against this freezing temperature, and the area around them has gone startlingly hot, too. There's a flurry of conversations and the scouts report immediately to people authorized to interrupt the King and the King is interrupted and soon a few thousand sharp Elven eyes are fixed on the two people and the host stops moving. Not Elves. Too short. Orcs? With some kind of heater? Valaraukar?

Weapons are drawn, just in case, by people who have never actually used them.

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"Shit I think they noticed us anyway."

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"Not in a good way?"

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"Not so much. Help me up -"

She gets to her feet with some help.

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They approach. They very nervously approach; there's bad footing, here, if it comes to a fight it'll be ugly, even with these numbers, but what are they going to do, ignore it?

 

Hello, he says when in range. Declare yourselves.

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"They've got some kind of telepath and beat my range so I don't know how comprehensive. Think bland thoughts," she says to Aleko.

And, clamping down on her own thoughts in a way she's never had to before: Prime Kiribel Miar Swan Ardelay and my brother Aleko Fylt Swan Ardelay, lost. You?

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Those aren't names in any Elven language.

Turkafinwë Tyelcormo, son of Curufinwë Fëanáro Noldoran. You are very lost; I have never heard of you or your language or of people like you. How are you warming the area?

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Magic. I've never heard of you or yours either.

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So we probably don't have a language in common, so I can't swear to no hostile intent. Well. No hostile intent. His people do sheath their swords. Unless you serve the Enemy, but at a guess you'll say you've never heard of him either.

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No, I haven't, she confirms. "I think they put their weapons away," she says uncertainly to Aleko.

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Are you from somewhere in the Outer Lands?

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We're from a country called Welce. It borders Soche-Tas and Berringey, it's across the sea from Malinqua...

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Not familiar. What do the stars look like there?

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I don't have a star chart memorized... Not like these, I don't recognize any constellations.

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It might be complicated to get you back. This wasteland is the only way out of Valinor and the Enemy is on the other side.

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I don't recognize any summer or winter constellations. I don't think we're even on our own planet.

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After the war my father might be able to do something. But not until then.

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What are you having a war about?

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The Enemy murdered my grandfather and destroyed the Trees and is probably slaughtering and torturing his way across the Outer Lands.

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...the Trees?

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He sends the mental image. That's why it's dark, the Trees are dead. Are you used to the dark?

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...No. We have a sun. Mental image of that.

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We don't have one of those, so now that the Trees are dead there's no light in the world. We can fix that with the Silmarils once we win the war.

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I'll have to take your word for that.

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Like I said, I'll swear to everything if you'll do likewise once we have a common language.

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I'm not sure why that would help. If you really need me to trust you, you could get in range of my telepathy.

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...you can't be lied to over osanwë?

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I have no idea how your telepathy works, but I'd take mine over a verbal assurance. I'm not going to require it for mere nonhostility or anything though.

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I can't hear anything that someone wants to keep private, not once they're older than a kid and know how to keep thoughts private in the first place. You could be lying to me quite easily.

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I'm the only telepath in my country and probably my entire world, she says, and if there's a way to shield thoughts from me within range I haven't run into it. Range is five feet.

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Bit of a catch; I'd be happy to get that close so you can verify I don't want to hurt you, but I have no way of being confident you don't want to hurt me and that'd be pretty easy to do, at five feet. I am guessing your brother does not want to come over here as assurance.

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Are you the sort to be reassured that if I wanted to hurt you you're already well in range of the other half of my magic?

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Yeah, definitely. What's the other half of your magic?

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Fire. More generally temperature. You wanted to know how I was warming the area; that's how. Aleko was cold.

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Um.

And to his father, we might have a way across the Ice, or I might die. Either way, kind of need to know as soon as possible.

Go on, his father says.

 

Do you think you could help us cross this place? We need to do it as fast as possible to get to the site of the war.

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Um. There's kind of a lot of you, and I sleep and don't know if it gets cold enough to freeze you while I'm doing that, and I don't know how much food you brought. But maybe? How big is it?

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It's about four hundred miles by land from here, but we don't need constant warming, we have tents, the snow can insulate them too, we just need a clear path. We have more than enough food.

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That's... a really long hike and I'm not very good at walking, but I can warm the area within my range as long as I'm awake and someone reminds me to keep doing it every now and then...

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We can build sledges for our supplies and you can sit on one of them, if you can do warming that'd be directed enough to make a path for sledges. Or we can carry you, that's not a problem.

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I have pretty arbitrary precision within my range. I can't directly affect terrain per se but I can melt and refreeze ice.

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That should do it then. I'll tell people to get started on sledges. How fast? How much ice a day?

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I don't have a capacity limit that I've ever come across, just range and attention. And I think you must see better than I can or something so that's a factor too on anything delicate, we can't see you from here at all, all I can do is tell where there's warmth.

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I mean, I'm seeing you by body heat too, but I can see you quite clearly. He sends a mental image.

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Yeah, you see much better than us. I don't see heat, I feel it. Aleko can't even do that. He's just seeing dark and stars. I'd light up the place but it'd ruin what adjustment to the dark we've managed.

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Aleko, want me to continously project what I'm seeing? It takes a while to get used to using someone else's eyes but it totally works.

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"Shh."

Aleko's not interacting with your telepathy like that till I know more about how it works.

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Your call, Aleko, he says a bit pointedly. And I'm happy to come within range of you, if you'd like, we're gonna need you to cross the Ice so you may as well trust us.

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In case you can't tell, Aleko is deferring to me on this one. You can approach.

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So he does.

They are smaller than Elves, or perhaps not fully grown. They're dressed strangely. 

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We're not going to get any taller, she remarks. If you'd like finer control over what I read you can stand just there - She sends a distance. And stick out a hand and drop it if your thoughts stray to something sensitive.

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No secrets here. The Valar aren't around for you to run to about my personal life, and there's, y'know, a war.

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Right then. What's on his mind.

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He's trying to think what kind of being they are - Men? They're not Dwarves, there's eventually gong to be other kinds but no one really knows, and then they're from a different universe so even that might not apply. He's thinking how if she goes murderous out here or turns out to be a valarauka at least they're away from the tents, though Father might do something stupid... He's thinking how fast they can cross the ice if it can be melted through cleanly, what will the Enemy have had time to achieve on the other side.

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We call ourselves "humans". What's a valarauka?

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All we have are vague stories. Fire-demons, serve the Enemy, very dangerous.

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How's your telepathy work?

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Can send thoughts, and read them. Range depends on how well you know someone. It's a few hundred miles if you've known them for hundreds of Years. You keep your thoughts private by habitually designating some that way... he runs through how this is done - and then in principle no one but Mandos can hear them.

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And there's no suspicious reflection of her or Aleko in Tyelcormo's mind. She murmurs instructions to her brother and he switches from thinking about what he had for lunch to thinking about how the heck to do that.

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It sometimes takes months to learn, but I can tell everyone not to read you if it makes you nervous.

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I suspect I have the hang of it for myself. Aleko's working on it. You may check me.

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Can't hear anything. If you want I can keep checking and let you know if you forget and stop doing it.

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Is there a reason not to warn me before doing that?

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If what you want to know is whether you're doing it even when you're not thinking about it, prompting you to think about it will not be informative.

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All right, if Aleko wanders out of my range and indicates it's a good time you may check me on his say-so, he'd have a reasonable chance of guessing if I was thinking about anything particularly essential. She relays this to Aleko in Welchin.

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Lot of secrets to keep?

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I have been an involuntary mind-reader since I was eight. I take mental privacy very seriously.

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Okay. I'll ask your brother. 

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You want to learn a word or two of Welchin or teach him some of whatever you speak?

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I can try to pick it up. I can also ask him and he can nod or shake his head, if he doesn't want to answer me with osanwe.

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He's still working on the private/public distinction and I have twin privileges on indiscriminate mindreading that do not extend past me, so please don't listen to him until he's gotten farther with that. But yes, nodding works.

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Great. Want to come in, we can set up a tent and get you some food?

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Kiri relays this to Aleko, who is fervently in favor of food. Thank you.

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Any time. This way. And he explains to everyone that they're coming back and he thinks they're legitimate. When they reach the rest of his people Huan brushes by him to sniff them.

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Kiri steps back abruptly when Huan comes close, wobbles, has to be caught by her twin. "THAT DOG IS A PERSON," she says loudly, forgetting that Aleko is the only listener handy who can understand her.

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"...what, literally?"

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"Yes literally a weird person with way too much attention in one place!"

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He doesn't understand the conversation but he notices the distress. Huan's friendly.

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My problem is not that I suspect he's unfriendly my problem is that in my world dogs are not people.

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Oh. I can talk to all animals. Most aren't as smart as Huan, though.

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I usually can't read anything off anyone except humans and I suppose whatever you are.

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The Eldar. The species is Quendi. Most animals don't have very complicated thoughts but I can talk to all of them. Anyway, Huan's a Maia, one of this world's gods.

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My world doesn't have any of those.

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We've got a bunch. One of them's evil, he's the one we're marching off to fight.

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...Seems like fighting a god might be difficult to impossible.

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The alternative was sitting at home and letting him slowly torture to death everyone on the continent.

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Why aren't the non-evil gods self-policing...?

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They are. They just move very slowly. They'd get around to it in a few thousand years, maybe even a few hundred.

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Wow.

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So we're not waiting.

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Makes sense.

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There are a lot of us, even more than you can see here. We can put up a fight.

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You'd know better than I would how you match up against a kind of god I only heard of moments ago.

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We don't know very well but we're going to try.

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And you think your father can get us home but won't until your war's over?

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My father can pretty much do anything, but it takes him a lot of time. And he's going to be devoting all his energy to the war until it's over, he can't afford to spend time on other things. And the Silmarils might be able to help send you home but we need to win the war to reclaim them.

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What's a Silmaril?

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He sends an image. They amplify magic, among other things, and they're very powerful.

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Is there any world-hopping magic for them to amplify?

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No, not yet. But I bet given enough time he can do it.

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It's really not a good time for me to be disappeared. There's been a rash of instability in primacies and I am currently both the most experienced and the youngest active prime and I do not think my disappearance counted as a death and activated a replacement.

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You could ask the Valar to send you back, but that's chancy.

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Because they'll take a few hundred years to get around to it? If that's the time frame I'm looking at I may as well find someplace comfortable to live and not bother at all, I'm not going to live that long.

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Are you expecting something bad to happen to you?

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Humans are not immortal by default. But now you mention it I'm probably a really obvious target for anybody with any interests at all in a war-torn world where my powers are useful.

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Enemy doesn't know about you. He'd probably go after you if he did, though, and he'll probably learn eventually. Elves don't kill people.

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That's good for Elves. I didn't mean necessarily a target for murder.

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Elves also do not hold people prisoner.

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This is also good for Elves, but if I help you get where you're going and you go provoke an evil god my life may get very complicated.

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Yeah. I cannot promise we can protect you, honestly. You want to go to Valinor, you can go to Valinor, you aren't likely to die there. Everyone here decided to take the chance.

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I don't have enough information about your pending war effort or about Valinor to make an informed decision.

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So come eat dinner and ask questions and my father'll learn your language so your brother can ask questions too.

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Okay. He's some kind of language prodigy that he can just do that casually?

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He's really really smart.

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The two don't always go together, but okay.

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They reach the host. He explains what's going on, and there's a tent ready for them. The food's not warm, but perhaps Kiri can change that.

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Well, is it supposed to be warm?

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Might be tastier.

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Then yes, now it is warm.

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And a minute later, Tyelcormo says, my father's the King. So you know. And he's coming over now.

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Good to know. Does everybody know about my range limit or does Aleko need to do perimeter duty or what?

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I told them, but I really don't think they're going to mind too much. The only thing that matters is the war.

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If you say so. "You don't have to watch my borders like they don't know," she tells Aleko.

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And a minute later a very gaunt very intense unhappy-looking man walks in and Tyelcormo rises. Father.

 

Hello, he says to Kiri and Aleko. I'm going to sit over here because I don't mind if you read me but if only people who do mind avoid you then it'll be notable. Feanaro. You're from another world?

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Yes. It has a sun, for example. And humans.

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What are those?

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The sun provides a day cycle and warms the planet, mental image, and humans are our species, I've never heard of yours before today.

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Likewise. I'd like to learn your language, both because that'll confirm you're not a trick of the Enemy and because that way your brother can participate in the conversation. Is this a good time for that?

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Sure. How do you want to do it? I learned what I know of my second language mostly out of books but I don't have any Welchin-to-whatever-you-speak texts around.

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The easiest way is for you to just talk, and then also provide a translation in osanwe, but if you're new to it you may find that hard to do at once.

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"Is this good?"

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"Good. Is this Kiribel? Is this Welchin?"

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"...What?"

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Kiri snorts. "He's practicing, I guess. This is Welchin, yes, and I'm Kiribel, and that's Aleko, and correct my pronunciation if necessary but you're Fëanáro?"

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"You're Kiribel, you're Aleko, I'm Fëanáro. I'm practicing, I guess. That's Tyelcormo. Correct my pronunciation if necessary."

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"Your pronunciation is really good for someone unfamiliar with Welchin, as it happens."

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Can you tell me how you got here and what you want to accomplish now?

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"I was called out to address a weird creature loose in a town near my house. I have no idea what it was, I've never heard of anything remotely like it, but it looked like a giant snake with a mirror for a face and it was eating people, to the extent you can call it eating when the apparatus involved is a mirror and the destination is an otherworldly wasteland - though nobody else landed here with us, so maybe other victims landed elsewhere. I was going to burn it but someone whose son had been eaten practically tackled me asking me to hold off and see if there was a way to get him back first, and the snake got close enough to 'eat' me and Aleko while I was distracted."

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There are no incidents like that recorded in our history, and no otherworldly arrivals. Go on.

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"It is a bad time for me to be away. The fact that I still have my magic powers suggests that the primacy, which is a political and magical position which is passed on with those powers, rests with me, and therefore solely with me - there's only one prime per element at a time. All five primes are necessary to ratify new monarchs, and the other four primes are all due to a series of misfortunes newer at their jobs than me, and I'm the only person who knew all their predecessors in enough detail to give them any hints about how to work their powers. They can learn the politics other ways, but the magic is close to incommunicable and even primes of the same element don't all do it the same way. I really don't want Prince Isten to have the slightest bit of trouble assuming the throne when his father finally dies, it is loosely possible that my prolonged absence will disrupt some magical ecosystem that might or might not really exist, and yet I am not prepared to commit suicide - this might not manage to transmit the primacy either, if whatever does it can't tell if I'm alive or not when I'm not at home, and anyway I like being alive. However, it sounds like there is no short-term solution to getting us home, so I suppose I want to get my bearings here and maybe see how easy evil gods are to set on fire."

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That last earns her a fierce smile. Not easily, but I think it can be done. The Valar might be able to send you home but they also might decide that you'd offended against them by walking in their territory and they also might spend a decade debating it, both things would be in character.

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"Getting me home in a decade is barely more helpful than me living out the rest of my natural lifespan here, that would be plenty of time for any political interests that have a way to leverage my absence to decide it's permanent and get decisions made on that basis."

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"...living out the rest of...your natural lifespan...is how long?"

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"We're seventeen now and humans die of old age beginning around late sixties, early seventies, with some lucky specimens persisting past a century."

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"Wait are these dudes immortal."

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"Yep."

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We do not experience that, no. I expect the war to be over in fifty Years but I am not sure if our years are the same as yours.

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"Well, how long are yours? ...How do you even have 'years' without a sun?"

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The Valar count them. A year in your world is related to the Sun? A year for us is twelve times twelve times twelve days. 

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"That's a lot longer than our years even if your days are somewhat shorter. Ours are Sun-based, yes, as are our days... we've been here maybe an hour to the extent I can rely on my internal clock, a day is twenty-four hours, and a year is three hundred and sixty-five days, divided into five seventy-two-day quintiles and five changedays for convenience."

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Our days were by the Trees, and the Trees are absent, but they'd be - perhaps longer than yours? We don't generally subdivide them. You might die very soon by our standards. I wonder if I can do anything about that.

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"Well, that'd be nice, at least if I can expect to ever go home. It'd probably be irresponsible of me to become immortal if I can't."

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Because of the powers, right. Okay. I won't make it a priority if you don't want it. We have a lot of priorities as it stands.

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"Oh, I want it like crazy, but not at the expense of my country's stability, and I don't have a way to assess that from here."

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"My country's stability - depends on crossing the Ice quickly."

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"It sounds like I can help with that if the problem is mostly something that can be solved by stuff being warmer."

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"It happens to be a problem that can mostly be solved by stuff being warmer, yes. How fast can you make stuff warmer?"

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"...Instantly? If it's in range? I might have some limit, I haven't tried making a volcano in my backyard or anything, but by and large anything in range I'm paying attention to is a temperature I find satisfactory moment to moment."

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"Great. In that case we might in fact be able to win the war fast enough to get you home on mortal time."

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"That would be nice."

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"Are there minimums? Maximums? If you find it satisfactory for the Enemy to be true-frozen, the temperature at which no molecules move, could you do that?"

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"I don't know. I don't have any limits I have run into but have not attempted particularly rigorous experiments because I'm risk-averse, primes can and do die screwing around with our powers, and I'm a very busy person."

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"Okay. I think this is a cause worth risking your life for, though obviously we shall do everything in our power to minimize the risk. The Enemy creates people magically bound to obey him and in constant torment, from birth which he uses to disfigure them. There are hundreds of thousands of them and there will be more if we delay."

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"Yes, that sounds like a serious problem all right."

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"He also gets stronger with time and will eventually destroy the whole of the world outside Valinor if we do not stop him."

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"Also bad, yes."

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"So let's start melting and refreezing this ice into a path."

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"I'm told I don't have to actually walk it? I am unreliable at walking even on friendlier surfaces than ice."

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"We're working on sledges as we speak, and can in any event carry you."

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"Okay. I cannot move water around in ways that aren't melting it so this might get complicated if there's slopes or anything, you got the fire prime not the water one, I'm happy to be directed by people who know more about fluid dynamics than I."

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"We'll be happy to consult."

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"If we're not in a hurry on a scale of the next couple days right now, then we should probably maintain something like our usual sleep schedule, which has us awake for another few hours and then sleeping for about eight. I can't maintain heat effects in my sleep - although I retain my general indifference to cold and my own body temperature - and I think you lot cope better with the current unadjusted temperature than Aleko will, so he needs priority insulation and probably also to sleep snuggled up to me so he still has his ears in the morning."

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"I like my ears."

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"Tent in the snow with a few people staying in it - and we do have songs for heat, they're just limited in effect - should keep him warm," he says, "and we'll throw additional blankets at the problem if it's not yet solved."

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"Songs?"

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"Magic songs that make it warm. They're not very efficient because heat wasn't a common problem in Tirion."

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"We do not have magic songs, that's interesting, but... Aleko's a really light sleeper and I'm not sure he can sleep through music."

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"I'd have to be really tired to sleep through you talking in your sleep, too, even if I'd freeze otherwise, but music I'd probably have to be practically dead of exhaustion."

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"We can have someone else sleep with you for body heat if that's not somehow culturally objectionable."

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"...am I just assuming you speak Welchin now just like that or what, um, anyway, it's a little weird but I can live with it if blankets are hard to come by?"

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"I don't speak very well yet. I am only speaking of present things, you will notice, and I have not attempted to use - several kinds of word forms. Blankets are not so scarce there are none among the whole host. I don't know if blankets will be sufficient for you because I don't know how much heat you need."

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"Blankets should do it if there's plenty of them."

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"Then we'll have those."

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"That is ridiculously impressive even without conjugating verbs, especially if you're going to retain much of the vocabulary later."

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"I think I retain and should be able to use all of the sentence forms you've demonstrated and certainly all of the words. Sentence forms I might have generalized wrongly and therefore retain wrongly."

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"Wow." She does not ask can I see .

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"I like languages. This was a treat."

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"I know some Soechin too but I literally studied it for a couple of years and am worse at it than you currently are at Welchin."

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"And everything around me does not adopt the temperature I desire. We all have our strengths."

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"True enough."

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"Let's see what can be done in a couple hours. Then you sleep?"

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"Sounds like a plan."

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So he accompanies them out onto the ice. A number of other people press in, a little curiously.

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"You want me to just melt along -" She outlines a path in fire. "And see how that goes?"

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"Yes, let's start with that. I also want to test melting the slopes -" naively? what's the word for 'without specific consideration'? - "to see how they refreeze but we can chart a flat pat through here and should probably do so."

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"'Naively'," she supplies, and then the ice in the path chosen melts.

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"Does it cost you any energy to make everyone you can see warm while you do it?"

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"Attention yes, energy no. Is the temperature I have going for Aleko fine for you too?"

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"Yes."

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Temperature for everyone within range of her heat sense, then.

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And the path ahead starts melting its way clear. 

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It's attention-consuming but not especially interesting. Oh well.

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"I wonder if magic songs could make it go faster or be more entertaining," he says.

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"I'm not sure how they'd do either, not being familiar with magic songs."

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"I wouldn't expect it to help unless your magic demands some mental resource on your part."

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"Just attention."

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"There are songs that heighten perception, make you think faster relative to the world?"

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"...That's very interesting. You're sure they're safe? I have less passive mental powers but I'm extremely paranoid about using them..."

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"They've been used for Years without incident but on Quendi, not humans."

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"I didn't detect any obvious structural difference except in sensory acuity when Tyelcormo was in range, but I'm not sure I'm prepared to trust that without knowing how the songs actually work."

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"Our magic creates -" localized? " effects that usually involve calling information forth from the song of creation, in one form or another. Our definition of information is very broad. Music magic is usually developed by experimentation. There are principles but they're complicated enough you can't predict effects well without testing them."

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"Localized," she supplies. "I'm not sure telling me it's the 'song of creation' adds useful information because I don't know what you're talking about there - how do you tell when a song is safe enough to test, when it's mind-affecting?"

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"Music magic can't do lasting effects. Whatever it is will stop when you stop singing. So it's safe enough to test no matter what you're doing."

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"Huh. I might want to try the songs you mentioned if that's a guaranteed general principle regardless of subject species."

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He glances at one of the other people in the vicinity. 

Not a guaranteed general principle, he says, but a guaranteed my-songs principle, species shouldn't have anything to do with it.

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Songs you sing or songs you compose?

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Compose. I like my head, and I have to play them thousands of times to get them sorted.

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Well, I think I'm sufficiently reassured, then.

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And he starts singing.

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Oooh.

That is not only very pretty, it makes it much easier to keep everybody in range warm and the path melting at once.

I like it.

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Thank you. I try.

 

Macalaure.

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Kiri.

"Path's melted a few inches deep to the edge of my range now. Does it look smooth enough that I should refreeze it?"

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"I think so."

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Now it is frozen again.

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Feanaro lets out a quietly envious sigh. "I am not even sure the Valar could do that. Lovely. More, or should you rest?"

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"I can do that again if you want to get me to the end of the path extant, I just can't go farther from here. I guess I could widen it, do you want it wider?"

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"...probably, I think the people in the rear have wagons."

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So she widens it.

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She now has an appreciative and delighted audience of Elves. 

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"I can do another one of these before I crash if someone can drag me to the end of all this very flat slippery ice in a timely manner."

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We don't have sledges yet but if you put up your hair I'd be happy to carry you, it'd be hardly any time at a run.

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...My hair?

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It's a cultural thing, it'd be weird to touch your hair.

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"Aleko, they are weird about hair for reasons, what on my person is best repurposed as a headscarf -?"

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"Uh, probably the sash?"

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So Kiri unties her sash and manages to stuff all her hair into it and tie it up on her head.

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And gets scooped up and carried down the ice path by Tyelcormo, whose thoughts are mostly about what a lovely ice path this is and how quickly they'll reach the other side and can she just superheat orcs' brains so they die painlessly.

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Yeah. I could do that if it seemed like a good idea.

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You can meet some first, see if there's a better way.

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Yeah. This is possibly a case where it is reasonable to try mind powers as the safer option.

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Orcs are - us. They're what happens if you raise an Elf in constant agony.

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I don't advertise the mind powers. A handful of people have come to me desperate on their own initiative and I haven't screwed up, yet. None of them were chronic pain sufferers but it doesn't seem in principle impossible. I might be able to fix it and if the default's killing them I might as well try.

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Definitely. What are the mind powers, exactly?

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I don't know exactly. My great-aunt was the last sweela prime, and she either lied about her powers or had different ones - she said she could detect lies, but if she could outright read minds, let alone if she did whenever someone got near, she didn't mention. And I can't detect lies past five feet and only as part of the general mindreading. But sometimes I try a thing and it works. I have not yet tried a thing and had it not work, but...

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Okay. Well, we'll be meeting orcs soon enough at this rate. Expect we'll keep you well back of the fighting.

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Within or without fire range of the opposing force?

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Up to you. We can take orcs, just not as cleanly.

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If there's likely to be arrow fire I could burn incoming arrows midair. Maybe not all of them but still.

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Then we should probably have you in range to do that. The fighting's honestly going to be a bit of a mess, there's never been a war in Elven history and few of us have ever even seen anyone die. We've been drilling but I don't think it's the same.

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Welce is really peaceful. It's been generations since there's been a war. - Orcs don't count towards 'Elves don't kill people'?

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No, they don't. They all serve the Enemy, there's no choice about it, at least not without powers like yours. And hopefully someday Mandos will fix them. But we do kill orcs.

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Mandos being the one who does not respect the private thought distinction?

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Mandos is the god of the dead.

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...and also the one who reads minds without permission?

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Yup.

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Lovely. Meanwhile when I was eight and suddenly came over all on fire I went on a sharply restricted hug diet until my family had time to get used to the idea.

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I'm not a fan of Mandos. But I think he does try to heal the dead, so it's better than nothing -

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I won't be able to do anything for an orc without being in mind-stuff-range either and it's probably better than ceasing to exist when one dies but it is a bad way to run an afterlife.

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Yeah. And we're going to lose a lot of people to it. Hopefully not for too long.

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Nod.

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He doesn't say anything else but he keeps thinking about it. Worth it, of course. It has to be.

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She doesn't comment further on his thoughts. Just finishes refreezing the second stretch of path. There.

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Great. Back so you can sleep? They'll do like five to seven miles a day, at this rate, three weeks to cross the Ice.

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Yes. I will usually be able to do more than this in a row, I just landed when it was evening for me.

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Two weeks, maybe. No problem.

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Supplies'll hold that long and everything?

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We have supplies for half a Year. We were starting to think the ice actually impassible, in which case we'd have been in real trouble since I don't know if we could backtrack all the way to Alqualonde and persuade the Teleri or invent seafaring boats and build enough of them fast enough. Now it''ll be no problem.

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Persuade the who to do what?

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Teleri: Elves who live by the shore. They have boats that could cross the ocean safely. They spent Ages developing them and I think it's at least a little difficult, enough boats to get an army across an ocean. We were going to beg their help if we couldn't make it across the Ice.

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Makes sense. We've got ships that could do that but I don't know how to make them and I do know how to melt stuff.

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This way's definitely faster.

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So where am I sleeping? And where's Aleko going to be, since you can probably heap him under enough blankets that he doesn't need to try to sleep through me mumbling all night?

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Two tents in the snow, coming up.

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It seems weird that snow would help.

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It's an insulator. I know what you mean, though.

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I'm sure I'd have a better sense of it if it snowed more where I live.

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It was never cold in Valinor either.

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I feel like at some point I need a more systematic history lesson.

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Sure thing. Bedtime story or save it for while you're working tomorrow?

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The latter, I think. In case it's very long.

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Alright. Good night.

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Good night. And she says good night to her brother and they both go to sleep.

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And he's warm enough. And in the morning the Elves have lembas and are eager to extend the road.

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Lembas is nice! Kiri will road-extend all day and relay Aleko's idle desire for ice skates.

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Elves will immediately get to work on ice skates. Least they can do, really. They'll also sing her along on the road-extending.

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It helps!

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And does she want a history of this world?

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Yes please.

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Elves awakened by Cuivienen, in the dark, and lived there until the Enemy started kidnapping some to torture; eventually the Valar found out, fought the Enemy in a worldshaking battle, and invited the Elves to Valinor where they'd be safe. Some of them accepted.

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Only some of them? Were the Valar's deficiencies clear in advance?

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People were more afraid it was a trap. It wasn't, or not that kind. A very very gilded prison. She is peppered with memories.

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It's really pretty, admittedly.

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They sigh. 

"Elves actually don't cope well when it's not pretty,"  Fëanáro says. "It won't be our first order of business in the war but it'll have to be our second one."

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"Don't cope well? What do you mean?"

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"Our" souls? "command our bodies, and if they're not well we suffer physically and mentally - there are traumas and griefs that kill us without damaging us, and Elves will die in captivity  - unless the Enemy magically prevents that - and if things aren't pretty we do not function."

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"Souls. That's... interesting."

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"Luckily we are very pretty and nature is very pretty so we often cope even without building pretty cities."

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"Convenient."

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"And we build very pretty cities! And the SIlmarils are unspeakably pretty. We're going to be just fine."

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"Is the trip across the ice going to be long and unpretty enough that it would make sense for me to take occasional breaks from paving to do lightshows?"

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"Is that a thing you can do? Yes, probably."

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"I can do fire and I can make it go where I want, although I don't know what you'll think of my artistry."

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"I imagine everyone will be impressed by your capabilities, regardless of how pretty the results. And we do have Macalaure along for morale."

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"All right, let me know when would be good."

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"Perhaps in a week's time when everyone tires of marvelling at the roads you're making. If that works for you. Do you require diversions for wellbeing?"

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"I won't be able to read any of your books," she shrugs. "I'm not going to disintegrate for the lack of them, though."

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"I can translate some if you teach me your alphabet."

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"Sure." She's been using letters of fire to do processing in her cipher, but here's the actual Welchin alphabet, behold.

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He asks questions about it for about ten minutes and then asks if he can work with her brother for vocabulary as he translates.

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"Sure, why not. I'm probably like sort of okay at the thoughts thing now, even."

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"Probably, but I'd prefer to talk aloud so I can practice your language."

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"Yeah but if I have to say a word you don't know you have to do the mindready thing."

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"You can use other words to describe it, and I can send you candidates?"

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"I guess that works."

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So they start translating a book from Quenya. He works very quickly and has astonishing handwriting.

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"Dang," says Aleko. "I bet Kiri would have really complimentary things to say about your brain if she got a look at it, you kinda go a mile a minute."

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"She can look at it once I've established the precedent that it's unremarkable if someone declines," he says distractedly. Translate: symphony? articulation? enraptured?

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"Symphony, articulation, enraptured. She expects people to decline, I go around with her in crowded places so if she trips she doesn't trip into range of anybody but me..."

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"My people'd do anything I asked of them and most things I merely passively expect of them. Especially if it looks like a way of proving loyalty."

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"...what's that have to do with anything?"

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"So if I and all my children were comfortable in her presence and said what we really do think which is that there's nothing to hide from allies here, people'd feel like they ought to be comfortable, like they were doing something suspect if they weren't."

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"Well, that'd freak her the heck out. And crowd her, there's lots of you."

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"Yes. So. Here I am, though I don't mind if she reads my mind, so no one thinks they ought to let her."

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"Okay."

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"The book will take us a couple days; are you going to tire of this?"

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"Don't really have anything else to do," shrugs Aleko. "So, like, yes, but not more than I would tire of staring at ice all the time? I can't fill all day with ice skating my ankles would go into open rebellion."

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"What do you do at home?"

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"Draw, help Kiri with stuff because she's got this heavy political job, go into town or Chialto and do stuff there, we have a little brother and I hang out with him, we have parents and I spend time with them, I have friends..."

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"You're welcome to draw? Can't help much with the rest."

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"Yeah, can I have some paper?"

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He can. There's spare from translating the book. 

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Aleko doodles. His subject matter is fanciful and creative and his technical ability is pretty okay.

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 Fëanáro does not dispense compliments. Macalaure comments to Aleko at one point that his father has never had anything nicer to say about his singing than 'people will be very impressed'.

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"...well, I'm a people who's very impressed."

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"Oh, I wasn't looking for musical compliments, I was apologizing on his behalf for his failure to notice that the drawings are very nice and that you're being very helpful on the translation project."

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"Oh. Thank you."

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"You are very welcome."

 

And Fëanáro, who apparently ignored this exchange, has another barrage of translation questions.

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Which Aleko answers quite patiently, doodling all the while.

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And time comes for the two of them to sleep again.

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Which they do!

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Barrelling across the Ice this way, they reach the opposite short in two weeks and a half. The host stretches out behind them for a hundred miles; not everyone is moving so fast. And they encounter orcs.  Fëanáro has ordered some brought back alive for Kiri to have a go at.

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Delightful.

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And here is an orc. They're - shorter than Elves, a tad grotesque, but not appallingly so. They're trembling. The Elves look unhappy.

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Kiri sighs. And steps into range of one.

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Have to kill the Elves have to kill the Elves if there's no way to kill the Elves at least have to hate the Elves, and they do hate them, and they're terrified. 

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"I might need to know more about how this oath stuff works in principle."

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"...when we give our word it binds us,"  Fëanáro says. "If they've sworn to not do something they can't do it, if they've sworn to do something they can delay but at great cost and eventually they end up doing it."

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"Right now they can't kill you, and they're dwelling on it but it doesn't seem to be directly harming them..."

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"If you cannot make progress towards a goal you've sworn to achieve, the oath is at rest."

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"I might be able to do that. I might mangle something horribly the first few times I try but keeping them around alive is... not really viable is it."

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"No. You think you can - render them incapable of harming Elves?"

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"Maybe."

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"Are they in pain, were we right about that?"

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"If they are they aren't thinking about it right now, too scared."

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"Okay. And we can't very well make them less scared...Do you want to try it?"

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"It is not going to be the most fun I have ever had but I don't have anything lined up that I'd rather do."

And she looks at the orc and looks harder for what exactly the orc has sworn -

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To be an orc, and pursue orc greatness, and hate Elves and kill Elves and bring Elves to Melkor, to serve and obey Melkor.

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Well, she's got nothing if not license to experiment, here.

She will leave the first two bits alone.

Killing Elves or bringing them anywhere (because presumably Melkor can move around and cause various locations to be where Elves are to be brought), nope, can't do it - can't even leave a self-defense loophole there this thing is fucking insidious - hating them, no, no opinions south of, let's say vague annoyance, about Elves as a species - she will have to see if this compels them to find reasons to individually hate every Elf they run into or if it'll just work - annnnd - unable to hold any actionably confident opinion on the opinions or orders of Melkor even if he is standing right there saying them over and over again?

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There's a moment of silence.

The orc is terrified, but just terrified. It doesn't hate them and it isn't going to kill them - arrange their deaths? it can arrange their deaths - but how -

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Nope you may not do that either no.

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Now just terrified.

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"I think this one is de-oathed now but still very scared."

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"Well, if it can't hurt us -"

It can hurt them, just non-lethally! It has lots of ideas from Angband on how to do this.

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"Hurting you sans lethality is not in the oath so I didn't cut it out how crippled do you want it -"

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"Can't do more than return any injury dealt to them, and only that in self-defense?"

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"We'll see if that just leaves it inclined to provoke you until you stab it or something but okay -"

Prod.

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"Elves are not very likely to respond to provocation with stabbing, particularly stabbing someone magically constrained from hurting them. Though I guess that doesn't have to be likely to be a way the oath ends up channeled."

 

The orc is not brainstorming provocations. If it did get stabbed, though, it'd be bound to stab back.

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"Well, it will definitely stab you if you stab it, but it's not presently thinking about ways to get you to stab it."

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"Great," he says. "That - seems good enough. No?"

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"I don't know. It still seems - motivated unpleasantly? It can't hate Elves as a group much anymore but it could hate individual ones, it can't bring you anywhere but it could try to send you places, it can't hold on to any opinions about what Melkor wants of it but if there's something it doesn't need to believe in order to carry out it could maybe do that... I don't think it can be relied upon to volunteer to help me make it safer to be around, which means we have to anticipate it, which means there is some chance of error."

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"So. We need a more elegant solution. But not something as strong as constraining them never to act against our interests, presumably..."

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"Or maybe there's such a thing as a more cooperative orc - I mean, I'm not an Elf, they don't have to hate me -"

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"Right. Probably. Though the process might make even cooperatively-inclined ones less so..."

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"I was thinking if I could interact with one without - messing with its head right away, and without any Elves around - and it was the right orc, I don't know how much they vary - maybe I could get somewhere with that."

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"Sure. Do you think you can catch it yourself? Want us to catch it and then you walk over and order us away?"

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"I don't have any good catching methods other than 'threaten with fire', which I don't think will really help; you may have to tie one up for me."

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"Okay. We can do that with a few until you get a sense of how much they vary in personality. If they do."

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"Thank you.

 

Orcs are psychological weapons as much as foot soldiers. For the Enemy."

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Nod.

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And they head back out. Take a few more orcs alive. Separate them, tie them up, leave them there, retreat out of the presumed range of Orc sight and hearing.

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Kiri sighs and approaches one.

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Cold. Why didn't the Elves just kill her outright- hate Elves- who's this she's not an Elf.

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Well, it doesn't have to be cold, anyway.

She doesn't know their language, communication's going to be awkwardly one-way; maybe she'll be able to pick up a few words by mindreading and say something back.

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Not cold. The not Elf is just standing there. Better to provoke it into killing her, on the assumption it'll make it quicker than the elves would?

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Kiri sits down nice and nonthreateningly on the ground. (Now where did the orc get the idea that the Elves would kill it slowly...?)

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Stories told to Orc children at home, by devoted parents and boasting older siblings and occasionally by the protectors of the orcs in their dazzling immortal forms. Elves will kill you slowly. Elves will kill your children.

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Elves will kinda have to kill your children if Kiri can't figure something out, ugh.

This orc does seem to have a different personality, though, that's promising...

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Elves want all orcs annihilated. Elves think orcs are better off dead. Elves hate orcs. Orcs hate Elves. So it is. And here is not an Orc not an Elf - will it let her go? Maybe?

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"Maybe," she attempts to pronounce.

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It can talk? Was it talking to her? Does it speak her language? 

"Hello," she says hesitantly. Well, if it might not kill her.

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"Hello," Kiri repeats.

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"What are you?"

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"Human."

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"What are human."

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"Not Elves," says Kiri.

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"I know you're not an Elf. You're not tall and you don't have the hair or the ears and you aren't hurting me."

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Kiri opens her mouth, makes a helpless gesture, she doesn't speak the language not really. "Not hurting you," she echoes.

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"There are Elves nearby and they will kill me, will you help?"

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...Wobbly gesture.

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"Will they hurt you if you help?"

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...Wobbly gesture. "Maybe." For certain categories of help. Need more words, need you to ask better questions...

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"If you let me go, the Elves will hurt you?"

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"Maybe." If she does it too soon.

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"You aren't strong enough to fight them?"

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"I am..." Wobble again.

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"Then you don't have to let them hurt you!"

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"I don't have to let you hurt them," Kiri says.

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"They're Elves, I hate Elves and kill them."

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Nod. "I don't have to let you."

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"Elves are bad."

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"You -" Ugh, unidirectional communication with a person whose thoughts are deliberately constrained is hard. "You hate them," she emphasizes.

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"I hate them because they're Elves."

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"I don't hate them."

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"But they'll hurt you if you help us, doesn't that make you hate them?"

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"I -" Frustrated gesture. ...She reverts to Welchin in the hopes that suddenly being incomprehensible will get across the sentiment if not the details of "I can't actually speak your language and it makes it very hard to be precise about anything complicated I want to communicate that you haven't happened to think of".

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It doesn't understand her? But it seemed to understand her. How to make it understand...

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"I understand, I don't -" She taps her mouth.

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That does not make much sense. 

"Okay. I can teach you? Or tell you things? But the Elves might come back and kill us. At least me."

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Headshake. "They - I don't have to let you, they don't have to hate you."

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"You mean they don't swear to?"

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"They don't swear to."

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"So then they have a choice and they do it anyway. They could just go home, they have a choice, they don't have to attack us."

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"You don't have a choice."

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"We don't."

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"I hate that."

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"So tell them to go away. Then there's no fighting."

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"I hate that you don't have a choice, anyway."

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"We'd hate them even if we had a choice, they kill us."

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"They didn't kill you," Kiri points out. "They brought me."

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"So they can kill me slower, later. That's what Elves do. They're evil. All of them."

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Headshake. "They brought me. I -" She taps herself on the head. "I understand. Them, you."

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"They kill us. They kill children. They kill everyone they see."

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This isn't getting anywhere fast.

The orc isn't thinking about being in pain but maybe it's just really accustomed? Kiri goes looking.

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The orc is, in fact, in pain, and regards this as a normal fact of life. 

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Well, it is going to stop now.

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The orc feels - numb. All over. It is weird. It is - sort of good, but very very weird. The orc curls up in a ball because it can't feel its limbs.

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...Kiri doesn't have the vocabulary to say anything reassuring. She waits.

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"Did you do that?"

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"Yes."

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"What did you do? Did you do it on purpose? Why?"

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"I did it on purpose - I don't have -" She taps her mouth again.

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"You are very strange. I - that was good. I think. I am not used to it but I think I'll think it was good once I am. Why?"

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"I thought it was good," she says, "and I don't hate you."

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"But you're going to let the Elves kill me?"

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"I don't have to let them kill you. I don't have to let you kill them."

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"Elves and orcs will always kill each other. That's just the way it is. They will kill us until we're all dead, we'll kill them until they're all dead. You have to choose a side."

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"I don't have to. Help me."

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"How am I supposed to help you?"

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Come on guess Kiri only has so many words. "I - the good thing, I can - the way it is isn't."

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"You want to find a way for Elves and orcs not to fight that doesn't mean taking sides. The only one is for the Elves to go back where they came from. Then you can teach how to stop hurting, that's nice, but it won't fix Elves and orcs fighting."

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"I can't teach how. It's just me. They don't swear; you swear but - but I -" Words dammit! "I don't have to let you."

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"If it's just you there are too many orcs. You can't help us all."

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"Maybe," Kiri sighs. "But maybe I can help you."

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"I want help. I don't think you can - I can't stop hating Elves or killing them or taking them to Melkor..."

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"I can."

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"...then why don't you?"

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"I -" uuuuugh. Can you bring me the one I worked on before?

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They can, and do. The new one hisses and spits at the Elves as they guide him over.

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"I won't let them hurt you," she tells the new one.

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Silence.

Then the orcs start speaking very rapidly to each other. "What is she?"

"Human. I don't know. I don't know if we have orders -"

"I don't think we have any orders."

"What? We definitely do, kill the Elves, report anything unusual -"

"I don't have those orders."

"Yes, you do."

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"No he doesn't. I - I didn't let him, I -" She makes a helpless gesture. "I have to do it good, help me."

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"You can just - not let us do things? Like an oath but stronger?"

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Nod.

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"Then if you didn't let us - think of Elves any differently than we'd think of any other person, or maybe even be able to tell whether people were Elves..."

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"You think that would be good?"

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"No. I want to kill Elves, I don't want to have Elves all around me not knowing. I think it would work. We could still hate Elves who deserved it, but we'd hate them for reasons that'd make us hate an orc too."

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Nod. "And orders?"

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"I don't like obeying Melkor. I'd like to not have to do that."

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"Is how he doesn't have to good?" Kiri indicates the already-tweaked orc.

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"How doesn't he have to?"

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"I -" She taps her mouth again, spreads her hands. Talk to him, he speaks the language.

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"You don't have to follow Melkor's orders?"

 

"I told you, Melkor hasn't any orders!"

"And I told you what they were!"

"Those aren't any likelier than anything else to be Melkor's orders."

She giggles. "That'd work, yes."

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Kiri giggles too. Okay.

And now New Orc cannot identify Elves or hold actionably confident opinions about Melkor.

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"This is sort of terrifying," she says. "I prefer it to being dead but you are really scary."

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"Yes," sighs Kiri. "I think it's terrifying too but I prefer it to you being dead."

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"Can all humans do that? Also you should make him not be in pain."

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"Not all humans can do that. And yes I should." She does. "There."

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"The Elves are still going to kill us, unless you stop them."

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"They don't hate you," Kiri reiterates. "They brought you to me so I could -" handwave "be scary so they don't have to kill you."

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"...and they're not going to kill us anyway? What about the ones who don't know you were scary?"

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"The Elves who brought you know I'm scary. Other Elves..." Uncertain gesture.

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"There are lots of Elves and most of them will kill us."

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Kiri sighs. I've revised both these two, if somebody wants to come close the communication gap. They're worried that Elves who do not know how scary I am and what I have done will kill them anyway.

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I can try to learn their language? That's a valid concern. I don't know who else lives here but I'm not their King.

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I've got a few words but only the ones they've happened to think, and your mindreading is much politer and more bidirectional than mine, it seems like my editing powers are limited pretty much only by my own timidity but I don't know what would happen if I tried to use them communicatively and there's an alternative...

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He approaches. Here we are. Hello, orcs, have you been introduced to Kiri? I'm Fëanáro, King of these people, and we won't kill you and can tell others not to. They might anyway. Do you know anywhere you'd be safer?

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Kiri steps out of range of the orcs.

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You okay? He asks while continuing to converse with them.

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I'm kind of scary, she sighs.

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Means we'll wrap the war up faster and get you home. Power makes people more able to be good, if they're good. 

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I know. I do think this was better than killing them. I didn't even make any mistakes, just - it's not wholly comfortable.

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I wish the Valar thought that way.

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Yeah.

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And he learns some of the Orc language, quite eagerly, and then grimaces. We're just going to have to make contact with everyone and hope they trust me, there's nowhere to put them...

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Do you need my help with that...? I guess there's no local reason to expect fire and mind powers to be connected so demonstrations are dicey.

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People will think you're a Maia. They might obey you for that reason, but it's not ideal.

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Not really, they'll have expectations of me that won't hold up if they think that.

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The Maiar are spectacularly unreliable. But I agree it's not a good solution.

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Even if you don't know the people around here your guess will be better than mine what will go over reasonably well.

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I'll ask Maitimo, he says as if that resolved it.

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I'm not sure I've met him.

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She hasn't. Maitimo's been unobtrusively avoiding her.

I'll tell him to come.

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Okay. Does this revision seem to be holding up okay, should I go replicate it on the others?

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I think so, yes.

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Deep breath. Okay.

Off she goes to each other orc and she repeats the process.

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Their reactions vary, a lot, but when another Elf comes over, giving Kiri a wide berth, they don't glare at him.

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She does not close the distance with the Elf, that would be rude and unjustified by conditions of warfare. This is all of them? she asks Fëanáro.

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We can go get more, should we? Maitimo, it's only five feet.

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Maybe give it more than that if I'm not sitting down, she says, because of my balance. I'm not running down any scarce resources other than time and, I suppose, unimproved orcs, repeating this.

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We don't want there to be more than we can handle if it somehow slips, he says. I can have a few more caught, though.

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You know your capacity, she agrees.

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The new arrival smiles at her. Hello. Maitimo. I have on occasion sworn to keep people's secrets so I'm going to stay  over here, but I want to reassure you and the orcs that we'll talk to everyone who needs to know and see that they are safe.

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It is absolutely reasonable to avoid going near me even if only by default, Kiri says emphatically. Thank you.

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It must be difficult, though, he says, avoiding everyone as carefully as needed to be responsible, and I commend the effort and world ordinarily desire to lessen it. 

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I have practice. And Aleko helps.

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Him I've met! I like him! You're lucky to have him!

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I am. Best twin. He copes way better than I would with having a mindreading sibling, hands down.

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Anyway, the orcs are as safe as politicking can make them, and I know how limited a reassurance that is.

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That's good. Thank you.

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My pleasure. What exactly did you do? So I can explain it at need?

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They can no longer identify Elves - you could literally tell them you are an Elf and they could not use that to conclude that you're an Elf - and they can't hold opinions about what Melkor's orders or wishes are.

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That would do it, I guess. Until the Enemy changes the oaths.

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Yeah. I'd have to think of something else if we start finding orcs with different oaths.

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I expect this avenue of attack did not even occur to him and he'll make our lives harder. Just means we need work fast, though.

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Well. Let me know if there are problems that can be solved with fire.

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He laughs. You will be the first to hear about them.

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She briefly ignites her hair, then turns it off again, and goes back to sit with Aleko.

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The Elves go out for more orcs. It takes a few hours.

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When they bring in orcs Kiri revises the orcs.

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"We're scouting places to build a city," Fëanáro tells her when she finishes. "How should you change the strategic considerations?"

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"...I don't know what the default strategic considerations are. Uh, you know my range with the fire stuff, it applies in all directions..."

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"Next to a lake: advantage or disadvantage for you? Can you heat metal so we don't need forges?"

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"Lakes are fine. I have a pond near one of my houses. And yes I can, limits of attention and my lack of expertise at forging metal apply."

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"We'll have forges but not bother with fuel, then, which will help us tremendously. Thank you."

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"You're welcome."

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"Made contact with some locals. Told them not to assume unarmed orcs are hostile and to use osanwe to check. Can't do much better than that, frustratingly."

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"It's something. - these orcs probably should be kept well away from Melkor."

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"Yes. It'd be nice to have your capabilities unknown to the Enemy."

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"Yep. Um. Let me know if you need that enforced, if they're not already cooperative enough - I can't really talk to them, they can talk to me but it's not enough if they don't think of what I happen to want to convey."

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"The Enemy can read minds too, I do not think that would suffice to keep the secret from him."

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"I meant enforcing them not going to him."

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"I don't think they will voluntarily, don't think they like him, but it might be worth it anyway."

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"If they don't like him they might agree to having it blocked, that would make me feel better. I'd only done tiny bits of active mind magic before I got here and it was always - addicts and stuff like that, people who were desperate enough to ask and take the risk -"

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"What happens if they're under magic compulsion and get captured by other orcs and taken back, do you know?"

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"I don't know. No more than one person has mind magic at a time, my world, it seems to work differently per prime - and neither us nor the soul magic primes have ever used it enough for a conflict between the two to come up in recorded history, so I don't have even a loose idea of how it stands up to conflict from other users of mental stuff. My blocks might win, new oaths might take precedence, he might come up with a way to route around it... I don't know."

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"Perhaps there's an ethical test - you can mind-block an Elf not to, say, say the phrase 'purple pineapple ' and then they can swear to obey orders for an hour and we can see what gets precedence."

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"I guess the fact that I didn't accidentally mindwipe an orc suggests that this is not a staggeringly unsafe test if someone really wants to try it."

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"Is that a possible failure mode?"

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"I don't know my great aunt told everybody she could only detect lies and I've been really timid."

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"Did she know you'd get it next?"

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"I was the obvious next candidate - right family, right personality, right random blessing - but she was not expecting to die when I was eight and hadn't troubled to prep me for it at all. The torz prime took me as a cautionary tale and started involving his obvious-next-candidate granddaughter more in advance but I was on my own."

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"I'm impressed you resisted the urge to experiment. I suppose there's no Valar to undo deadly errors."

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"I woke up in the middle of the night because my bed was on fire and if I got near anybody I could feel everything they were thinking, it freaked me out, I experimented with the fire but making a mistake in somebody's head was not acceptable, I went a long time before I was confident any of my family members were really comfortable enough that it was okay for them to hug me -"

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"I am very sorry. That sounds awful."

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"Getting it wrong would have been worse," she sighs. "But eventually I made a friend who didn't think anything of being in my range and Aleko got jealous -" She shrugs. "And our little brother got used to it, and our parents got used to it, although I let them close the distance for me. And the other primes were fairly relaxed about it, though one of the ones now still has reservations." The one she has a crush on. Alas. Not that this is going to come up anytime soon around here.

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"There are five? All pretty new to the jobs?"

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"I've been prime for nine years and as of recently I've had the job longer than any of the others. The last Dochenza got herself killed trying to fly and she hadn't had the job long, I overlapped with her predecessor until he died of old age; Alser Frothen died of old age too; and the Serlast and Lalindar primes were both younger and healthier but had hated each other for years and decided to do so more violently one day; mercifully it didn't escalate into a family feud."

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"It sounds like your magic is a very destabilizing force, honestly."

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"What do you mean?"

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" Giving five people extraordinarily powerful magic and then switching who every century - I'm honestly astonished monarchy works at all in a world where people die routinely - it's a miracle you are not constantly at war."

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"Well, the monarchy only sort of works, our current king is lousy, but at least we'll be rid of him sooner or later and Prince Isten can take over, he's going to do a better job. Primes also tend not to use our magic very much and since it does vary person to person it's likely I got an unusually powerful dose of sweela magic."

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"Ah, that makes sense. Otherwise the person with your power and less restraint would very quickly wind up ruling. If the current prince is good we can just make him immortal, would that do?"

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"It also helps that the primes ratify the monarchs as they step up and the process renders them immune to our magic; I'm worried Isten will have trouble assuming the throne with me missing if his father dies before I get back. But immortalizing him sounds fine to me as long as nothing dreadful happens in the interim."

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"I don't know how long the interim will be; we don't know much about the capabilities of the Enemy."

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"And he's still very young and might have a different personality as an adult," she shrugs.

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"That is part of why a monarchy of mortals seems so hazardous."

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"Well, an anything of mortals has a similar problem."

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"So we'll cure mortality, and then you can find something best suited."

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"If you actually manage to get me home before there's any more turnover of primes I might advocate for oligarchy-of-primes. It's been proposed, but the current set might do particularly well with it."

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"It's what I'd expect to arise, honestly. What makes them well-suited?"

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"Sarelle and Ekador are both brilliant, so am I, Patience and Loel cover people skills in sufficiently different ways that I expect most people would get along well with at least one of them even if us non-people-person primes put them off, and we all get along with each other very well and have strong magic and the inclination to creatively apply it."

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"That does sound perfect," he says. "The prince won't object?"

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"I don't think he would, but I'm relying on private information for that assessment."

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He nods. "We generally don't have turnover, politically. This is the first time a king died and it's been disastrous."

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"Was there even a clear succession?"

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"There was, but it was assumed the King'd be retiring when they came up and people didn't feel any obligation to abide by them."

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"Oh dear."

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"I just want to win the war, and I think my half-brother wants the same thing at least enough to pretend there's no dispute. And as long as his people stay out of my way I don't think it'll be an acute crisis."

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"Isten's half-brother disappeared and has been generally presumed dead, so there's no dispute there, although there could be if something happened to Isten."

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"Or if he resurfaces? That actually seems quite concerning."

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"That I'm not worried about for private information reasons."

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"Ah, okay. 

The political crisis here will probably either be obviated by the war or Maitimo'll sort it. Hopefully. Half-brothers add lots of complications but mine is well-intentioned."

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"That should help."

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"At least here, having a real Enemy is quite clarifying on silly political disputes."

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"Hopefully."

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Father, Maitimo says to both of them , you're making her nervous because now she's implicitly taking a side in a disagreement she doesn't have enough information to evaluate.

But I told her she didn't need to do that.

She's powerful enough that her presence is.

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So if telling people they needn't have any interest in our succession dispute and it's peaceful anyway doesn't suffice to communicate that, Fëanáro says irritably, what exactly does?

In the general case I don't think you can, he says, I could devote myself full time to ensuring there are no political consequences of Kiri landing here but there's only the one of me and we want to make diplomatic contact with the locals so we can convince them not to shoot orcs on sight. In the specific case she's got the telepathy and you could probably step close enough for her to verify that politics has not crossed your mind in a month and using her for political advantage is totally uninteresting to you. He's smiling at his father fondly. She might be mildly baffled. 

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You may if you like.

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So he does.

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"...ee," she giggles.

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"Hmmm?"

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"...there is not really a nonweird way to say that you have a pretty mind."

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"Thank you," he says delightedly. "I knew it could create pretty things but I don't have a way to look at it directly."

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"I could maybe osanwë you what it's like? If you want? It's - like fire."

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He looks extremely delighted. "Yes, please do."

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So she osanwës a weird synaesthetic impression of the shape of his mind. She gets all the information mediated through her heat sense, which is itself not much like seeing infrared or like feeling warmth in the conventional sense - too omnidirectional, too fine-grained, too filtered through her indifference to whether she's on fire or in a blizzard. The result is confusing but definitely complicated and very pretty.

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He sighs in delight. Thank you. Are they all like that? Can you show me others, if I get their leave?

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They're all different and yours is unusually pretty. If people want impressions of their minds bounced around I don't object.

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Maitimo-

- no, he says cheerfully. One of us needs to have secrets occasionally. Kiri can have my oath if I'm making her nervous.

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You're not making me nervous enough to want anything like that!

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You're very pretty, Father, Maitimo says amusedly when Fëanáro presumably bounces his. Are there typically familial resemblances?

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I haven't actually read that many people! He doesn't strongly resemble Tyelcormo? My brothers and parents are all different from me and each other, I guess Jayce is sort of like Renny but that may just be because they're both elay and the rest of us are all different elements.

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I think we'd also all be different elements, Fëanáro says, based on how you described them on the Ice.

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It's generally hard to identify foreigners' elements - even people from non-Welce countries in my world - but you at least are obvious.

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He raises an eyebrow.

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I said you're like fire, she points out. I couldn't tell by looking like I could have if you were Welchin but reading you you're obviously as sweela as I am.

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Well, that's obviously the best one.

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I think so too.

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You need to read people to see that? Maitimo says curiously. 

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With Welchin people I can tell by looking, if I'm trying to identify somebody in a crowd to someone else I can say 'the coru woman in the hat' or something - it's harder out of the country. And I avoided reading random Malinquans and Soechins and Thiyecines so I don't know how reliably I could sort those. And even looking at Welchin people is not fully reliable; some people are something with a "crown" of something else, which means people will reliably mistake them for their crowned element on a superficial acquaintance.

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That's pretty cool; I wish we could learn to see it.

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I don't know if you can or not. It may be partly about people wearing their elemental colors and otherwise obeying stereotypes, but there could be some subtle magic component to it.

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If there's magic I can probably eventually do it with our magic, Fëanáro says, but there are more pressing priorities.

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If you could copy arbitrary magic it'd be more useful to copy blessings.

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Arbitrary magic with a local effect, he says, and 'not impossible in principle' may still mean it takes centuries. But blessings  will be worthy investigating in case they take less.

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I should see if they still work for Aleko and me, actually.

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How can you tell? Can an observer?

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If they work and I go through a whole set of them I won't lay hands on a 'grace' until it's the only thing left.

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Bad luck on that front, huh?

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I am not graceful. But it's a good test, I just need to draw all the symbols on bits of paper and put them in a bowl and pull them out, maybe a few times to be sure.

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And paper, pens, ink and a bowl are swiftly acquired.

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Kiri writes out all the symbols, one of each, and goes pick pick pick through them until:

"Yep." She picks up the last one. "This is grace."

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The Elves are delighted and fascinated. And then scouts return with more information and they turn to choosing a location for a camp.

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Kiri starts trying to draw blessings for Elves.

"...weird."

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What's up?

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One can draw blessings for other people. I'm trying to draw blessings for locals and I got my own birth blessings and then I got Aleko's and then I got the non-elemental blessings. The magic on blessings isn't overt enough for me to just literally fail to pick things up so I think this might be what it looks like when it's not working.

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So we're unblessable?

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Apparently. I wish I'd tried this for some non-Welchin humans.

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There are supposed to be Men in this world somewhere.

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I meant ones from my world, who'd be working on more of the same underlying rules about magic, so I could isolate how much it matters to be from Welce in particular.

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All the primes are always Welce natives?

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They're always related to the relevant family - like, our great aunt was the last Ardelay prime - and I don't know if they can be born outside the country or not; I found two missing primes outside the country but they left after they were born and had birth blessings.

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Huh. What restricts it to that country? Have blessings always been a thing, do you know?

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Don't know, in either case. Maybe if somebody who blessings worked for left Welce and blessed a baby the baby would have blessings work for them, the borders might not do anything except define where the cultural habit tends to live. If there are any babies around whose parents want me to bless them I can do that.

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Elves don't have children in wartime but that's very kind of you.

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It might have to be within three hours of birth, too.

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We'll just have to wonder, then, there won't be new births until peacetime.

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Anyway, if you think of any uses for the minor divinatory powers of blessing draws that apply solely to myself and Aleko let us know.

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Can you use it to get a guess at whether your magic works on Ainur?

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I suppose I could try. Tell me a little more about Ainur? Specific questions like that are sometimes best addressed with a limited blessing set.

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We're mostly interested in whether it'd work on Moringotho. Ainur are the powers that created our world. He sends some images. They vary, a lot.

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Hm. Kiri rummages for "triumph" and "endurance" and "creativity" and "luck". She shakes them up and focuses and picks one.

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She has an intrigued audience.

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She draws 'creativity'. ...and translates the symbols for her audience. "If I'd got triumph I'd think it would work normally by default, luck if I did it at the right time or on the right target or trying the right things, endurance if it wasn't going to work - this one I think I can get it to work but I have to do something non-obvious to make it work."

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Fëanáro translates. "Huh," he says, "okay. Well. We can be creative."

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They choose a location. It's farther south, near a lake, nestled in the mountains. There are locals and Feanaro sets himself to learning their language. They throw themselves at building walls.

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Kiri will heat things on demand.

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In that case they can have forges up and running much sooner.

They've been there for six days when they are attacked from all directions. Hundreds of thousands of enemies.

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...that's. that's way too many. what.

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Well. They can cycle people in and out. They can build walls while they fight so there's somewhere for people cycled out to sleep. They can sleep behind walls of the dead who are piling up at their feet.

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Kiri has never ever killed somebody before and she knows that every single one of these enemies is fixable if she had a moment of safety near them and there's so many

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Well, they're not going to be managing her feelings, though they don't tell her to fight either. They are pretty thoroughly distracted.

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that's okay, she can manage her own feelings

and after a bit of delay

orcs start dropping in swathes.

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Well, that'll take some pressure off them. More energy for building walls, and building some wholly defended areas where they can get the civilians safely. 

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okay good.

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Twelve days. Orcs come at them for twelve days.

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Well then she will get some sleep in between mass slaughter.

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When the orcs stop coming the Elves decide to charge Angband.

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That sounds like kind of a terrible idea and maybe if Kiri looks really shellshocked nobody will invite her along.

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They in fact will not. They are also pretty shell-shocked, and sleep-deprived, and numb with horror and rage at the Enemy.

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Why are they even charging Angband anyway.

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Because he sent all the orcs he had at them here, and maybe it's weaker now than it can reasonably be expected to be, and if they can end this now they have to try.

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Okay but why now and not in like a week or something.

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The Enemy will have had time to regroup.

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So will the Elves.

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The King has in fact already charged off at Angband. That was probably not wise but the sentiment is, looking at the site of this massacre, very understandable.

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Kinda yeah.

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The Elves ride off.

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Kiri stays behind being ineffectually soothed by her brother.

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They're gone a long time.

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Is there a coherent plan for what happens if they don't come back?

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There is! Feanaro's children all rode out after him, but the majority of the Elves didn't in fact do so, and they're building walls and a fortress and buildings with actual ceilings to sleep under and they can try planting seeds but at a guess nothing will grow in the dark. And clearing away bodies. Lots of clearing away bodies.

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That's not... exactly the sort of plan she had in mind, but okay, that's something.

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Does anybody want to go with her to see if they have got into some extractable sort of trouble.

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Lots of people are nervous and want to go. 

It's a very long way, and the people who left took the horses.

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...somebody is going to have to carry her even if she is lighting the way with fire, she just cannot hike in this terrain.

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So she can get an Elf-back ride to the site of the fighting. It's ugly. The ground is scorched all around and the Elves look very badly battered and there are giant things with vaguely demonic forms, made out of molten something, fast-moving whips slashing across the battlefield.

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She does not like that thing.

It should unmelt. Now.

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It - does.

It stops being on fire and then it is a very large demon-shaped non-moving thing.

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All of those things should also unmelt.

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And the battlefield is suddenly very quiet.

The King rises shakily to his feet and says they should go straight for Moringotho right now.

He is in sufficiently bad shape that his children can in fact drag him back from doing this.

Most of the fighters are very badly burned.

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Kiri can cool burns, but she can't actually heal them.

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There are healing songs. They don't do much. Before the fighting started two weeks ago most Elves had never seen anyone die.

 

A lot of people have died. More back at the camp than here, but here too.

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So fucking many people -

Well. Back to camp.

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The Elves will start singing. As they get closer all the Elves that hear them will take up the song. It is a deeply sad song. It is also a hopeful one. It says that the dead are parted from the living for a time, but will be reunited, and died in the service of a great need. There is singing for the orcs, too.

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That's... well, that's nice.

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The Elves will keep singing. They'll also, when the host gets back from Angband, start in earnest on building defenses. They'll sing while they do that.

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"This is getting to be kinda overdoing it," Aleko remarks.

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Someone eventually apologetically digs up really excellent sound-muffling fabrics so the humans can sleep. It makes sense that humans wouldn't sing for twelve days straight but it's how Elves cope so it's what the Elves are going to do and they'd be happy to do it elsewhere but that seems impractical.

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If the sound-muffling is really excellent Aleko will be able to sleep! Important.

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Yep, good sound muffling. The Elves won't even take offense if he wears fabric bunched absurdly around his head all the time, but they're definitely going to keep singing. Also can Kiri make this here sand into glass? Greenhouses might not work without any light but glass is still an insulator and they can do magic lights and try growing food.

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Oh what a nice nonlethal application for her magic. Yes, she can melt sand for them.

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Lovely! Then they'll be glass for greenhouses, and glass for various other applications, apparently elaborate glassware and statues are reasonable strategic priorities? An Elf will stop singing to explain that the city has to be pretty.

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Yes, the importance of prettiness to Elves has been explained to her.

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The city is pretty. It has wide avenues where the Elves are putting in mosiac cobblestones and it has, at last, thick-walled stone buildings including one for humans to sleep in with separate bedrooms and almost perfect quiet. It has better walls, with watch towers. There are nearly three hundred thousand Elves and all of them are rapidly making the city as spectacular as they can.

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Kiri decides that she wants to sculpt hot glass with her bare hands. It is a slightly awkward medium and she has to pick it out from under her fingernails but she can get some interesting effects this way, even though she's not a sculptor per se.

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The Elves think this is incredibly cool and suggest she apply some techniques from pottery and are eager to get a look at the results.

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Sure. That sounds relaxing. She potteries with glass.

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Maitimo finds her once things have started to calm down and the walls are thick and there are roofs over every head.  Hey. How are you doing?

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Holding up. I'm glad Aleko's here, it'd be harder coping without him.

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I can imagine. It's not likely to get much easier but I wanted you to know we're in contact with the local communities and they've agreed to check before attacking orcs.

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That's good. Thank you for letting me know.

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We're working on producing paper, if that's something that'd be useful to you or Aleko.

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I would love paper. I usually process my thoughts in writing, I can do fire letters in the air but it's not great for storage. And Aleko can't do fire drawings.

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So he summons someone who comes over with paper. It is sort of rough paper. We're still learning.

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This is fine. Thank you.

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Are you being kept in the loop about what's going on? Is there anything you'd like to be involved in?

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I don't feel particularly in-loop but frankly I'm terrifying and I'd avoid me too - uh, if that is in fact the problem people can go through Aleko, it's not the usual reason people go through him but it is in his job description and he's managing the osanwë thing okay now.

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That's good to know! I think you are out of the loop for a less excusable reason, which is that we are very very accustomed to working with each other and not as accustomed to working with you. The current projects that have the most people on them are scouting sources of stone and metal, both of which we need very badly, and making enchanted glowing rocks, which we are hoping will suffice to let us grow crops. We have about a year's supply of food so that's not desperate but it's going to be a very difficult problem probably forever and we're hoping to stumble on something brilliant. We're also getting in touch with the locals, have learned their language - my father's writing a research paper on it because I think he needs the mental break from real work - and there's apparently a very powerful slightly isolationist local kingdom here who might be able to help us. I will tell people to tell you these things.

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Thank you. I'd offer firelight for the crops but I'm not at all sure it would be good for them or a good use of my attention.

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Doesn't seem likely. You could heat the greenhouses once we have them, just to start with, they should stay warm if they're insulated well. But this temperature is fine for some crops if not the ones we're accustomed to from Tirion and we should probably grow things that don't require greenhouses eventually. Perhaps the shy locals will tell us eventually how they do it.

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Hopefully. It's getting very tiresome not having a sun. It's worse for Aleko, unless he's hovering around me he can't just illuminate whatever he wants to look at.

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Can we build a sun? What are they made of?

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Suns have to be very far away. The sun is fire, but it's well out of my range, and I don't know anything about how it stays up, let alone how one could be put up so as to do that manually.

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Yeah, we have not yet figured out flight. It might only be a project of a decade if we were set to it but it doesn't seem like the most important thing.

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The last air prime died trying.

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Good to know. Project for after the war, then, though we'd test low over the water with someone who's a good swimmer and Ulmo on hand to supervise...

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That'd help.

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We could also ask Ulmo about getting you home, since it's not looking like the war will conveniently be over in a few months.

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That would be useful. You think he'd help?

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I find that very hard to guess. I'm confident he wouldn't take offense at the question.

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And you think he could.

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If we knew more about the capabilities of the Valar this war would look very different than it does. I expect he could but I am not sure.

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Nod.

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We'd miss you. Everyone's still working on what kind of lateral thinking might let someone creatively kill the Enemy with your powers. Hopefully he can let you come back and forth.

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That would be nice. I just need to be conspicuously not dead, I don't need to be in Welce all the time, Jayce can handle most of my affairs.

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Seems like Welce is nicer, once the war's won. I wish we had a sun.

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The sun's great.

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If you want an escort down to the ocean to try getting Ulmo's attention it can at this point safely be arranged.

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I don't really know how to address him.

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I think some of my cousins had offered to go with you, they're better qualified than me because my family recently denounced the Valar and I expect the Valar have hurt feelings about it. Anyway, don't be astoundingly rude but they don't stand on any particular formal procedure.

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I can probably manage that.

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Ulmo's the lord of the waters. I think he is the most charitably inclined to us at this point. He thought taking us to Valinor in the first place was a mistake.

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Oh? Why?

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I think he believes we were bound to clash with the Valar under the circumstances.

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Well, seems like he wasn't wrong.

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It worked for the Vanyar. Worked for the Teleri, mostly. The Noldor are malcontents and I think would eventually outgrow any place you put us in. And we can't really consider a place paradise while there are places we'd matter.

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Seems reasonable enough to me.

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Bet if you could see it by looking at us, like you can at home, we'd be a very disproportionately sweela lot.

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Not necessarily. There are some brilliant, temperamental, motivated people in any element.

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I don't think it describes me. But - my father is not exactly characteristic of our people but he's all the tendencies that make us a people in one bundle.

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If I had to say who his mind reminded me most of I'd actually say Sarelle, and she's elay. She's got a sweela streak, but a hunti one too - and she's the elay prime. They use their minds very differently but they're the two most striking examples I've read.

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You haven't told me about your fellow primes much! What does she put her mind to, what's she like?

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Situational awareness. She's intensely, constantly aware of everything around her and drawing inferences about how it got that way and what it will do next. Her powers mean she can get more done on that front with sound and smell than she could before, but reportedly she was like that even before.

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Oooh, I'm a bit envious, that's a good one. 

...so's yours, but harder to actually use if one isn't evil.

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I get a lot of practical daily use out of the fire, it's the mind that's hard to deploy. She doesn't use the soul half for much, although it does mean she can determine people's elements much more reliably.

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What else can the soul half do, in theory or historically?

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Auney never did anything with it - Jerist reportedly did a lot of matchmaking when he was younger but calmed down on that by the time I was around so I don't know much about what he was doing exactly.

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Oooh, fun. That was a favorite hobby of mine back before I acquired important priorities.

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Maybe I'd say you were elay too if I could tell. Although - stab in the dark - I'm actually thinking coru. To the extent the categories apply here to people less obviously made of fire than your father.

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I'm curious but not enough to check. He smiles and shakes his head. I should also probably get back to work, do you want me to introduce you to my on-better-terms-with-the-Valar cousins first?

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Sure, if this is a good time.

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And so she is introduced! The cousin in question is blond and looks at her with wide-eyed curiosity and Maitimo introduces him as Findaráto.

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Hello. I'm Kiri.

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It's lovely to meet you. I'd never accuse my uncle of hoarding the magic power but I think I can fairly suspect him of hoarding the interesting foreigners. You wanted to talk to Ulmo?

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I have responsibilities at home and he might be able to get me back.

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That's a very good reason, though I think it'd be reasonable to desire to return to your family and homeland either way. I can definitely take you to the sea but it's not always fast to get his attention.

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How not-fast?

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It can take a few weeks.

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And we have to camp out by the sea the whole time?

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We can come back here and then go back there and try again, if you prefer. The sea's a nice place to camp, we can fish.

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I don't really know how to fish. How far is it?

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I'd be delighted to fish for you. Or teach you to fish, there's a saying about that. It should be two days' travel, three if someone needs to carry you because I hear you are clumsy and we don't have the setup to enchant a ring for you yet.

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I can ride a horse, if one's available, not as much without mishap as someone who is not clumsy but better than trying to walk.

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Horses I can arrange. I assume. His smiles fades for a minute and then returns. Yes! Horses: arranged. My cousins are a bit unpredictable about what they're sharing, lately. 

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Hm?

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We're sort of operating as three independent commands sharing a city. This is a terrible idea but no one's thought of anything better yet and no one is backing down. I expect it'll all get sorted but in the meantime I have unreliable access to horses and magic and so forth.

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That sounds really inconvenient. Who are the three? Am I in fact being subtly hoarded?

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The King who was assassinated had three sons. The older two both have claims to the throne, and are not pressing them but also not interested in a resolution that involves surrendering them; the third, my father, is running his own thing mostly because otherwise there'd be too much pressure to pick one of the two. You're most helpful with the forges which means you're most helpful to Feanáro because he's gifted with that sort of thing, and Maitimo's very mildly intercepting people who want to go bother you about politics, but I think he's just doing it out of a preference you not be bothered about politics rather than as a window to win you to his side. 

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I'm normally fairly involved in politics at home but I know the ropes better there than here by a long shot.

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Well. If you're getting sent home immediately it doesn't really matter; if you're staying you can figure out how deep you want to wade in. We all want the Enemy dead.

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Nod.

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Out to the beach?

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Yeah. I'll get Aleko.

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And they set off through the dark for the beach.

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Well, not that dark, Kiri lights the way.

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Ooooh, much better. By horse it's only a day and a half.

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Which is a long ride, but not intolerable or anything.

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And they wade out into the ocean and start singing. Findaráto smiles at her encouragingly. Not the only way to get his attention, but a reasonably good one; you don't have to join in if you don't want to, but if you do, don't worry about not knowing the words or tune.

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I don't know what I would sing if not... the words and the tune...

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The bits you pick up as you go, I suppose. Some people can harmonize to songs they don't know, just from knowing the key.

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Not a talent I have.

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Aleko's willing to give it a go and he croons vaguely whenever there's a motif he recognizes.

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And they summon a god! It's very exciting. The water recedes from the shore and the air pressure goes higher and then a form rises out of the water. He has a long beard and a trident and radiates terrible power and is altogether an appropriate god of the sea.

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Hello.

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Hello. Welcome, newcomer to Arda.

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My name is Kiribel Ardelay, and this is my brother, and we arrived here by accident recently. I have important responsibilities at home for which I cannot be readily replaced and was told you might be able to send us back.

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This is unprecedented. It would probably be possible for the Valar to send you back, if you desire to come to Valinor where we can examine the situation more closely.

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...this seems impractical, since it's a multiweek hike and I can't stay reliably upright on ice.

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I can consult with my brethren about whether it can be done remotely. How urgent is your return?

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I have already been away long enough to cause serious problems. They will probably not get substantially more serious if I am back in the next month, and will not turn into unqualified disasters for perhaps a year. - A year on my world is three hundred and sixty five days.

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That is very soon. I will tell them the necessity of acting urgently.

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Soon, huh. Thank you.

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It can be done, do not fear.

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Thank you.

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And the waves crash back against the shore and the pressure recedes. Well? Findaráto asks?

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"Wanted us to go to Valinor for the Valar to more closely 'examine the situation', I said that was impractical, he wanted a timeframe, I gave him one, he said he'd tell the others it was important to act soon."

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"Okay. Well that's something. They can send you back?"

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"I'm sort of unclear on that, but he seems to think it's likely."

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"What happens if you don't get back fast enough?"

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"I don't know exactly. I'm not needed instantly for anything unless the king dies sooner than expected. But I'm gone, I still have my powers so they will not be able to find my successor because I probably don't have one, the other four primes will be unbalanced and that'll affect how much politics can get done because some interests like to hold out for consensus and I'm not there to make that accessible - in the longer run the royal succession will be called into question; somebody might think this is a good time to stop having a monarchy but if I'm gone oligarchy of primes is out..."

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"That sounds like a disaster, all right. I hope Ulmo's able to get a consensus quickly. I don't suppose there's much point in waiting here for it, the Valar can reach us where they please."

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"Why can you only summon Ulmo from a beach, then?"

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"They don't watch us constantly; wouldn't it be a bit odd if they did? So to get their attention, you have to go somewhere they do watch; Ulmo watches beaches. For drowning children, mostly, but also for things like this."

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"Then what's the song for, couldn't we just go up to a beach and say 'hey Ulmo'?"

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"There are a lot of beaches, saying 'hey Ulmo's' not a particularly good way to get his attention and definitely not the best way to get him in a good mood. The Valar don't process the world much like we do."

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"How do they process it?"

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He shrugs. "Did you not get in reading distance of Ulmo? Did you not get in reading distance of Huan at any point?"

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"Ulmo was out of range. Huan I did catch once, it was - weird but I didn't examine him closely."

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"With his leave that might be the best way to get a sense of it."

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"I'll keep it in mind but I'm generally unwilling to affirmatively ask of people if I may read them."

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"Hmm? Why's that?"

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"I don't want to make refusing me nondefault by having reasons people might want to accept on the table. Except with a couple people like Aleko who've cultivated very consistent comfort with it I prefer the standard procedure for it to always be other-initiated - physically, as an immediately relevant topic, whatever - so I don't need to worry about trespassing however lightly on somebody's absolutely reasonable boundary that they shouldn't have to justify even to themselves."

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"That's a very strong stance."

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"I wouldn't want my power in the hands of anybody who didn't hold it. I'm not even truly comfortable with what I did to revise the orcs."

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He nods. "Mandos may be able to do just as well by them, and with less burden on your shoulders."

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"Perhaps." Mandos probably falls in the category of people she doesn't trust with mind-alteration powers but this is probably not the time.

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"I hope they are able to send you home in time to prevent problems."

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"I hope so too. Thanks for the help."

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And they ride back.

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Where Kiri reports the results of the trip to anyone who cares to know them.

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"Can't pretend I'm not a bit relieved," Feanáro says, "now we can try to kill the Enemy before you get sent home."

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"Crossed my mind."

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"And we've at last made contact with the people you need to meet. The King on this continent is married to a Maia, and she's interested in helping you figure out which of your powers might serve against the Enemy."

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"Sounds useful. Where is she? What kind of help does she have in mind?"

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"Her kingdom is east of here, magically protected, we're sending a diplomatic envoy. And I think the idea is you could check whether your powers work on her, and whether hers work on you, in a controlled setting, and then talk about the capabilities of the Enemy."

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"Okay."

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"Not what you were hoping for?"

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"I'm not completely at ease with powers testing but I don't have a better idea."

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"Can you elaborate on your concerns? I'm not sure if there's a way I can assuage them but I'll be worse at it if I have to guess."

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"Well, I don't think I have any particularly special defensive properties except indifference to temperature; there are tests it might be reasonable to do of her powers on me that would still be uncomfortable or risky. I remain generally concerned that I may make some kind of error in the use of any active mind power and it seems like there would be a problem if I accidentally did something to a god-queen she wasn't planning. Etcetera."

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"She struck me as a very very careful and defensively-oriented and cautious person, for whatever that's worth. I do not think she'll want to take any chances."

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"Okay, that's reassuring."

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"The King's a very conservative person by nature too. Very protective of his people. He wanted oaths for us before he let us in; we told him we'd be accountable for you, since you can't swear to anything."

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"What did he want sworn?"

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"That we wouldn't harm anyone within his borders. We talked him down to that we didn't have intent to harm anyone and had never ever harmed anyone but orcs."

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"Yeah, first one could have gone pear-shaped."

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"I mean, the worst outcome is that they murder us? In which case we have to cross the ice again, I suppose, but I'd have sworn to that if it'd been necessary."

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"...you could look at it that way, I suppose."

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"Are you thinking of a worse outcome?"

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"I'm accustomed to thinking of death as permanent."

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"Right. Even if you get sent back I'll work on that until I have something, it's abominable."

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"Thank you."

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"We can send your escort out to Doriath when you're ready."

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"Is Aleko welcome?"

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"Yes, definitely. He makes them a lot less nervous. Understandably."

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"Yeah."

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"We'd probably take the better part of a Year to make it down there, but you're in a hurry so everyone shall have to accommodate that. Let them know when you're inclined to depart."

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"...how long will it take given that I'm in a hurry?"

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"I'm sure everyone'll ride out today if you ask."

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"I mean the trip itself."

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"Not sure. It's dangerous terrain but you can make the lights, that should help. It's a few hundred miles from here. Perhaps a week."

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"Okay, that's not too bad."

And she would like to leave tomorrow.

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Tomorrow can be arranged. Findarato will be going, the King is his uncle, and Maitimo will be going because he likes people - Feanaro says this as if it is baffling - and they'll have an escort of fifty.

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Seems like a lot of people but okay.

She and Aleko are ready first thing in the morning.

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So are the Elves, insofar as morning is a useful concept they seem to be early risers. Or don't sleep at all, hard to tell. 

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Lucky bastards.

Off they go riding by firelight. It is boring.

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The Elves would be happy to sing or tell stories or from the look of it Findarato'd be happy to talk politics and Maitimo is again subtly deflecting. 

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Singing and telling stories are entertaining. Politics is not entertaining per se but it's interesting!

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To Kiri maybe. Aleko wants to learn Elf songs.

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Elf songs it is, then, Findarato's quite good at them. He can warm them all up - not much, but enough that it registers to Kiri's senses, and that's interesting, can he make patterns of heat in the air if he alters the tune? have an inpromptu lesson on Elven magic composition...

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Magic music is really interesting! Neither Kiri nor Aleko has a particularly spectacular voice - he's got better innate musicality than she does, though - but expanding her repertoire of magic so she doesn't have to go from zero to FIRE is definitely a desirable thing.

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Well, most Elven songs aren't very useful for danger, they were composed in Valinor where there was none, but they're useful and she's welcome to them. He can sing all trip. 

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And she will take diligent notes and attempt to sing magic into the world. (Pity Sarelle's not here.)

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Getting a better grasp of Quenya will really help them here, almost all magic songs have lyrics and no one knows her language well enough to compose any in that, yet. He's happy to teach lyrics by rote and prompt over osanwe, though, so they can make progress quickly.

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It's not that hard to transliterate Quenya - it's at least phonetically simple - so her notes presently have readable lyrics in the Welchin alphabet.

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Lovely. 

 

After a few days' travel it becomes hard to look at the forest ahead of them. 

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"...that's really unpleasant," Kiri remarks of this phenomenon.

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"Protection against the Enemy, apparently. I suppose they don't have the capabilities to be discriminating. Ah, well."

They ride on. 

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Kiri can't quite read her own mind the way she can read others' but maybe if she just stares this forest down and wills it -

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She'll get a headache. She might be having less of a hard time staying on course but it's not obviously so. 

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Annoying. She stops looking so straight at it.

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And before long they are at it; the trees slide away right in front of their eyes. They dismount and have a cautious mostly-osanwe conversation with the guards. They hand over their weapons.

They want to blindfold us, Maitimo says, so we don't learn the way to their kingdom from here.

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Well then somebody's going to have to carry me, 'blindfolded' is one of those conditions under which I cannot walk up to my usual impeccable standard.

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A minute's awkward conversation. 

Then Maitimo says, under what circumstances do you share the contents of peoples' heads. 

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I am not a perfect actor. Apart from that not unless invited. If this is really prohibitive I can probably crawl it, or just live with tripping over tree roots a lot, or lean on Aleko - he can't carry me but I can use him as a crutch -

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I can do it. I like you and that would be a tremendous waste of everyone's time. 

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You really don't have to; I am reasonably accustomed to falling over and leaning on my brother and such...

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I can imagine! And if I point out that days in this war may be measured in lives you will worry I'm pressuring myself needlessly. I am happy to carry you. 

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If we insulate one of us enough that blocks it but it tends to interfere with breathing? Is breathing something your species does by necessity or only because it is required in order to sing, frankly the latter would not surprise me?

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Osanwe laughter.

Regrettably we do have to breathe. What sort of insulation?

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Jayce wrapped himself up in a ton of coats and blankets but it only worked if he had his face covered up too.

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If we were in Valinor and had time to assemble the equipment...

 

I would prefer carrying you to having you limp along with your brother. 

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If you're sure then I suppose I will accept under protest.

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They are blindfolded. He picks her up and they start walking. He is running through everything he remembers of various chemistry lectures in Valinor, in his head.

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That is an entirely reasonable behavior. She makes no comment.

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It is eight hours of walking. That's a lot of chemistry lectures. Chemistry is safe though. not even any particular automatic associations to anything else - people would otherwise be wondering what he had to hide -

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People! That can be done without rudely touching on politics, can't it? If he starts with people uninvolved? Here are all the people he knows - hundreds of thousands of them - and why he is fond of them and what drives them, if it's not private. He's staying away from anyone who even might be. 

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...she's sort of tempted to make a complimentary remark about how his brain does that, because wow it's almost like being next to several people at once, but it might just be uncomfortable and he hasn't asked.

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He should probably talk with her, but it'd be such a weirdly asymmetrical conversation and she might touch on something he does not want to think about. Or perhaps she's already picked up on it - it's good that at least the secret likeliest to pop out if he fails to distract himself with enough chemistry and people is one he's at this point very sure she wouldn't share, and one that does no harm unless she does. Except probably making her very uncomfortable around him but so it goes. More people. He has reasons to like quite literally all of them. 

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Okay, no conversation then. She can do no conversation. Minds are interesting, she's not bored or anything. It's really impressive how he catalogs all these people, like wow.

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They're all connected to each other, so it's really very straightforward, probably everyone could do it were they so inclined. 

 

And at last they reach the gates of Menegroth and are permitted to remove blindfolds. 

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So Kiri steps out of range of Maitimo. Thank you, she tells him.

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My pleasure. What does my head look like, I was desperately curious. 

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Oh! I didn't know if you would want to talk about - She bounces it back. It's almost like being near several people at once when you're thinking about them, it's amazing, most people genuinely cannot do that.

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Hmm, really? And as I imagine you caught, I didn't, particularly, my mind would be on you if we were conversing and that might be uncomfortable and you were likelier to say something - I promise I have no dire secrets, just personal ones - that brought something unwanted to mind. 

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Yes really. I don't mind when people think about me, by and large, although the only people who let me read them tend to be neutral to positive on the subject so there's that. I have no desire to acquire your secrets just because I can't walk well enough to traverse a forest blindfolded.

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I mean, if I knew more about you and had leave of relevant parties I'd tell them to you because you have the correct goals and values and can only be better at them with more information. But I am making this assessment with great certainty for having known you so briefly and you're from another world so perhaps I should be less sure of myself.

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I am very fond of my goals and values but do not know how you would know enough about them to consider them definitively correct at this time.

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Well, I am very good at people.

 

But yes. Not yet. 

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No need for it to be ever, you're good at thinking about what you mean to be thinking about and should not often find yourself needing to haul me around.

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I would hope not! We need to forge you a ring of grace or something; perhaps we can ask Menegroth for one. 

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That would be great!

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I am assuming they have forges. I don't know if they have forges. 

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I suppose if they don't have forges they don't necessarily have people who can tell me what to heat how much either.

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And we have that but would still need the right metals and surfaces to work them on and it'd take weeks anyway, enchantment's slow. 

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See, by now when I hear an Elf tell me something's slow I expect it to require at least a couple of years.

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I suppose we deserve that. No, a talented person can do a minor enchantment for a ring in the space of four or five weeks. Well, by the old count of time. 

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I would really like such a ring but I understand if the prerequisites are not readily come by.

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I shall work on it! Things I work on usually happen, but here I'm rather working on too many. Do try to get along with these folks, that'll simplify my other ones.

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I'll try.

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Menegroth is stunning. It's lit, for one thing: a vague silvery light that seems to shine sourcelessly from the whole place. The stonework is astonishing. It feels like wandering through a forest despite being underground. 

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They get curious stares. The corridors widen and get more elaborate.

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Why are people staring at them. Were they not expected. C'mon guys.

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They are the first humans in the world! No one knew what humans would be like. They're not ugly like Dwarves, that's good.

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Like who? ...Is it not considered rude around here to call people ugly?

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People, sure, but not Dwarves. Someone sends a mental image of Dwarves. They are short and bearded. 

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...are they not people? They look peopley. Short, bearded, and peopley.

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Oh, maybe translation issue? They're people in the sense of talking and stuff, but they're not like us so it's not rude to call them ugly. They actually didn't know they were people, for a while, and hunted them for sport! Dwarves don't have osanwe so it was an easy mistake to make. 

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Kiri will be standing a little bit closer to her brother now.

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They reach the throne room. It's very very large and very very beautiful. 

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Yup, it is that.

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And the King and Queen wave them forward. Hello, Kiri, says the Queen. We have heard a great deal about you. 

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Hello. Thank you for inviting us here.

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Thank you for shepherding our sundered kin safely across the Ice. Eru sent you at an opportune moment. 

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...you're welcome. Not, "we were eaten by a fucking snake monster" or "so does Eru usually fuck with foreign politics to make people's hikes smoother", look how diplomatic.

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I am given to understand that you have extraordinary capabilities you are considering using in the war, and that among your purposes in coming here was to learn whether that might be possible. 

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I am what is called a 'sweela prime'; at any given time five people from my country have powers associated with one of five element-pairs and my pair is fire and mind. People from my country can also do a sort of low-fidelity divination; when I tried it on this question it suggested that I may be able to use my powers if I do something creative with them but possibly not by default.

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That is interesting. Have you had any ideas on what creative use might look like, then?

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I'm not sure. Combining with local magic in some way is a possibility.

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All right. Have you checked whether your magic affects non-Incarnates?

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The only one I've encountered is Huan; I can detect his temperature and when he passed within my mental powers' range I could read him.

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Encouraging. We are indestructible; with that in mind are there other tests you'd want to try?

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I haven't investigated my maximum or minimum temperature - either for my passive resistance or my ability to affect it outside myself - so if you're genuinely indestructible that's more than I can say for bits of landscape I don't want to accidentally turn into volcanoes. I have active mental powers, which I have historically been very timid about using but did deploy without error both when someone desperate enough to ask for them came along and in the case of orcs; I did not make any errors but would more than understand not wanting to experiment with that.

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If I'm in a physical form intended for the purpose it would be - not indestructible but not harmful to me if destroyed and not harmful to anything else. We were present for the making of the world and that got both very hot and very cold.  Mental powers I am not comfortable experimenting with. I need my abilities to keep my people safe. 

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Of course, agrees Kiri. Knowing how safely hot and cold I can go would still be very valuable information.

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We should go outside for that. What are your aims if you can harm the Enemy?

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As long as I can't go home yet - where I am not only needed but uniquely so as long as I live, or I'd consider letting it fall to a successor - I'm all for harming the Enemy.

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How, though? You do not seem to possess unique - strength, or durability...

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I don't. Except against extremity of temperature. So it'd probably be complicated.

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I am concerned you would only get yourself killed. 

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Well, if it turns out I can't go home, that's how I get myself a successor.

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I do not think that is at all wise, child.

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It's hardly my first choice.

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All right. The Valar cannot send you back?

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Ulmo suggested I go to Valinor for closer inspection. It's weeks of hiking even for people who can reliably balance on ice, which I can't - I'm not sure I could make the trip at all, and my brother might freeze while I slept, if we didn't bring people with us, it would be a major production - and he said he'd tell the other Valar that I'm in a hurry and they'd get back to me, which might mean they can't do it but might not.

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I am sorry. Thus the urgency of your mission to learn whether you can aid us in the war effort?

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Better to know sooner than later.

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She stands. Let us go outside. And her body splits - into one with the same appearance, which sits back down, and one with a brittler more metallic appearance who walks towards Kiri. 

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Kiri shoos Aleko to go stand near Maitimo and wait in case there's some kind of splash effect, and she follows Melian.

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And they go to a spacious field outside Menegroth and far from everyone. This form should be very hard to bother, she says, and absorb lots of energy if destroyed.  I can do a better one if it seems not to be working well. 

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Preference for starting with heat or cold?

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None at all. 

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Cold first, then, probably less chance of explosions. Cold cold cold colder colder colder.

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No problems, up until the point where being that cold would make movement impossible, and then she can expend some energy to move despite the cold. 

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Does that warm her up or just work around it?

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Just works around it, looks like. 

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Hmmm.

Kiri starts going colder, faster.

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Still moving, though very sluggishly. 

I can project the internal experience if that'd be useful to you? 

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It might? But I haven't actually felt personally cold in years so not too vividly please.

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Oh, this form doesn't have nerve endings, they're hard to do and wouldn't be very useful. What's interesting is how it interacts with my magic -

 

And she sends. The world around her body is under her absolute control, ordinarily, but now it is very slowly so - the ordinary avenues for exertion don't work, she has to push things oddly, and there's resistance - it takes more of her attention...

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I think I can go colder. Should I stop here or try it?

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Do keep going.

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Fëanáro mentioned a temperature at which things stopped - moving - altogether - which means that until that happens there must be more heat there to siphon away -

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If so, it's not siphoning. She's still moving, with effort.

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Where is all this heat going? It's reasonably intuitive that Kiri would be able to generate heat out of nothing but deleting it is kind of weird, now she thinks of it.

But nothing's getting warmer.

And the only thing around that can't get warmer is her.

...Kiri goes up in a column of flame, feeding it on what she's drawing off Melian, and has enough attention to spare to keep her clothes from igniting.

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Are you all right?

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Yeah, I'm fine, just seeing if it helps.

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It helps. Colder, colder, colder, nothing-moves colder...

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...and now Kiri can't go any colder. She burns, focusing - You okay?

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I cannot move. This form seems stuck, there's no avenue to exert force on it. That could do a great deal, in the war, though we aren't our forms and destroying our forms doesn't suffice to destroy us - I can still work some magic from here but probably not enough to affect a battle or, more relevantly, to do you harm. 

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Good to know. I'll back off now and see what happens - should I step you back up or jump you to your former temperature or just stop affecting you?

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If you stop affecting me I think I can restore it. If not, I'll ask you for assistance. 

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So Kiri puts herself out and stops concentrating on chilling Melian.

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And some odd spark-like things float in the air around her, and then currents sweep them towards her, and then she's very slowly back in motion. So it seems that constraining us that way requires your continued concentration. Someone could shatter the form while it's frozen, though. 

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What would that do?

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I wouldn't be able to retrieve it, and I'd be damaged. I'd be more damaged, and its loss more significant, if it were one I was attached to rather than one I'd created for this purpose. 

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Okay. Let me know when I should try heat.

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You're welcome to help me get warmed up to normal faster. It may otherwise take a while. 

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How fast?

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I don't think this form will suffer much damage from being rapidly heated, it's not very complicated. 

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Okay. So now she's ambient temperature.

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Wow.

 

 

Okay, let us attempt heat. 

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Up she goes. Kiri does not freeze herself - might make it hard to breathe if the air slowed too much. Hotter hotter hotter.

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The physical form starts glowing. 

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That's promising. Maybe.

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There is not in principle an upper bound on heat like there is on cold. If you were capable of heating atoms enough they fell apart that'd be worrying and I'll stop you before you get that hot. 

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Okay. I won't speed up suddenly or anything.

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You are very far from the heat where that'd be relevant. 

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I won't be able to pull the same trick in reverse, because while I don't need to be warm I do need to breathe.

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Perhaps there's a sensible limit that stops you from blowing up a sizable chunk of the planet with your powers, she says. I'd rather hope there was. 

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I don't know. Sweela primes don't all work the same way and seldom have reason to test how hot we can make things.

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What other power sets can come with the Sweela prime?

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My great-aunt claimed that her only mental power was detecting lies - at better range than I have on anything mental - and typically didn't use her fire powers for anything other than actually setting things on fire at whatever temperature they naturally burn, though I don't know if that was all she could do.

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Ah.

There'd be cause to lie about the mind-altering powers, though, if she had any. 

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Yes, this has occurred to me. I have no way to find out and no evidence either way beyond her word and my own very different powers.

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Hopefully anyone who inherits it from you will be better-informed. 

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I kept better notes. Although anything I'd add to them based on these experiments will likely not make it back to Welce.

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I hope you don't feel there's no cause for optimism. The Valar are probably very busy trying to decide how they can help fight the Enemy without shattering the continent between them, but they should have the power to aid you. 

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I hope so.

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She is glowing quite brightly, now. Still not close to the threshold where I'd worry about atoms you heated misbehaving. 

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How hot would that be?

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I don't know how to describe it in units of temperature. Maybe the same distance from here to there as from ambient temperature to here. 

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I might hit a limit before that, I don't know. I've never even been near anything this hot before. Hotter hotter hotter.

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I think I shall stop you well short of it. The explosion could be harder than I expect to contain and kill you and perhaps others. 

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...okay, do feel free to stop me whenever that becomes a problem.

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I am a very cautious person by nature, don't worry. Experimenting is not temperamentally suited to me but protecting my people is and this may be necessary. I'll err very strongly in the direction of safety. 

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Nod.

(Hotter.)

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And eventually - we should stop there to be safe. 

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Okay. So if I have a limit, it's above that. You want another ambient temperature restore?

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I think I'll just dissolve this body, I like having nerve endings and joints and senses and so forth. Ready to head in? And the body vanishes like smoke in the wind. 

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Okay. Kiri goes back.

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Sorry that couldn't be more useful to you. 

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It was still helpful, thank you very much.

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I am not sure you could get close enough to the Enemy for long enough to do him harm. 

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Yeah, me either. Maybe someone will come up with something but I'm all offense no defense.

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You're safe in Doriath but only because he wouldn't come close enough you could possibly hurt him. 

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Maybe there's a way to extend my range.

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Does music do it? 

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Haven't encountered a song designed to do that yet.

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It could be worth the attempt. There are also other kinds of our magic but they are not known to me and not a talent of my people. 

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Sounds worth looking into, definitely.

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Back into stunning Menegroth.  You might desire to ask the Dwarves. They give us most of our magic weaponry.

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Do they. Kiri wonders why. I'll do that, then.

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Thank you. Enjoy the bliss of Menegroth for as long as you need, dear; it's dangerous out there. 

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Thank you.

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And they rejoin her escort. Maitimo's smiling at her. Well? Helpful?

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I can absolute zero things but I have to be on fire to do it. She stopped me for safety concerns before I found a heat limit.

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Ooooh. Being on fire doesn't hurt you, does it?

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Not a bit. Takes some attention to keep my clothes from burning.

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He laughs. Okay. If we can think of a way to extend your range enough you could do it without being in danger...

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That's what I was thinking, yeah, I'm almost pure offense.

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And we're rather purely hopeless at it, at least at the moment. There ought to be some way to make this work more elegant than 'have a thousand people positioned to take everything the Enemy throws at you, one by one' which I expect would upset you anyway. 

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Yes.

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We come back. We wake up in Mandos and he sighs and goes 'that was very brave, please consider being less so' and then he sends us out, good as new. 

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We don't take it lightly. But it's unconditionally worth it, and it's not - whatever you're used to death being. 

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People don't habitually recover from it.

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Yeah. So it's worth keeping in mind that here, you're the only person whose death would be permanent and we are going to keep you safe.

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And Aleko, please.

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Aleko's easier to keep safe, we shall just keep him far from enemies. We can do that for you too if you'd like. 

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Risk/reward's different for me. But an expanded range would be great.

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I'll work on it. We should talk to the Dwarves. I get the sense the locals are disgustingly racist and they still manage to grudgingly speak highly of them.

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Oh, you noticed the disgusting racism too!

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We need them, and this place is genuinely safe and well-lit and the sort of environment Elves thrive in, and it has food, so I've been biting my tongue. But I've nearly bitten through it. Hopefully the victims of the disgusting racism will be inclined to talk with us at all, I wouldn't blame them for not being so. 

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Well, me and Aleko are at least not Elves so if they're understandably racist back maybe we won't count. Though we still don't speak the language very well and I'm not sure this is the same one here.

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Osanwe should help there, right?

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They said Dwarves don't have it and neither do we. Elf intermediary attenuates the 'look how not an Elf I am'.

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Right. Sorry. Uh, I don't look much like the Thindar? We could see if that gets us anywhere, though it may not. How long would it take you to learn the local language?

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...telepathy would speed it up, probably, but still a really long time.

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Then we might have to hope they'll tolerate an Elf intermediary. If it helps you can be obviously in charge?

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I don't know if it'll help or not but it might.

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Well. I am happy to take orders as your Elf translator. I also have a passable grasp of the local language, though if we wait until tomorrow I'll have a better one. 

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You guys are really good at languages.

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My father wanted to come himself but he wouldn't bite his tongue on the disgustingly racist bits and it'd be an all-around diplomatic disaster so I promised him I'd come back fluent. 

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It was very hard not to press the point on the disgusting racism.

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Doesn't even help the Dwarves. I'll push it if they ask. Not - not just because it annoys me personally, there's a war on and a lot at stake. 

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Yeah. I wouldn't be pushing it because I'd think it'd do anything but because I'd want to suss out the depth of the character flaws in my ostensible allies, pretty much.

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He laughs. They are deeply xenophobic but basically good rulers of their own people, this kingdom does not seem to be hiddenly dystopian in any ways we'd need to correct, and I think they could grow up but being Elves they'll do so slowly, it'd take me a few decades to get much of anywhere. 

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Of course it would. Did you as a species just allocate all your swiftness into language-learning?

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My family just cares about swiftness more than any other Elves we've ever met. Though all Elves pick up words and songs and poems on first hearing. 

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I've noticed that, although I was attributing it to practice. The hunti prime has an eidetic memory and I was so jealous when I heard about it, I was so tempted to just try to install it on myself once I knew it was within natural human variation...

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They don't have it as their magic, they just have it? Wow.

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He's so lucky. And hot.

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Your mental modification would let you do things like that?

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I don't know. I can't read myself exactly the same way I read other people. But it might have worked. I'm only getting more tempted as my streak of zero mistakes continues.

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I volunteer as experimental subject!

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Are you sure that's wise? You seem strategically important.

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You have not made any mistakes yet. I perhaps shouldn't be first experimental subject but I'd love to have it. And I am of moderate strategic importance; my main advantage is that everyone likes me and I can bite my tongue around racists. 

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I should try some orcs first. I don't feel exactly good about it but they are at least the opposite of strategically important.

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Yeah, that might be the right way to do it. 

Shall we try talking with Dwarves?

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Sure. Where are they?

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Not sure. I can ask someone to guide us? 

They acquire a cheerful guide, who is slightly less cheerful when told where they're going but leads them there nonetheless. 

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Gosh. Why would any shockingly racist Elves not want to visit the Dwarves. Kiri can't imagine.

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The Dwarves are not lit by Menegroth's silvery light. It's dark. 

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Kiri can solve this problem. She is now haloed by little droplets of firelight.

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And after a little while there are some waist-height bearded people. They say something in a language she doesn't speak even a little bit. 

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Please tell them you'll be translating for me.

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Maitimo tries, in halting the-same-language. Huh, he says after a second. Apparently they can't hear osanwe or send it because they're categorically immune to mind-affecting magic.

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...huh. Do you have enough of what they speak to ask if they want to test that?

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He tries, again haltingly, in the local language. They say sure, you're welcome to come close. 

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Kiri approaches the nearest Dwarf. And then she beams. I can't read them at all!

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Maitimo conveys this. The Dwarves are nonplussed; of course she can't. Mind-affecting magic does not affect Dwarves. They express generalized contempt for Elves who are so easily affected by it. Take that in the spirit it's intended, though, they seem fairly friendly considering. 

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No offense taken. (She murmurs briefly to Aleko.) She cups her hands and floats one of her halo flames into her palm. Uh, with whatever background information seems salient can you tell them I'm looking for range expansion, that I can do fire stuff out to whatever the local units are you've seen my range but would need that to be farther to use against the Enemy?

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He attempts to convey this.

They think your powers are extremely exciting and wondered if you can keep forges hot indefinitely; I said that we'd asked the same and you had to be close, at which they were disappointed and also surprised Elves had tried forging things. The racism seems to be mutual but the Elves have the position of power here so I'm going to keep my angry-with-the-Thindar first impression. 

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That and the 'hunting them for sport' thing. I'm happy to heat some things for Dwarves while I'm here if they'd like.

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That actually affects my evaluation of the Thindar less than it did when I first heard it. Osanwe's how we'd check whether various things wandering through the woods at night are people. They made a horrifying mistake and I am horrified but less than I was when I didn't know why they made it. 

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I remain just as horrified. Do they want me to heat anything?

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I think so. It'd take them several months to get anywhere on expanding your range, though. 

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Well, I might be waiting for the Valar's response that long anyway...

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Then I'll ask them to get started on it.

More talking. 

 

They want the hot forges in exchange. The convention in their culture is to do explicit exchanges for things. 

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That's my world's convention too, although it's usually currency- and not barter- based. They want me to sit here the whole time heating their forges?

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I suggested an hour a day, does that work?

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It involves me spending more time living among horrifying racists than I was originally planning but I suppose it's not too onerous if that's taken as a given.

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We can work on them! I'll figure out who in the King's council he actually listens to and then figure out the best avenue to fix horrifying racism - I'm assuming you care more about whatever the structural dynamic here is than about changing the nasty comments, we could focus on those instead if we wanted to but I don't know that it's the most productive avenue -

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You assume correctly.

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Lovely. If we're really stuck here for months it will be a lot less horribly racist by the time we leave, this is the sort of thing I do professionally and we have a lot of leverage. 

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Okay. I didn't initially realize you would be here for months too, you could have just ridden off without me.

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Would you like me to? You need a translator and I think I'm more useful here than at home, we are less disgustingly racist and the politics isn't going to resolve itself in the next month with or without me. 

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It'd be nice, yes.

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No trouble at all, then. We will make this situation better. 

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Thanks.

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More talking. 

Forges now, while they get started on your project? They say they'll show you where. 

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Sure. It's so weird to be able to be among a crowd of people and just - it's weird. But nice.

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I will ask them if they can export the secret. 

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Lower priority than range expansion but it'd be nice.

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And it'd be bad if the Enemy got his hands on it. But nonetheless. 

Kiri is pointed at forges. The Dwarves gather around. They're talking to her, not to Maitimo, and he falls in patiently behind her and translates. How hot can she go? Can she heat metal directly? Does she know any metal forging that requires temperatures that couldn't be achieved without her, are there things they should be testing...

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Really inadvisably hot! Yes! She does not actually know much about metal forging, at home having fire powers means she does politics instead.

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The Dwarves are a little confused by this; why would anyone with such a strong comparative advantage at fires go do politics? Not that it's not a perfectly honorable profession. Just. 

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There's only five magic people at a time and they have political stuff attached and Kiri likes politics. Also in her world they can't make magic anythings out of metal, so there's less demand for the field as a whole.

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The Dwarves express their regrets for Kiri's world. And are happy to talk about how magic metalworking works, at length, if she's interested and the mutual comprehension is good enough - it's not, Maitimo says, not really, but I'm happy to try...

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I am curious, but it's not urgent if you want to wait till you're better at the language?

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He says something to the Dwarves, apologetically. They say they're sorry you're stuck with a Elf translator and they're happy to wait a week until I can talk about metals or at least not be a barrier to such a conversation. 

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It'd be silly of me to wait to talk to Dwarves until I learned a language at my own speed.

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He conveys this. 

They understand and are glad she came to talk right away! Still regrettable to be stuck with an Elf.

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Well, Elves are definitely good for languages and this one has been very helpful so far.

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Elves do start with lots of unfair disadvantages, like not being immune to mind control. They do the best with what they've got, her interlocutor supposes. 

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Anyway, what should she heat up?

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The things to heat up are pointed out. The Dwarves are extremely grateful, and promise to work with all due haste on extending her range. 

I like Dwarves, Maitimo says delightedly. 

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I do too.

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Would you like me to keep you company down here or go get started meeting whoever we're going to need to bring around?

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I think I'll be okay for a bit unless they suddenly need me to heat different things.

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You should be able to fetch me by thinking at me if that happens. I can stay if you'd rather, I'm just eager to get working on this. 

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Go ahead.

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So he waves and leaves. The Dwarves work cheerfully in his absence and are happy to escort her back when the hour is up.

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What nice Dwarves. What's going on in the better-lit areas?

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The Elves are happy to show her to their underground gardens to get things to eat, or back to her escort, or to Maitimo, or to a concert. 

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Ooh, a concert?

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Yes! The Elves would be delighted to escort them to a concert. Daeron's performing. 

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They can go to a concert if Aleko wants. He's been very patient with all the telepathic conversation Kiri can't copy him into easily and so on.

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Their escort will also attend the concert.

It's a stunning concert hall. It's a stunning concert. 

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Yay. Racism: does not affect musical talent.

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And after the concert Maitimo wants to introduce Kiri to Luthien, the King and Queen's daughter, a stunningly pretty girl with ridiculously long hair who asks immediately if she can give Kiri a hug. 

 

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Um, did he explain the involuntary mindreading thing? Hug range is mindreading range.

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He did, she says, and I felt so sorry for you, that must be an awful burden and you must need a hug!

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...if it doesn't bother you, then yes, you can hug me.

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So she gets a hug! Luthien is indeed thinking about how lonely it must be to read peoples' minds without meaning to. She is full of sympathy. Also curiosity about the newcomers in general and Kiri in particular. 

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It isn't quite that lonely. Some people don't mind, and one of them's my twin brother, and he came here with me.

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I am so jealous. I would love to have a twin brother. Hi, Aleko!

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Hi! Nice to meet you.

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Does he want a hug? She'll hug him, too, though she's more excited by Kiri because Kiri is a girl and magical. 

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He'll take one but he's not hard up for hugs.

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Hugs anyway! And then back to Kiri's side to ask to know all about their world and how old are they Maitimo said they grow up faster...

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They're almost eighteen! ...They might actually be eighteen now, they haven't been keeping very close track of the way the calendar would be passing back home. Their world has very different magic - not just primes but also blessings, would Lúthien like to see blessings drawn, it's not very dramatic but it's still maybe interesting.

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She is fascinated. 

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So the twins produce paper blessings, and tell Lúthien what they all mean and how they're elemented, and demonstrate how Kiri will always draw grace last, and how Aleko will also always draw grace last if he's drawing for her, and how Lúthien will get aggressively uninformative results if she tries it.

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She's fascinated. Can she draw for Kiri or Aleko, does that work normally?

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Nope! Doesn't work for her at all.

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What fascinating magic! And she can't even see them doing magic when they do it. That's pretty cool. 

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You can normally see magic in progress?

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If it's our kind. Since I'm half-Maia. 

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I don't look magic though?

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She furrows her brow at her. You look not-like-an-Elf-or-a-Maia in so many ways I can only guess which ones would be 'looking magic' by comparing with Aleko. But you do look different than him in ways that are probably magic. But I can't see magic happening when blessings are drawn. 

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I mean what if I - She holds up her hand and is holding a handful of flame.

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Well, she giggles, that obviously looks like magic!

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And you can see temperature so I can't just do 'invisible' things with it, I suppose... She extinguishes the fire.

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We can! You can't?

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I can sense it in my range, but not visually - behind me just as well as ahead - and Aleko can't at all unless he can feel it the usual way.

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Huh. Humans are so different from us. It's pretty interesting. Maybe after the war we can learn more in less scary circumstances. 

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Maybe! It'll depend on how easily the Valar can move people around once they've considered it.

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I think they're really busy now because of the destruction of Valinor. They should have more time after the war. 

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Hopefully.

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War might last a while, Luthien says. 

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Yeah. I wish I could just decisively end it but I don't have that kind of power to throw around quite.

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I've been desperately wishing the same thing. The frustrating thing is that if I'd known I could have been prepared.

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Prepared how?

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Half-Maia, right? In theory I can do most of what my mother can do and I could have picked things I could use to protect my people but instead the only ones I have are, like, 'cheer people up' and 'make people less tired'. 

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How do you specialize like that?

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Songs, for us, it's all songs. They take a long time to learn and refine. 

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Sarelle would have a field day. She's got air like I have fire, she can do sound with it.

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That'd be amazing! Most people have to sing, if you want to use it in combat, can't exactly go around carrying instruments. I'm way more powerful than typical but useless in a fight - wasn't expecting one...

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How long does it take to get a new song working?

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Powerful ones that do exactly what you want can take a century. Something less specialized or with less caution about side effects or that you can modify from an existing one, still years. 

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That seems like such a long time to take at anything. What are the - steps?

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I think different places do it different ways but here you first compose a song, and then you perform it and get a feel for what it's doing and start tweaking it for the things you care about, and then once you're very sure of it you scale it up, and scaling it always introduces new unexpected effects it has or directions in which it's doing something - sometimes it turns out it's not doing what you want at all, it's doing something related...

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What's the content of 'scale it up'?

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Do changes to make the song more powerful. You could make it all the way powerful right away and then tweak from there but that's how you get killed. 

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That would seem to follow. ...How many drafts do you usually go through? How long do these songs get?

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Maybe forty drafts? The tweaking at each stage can take a very long time though. Most songs have an effect by a minute in and it's a rare magic song that's longer than twenty. 

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Yeah, I can see how that would take a long time. ...hundred years still sounds like a bit much though.

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That kind of song would be long, and you'd have to power it up very slowly - maybe a hundred drafts - because of the risk of things going wrong at each stage. 

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Nod. I've been very timid with active mind magic because there's no real safe test.

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Lots of music is the same way. Sometimes it's safe with my mother testing, sometimes that'd be even more dangerous. 

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What makes the difference?

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Mind magic'd be incredibly dangerous to test on her, because if she stopped working we're all dead. Anything physical or anything that affects the mind in some way Maiar aren't affected - like things that replicate the effects of alcohol, say - is perfectly fine. 

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Huh. Yeah, so far all my active mind magic has been on really desperate humans and orcs who would have otherwise had to be killed.

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That seems like a safe way to go. We don't let either of those into Doriath, so less chance to test it. I tried some things with rescuees of Angband. 

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...what things?

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Things for panic attacks. Mood. They probably wouldn't want you inside their head, the Enemy does enough of that. 

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Wouldn't expect them to.

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I wish I could do more. They're usually in really bad shape and it's awful having to turn them away. 

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Turn them away?

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Some of them are fine and some of them murder everyone within reach as soon as they get a good opportunity and there is no way to tell them apart. 

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So where do they go?

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I don't know. Out alone, I guess. 

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Even if they have an excellent reason not to let me actually do anything it's possible I could tell the difference. If they'd rather that than having to go out alone.

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I will suggest it the next time one comes. 

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Thanks.

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I think reading their minds would really bother you. 

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Turning harmless tormented people out to wander around really bothers me.

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Yeah, us too. We don't do it lightly. 

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So I'll check the next one who's willing to be checked.

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And we'll make it known that that's an option. 

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Thanks.

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Hug?

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Hug.

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It is awful about turning away prisoners of the Enemy. It is also awful looking at the site of a massacre they carried out. 

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Yep.

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Everything is in fact pretty awful but at least all the dead come back. Ooops. She hadn't meant to think that in front of Kiri. 

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It's okay. It's good that yours do.

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I should probably go, I promised to walk a few people back from the concert. 

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Okay. Where should we go?

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Guest rooms! I can show you where they are if you let me gather people first. 

One of the people she gathers is Maitimo, who is talking to two others and stops to introduce them. Saeros, Daeron, this is Kiribel. And privately, Luthien doesn't have any power and it'd take me more than a few months to change that though I may try anyway. These people are the King's advisors who he actually occasionally listens to. 

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Pleased to meet you, Kiri says to Saeros and Daeron. Your concert was stunning, she adds to Daeron.

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Thank you, he says agreeably. It is a delight to have guests. The Queen's taken a personal interest in your skills?

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She helped test my temperature limits. It was helpful.

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Towards what end? Ambitions of becoming a warrior?

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I wouldn't describe it as an ambition, but it might be useful, especially if there's a way to expand my range.

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You would need to extend it to several hundred miles. 

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Why that figure in particular?

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That's how far it is from here to Angband. 

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Well, there are places I could be that are not here in particular.

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They are not places where I'd expect you would be safe if the Enemy decided to retaliate or stop you. 

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This is true.

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It may be best that we all sit tight and wait for the Valar to do something. 

Daeron makes a demurring sort of noise. 

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My impression is that it might be a prolonged wait.

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Yes. But I don't think the Enemy will stay still for you to freeze him or burn him. 

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It's not a complete solution, but taking steps towards it is time-consuming enough that it seems worth starting now without being confident in everything else.

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That is reasonable and farsighted. 

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Thank you.

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And they talk about the music for the rest of the walk and then Luthien shows everyone to separate guest rooms. 

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And Kiri and Aleko sit up for a bit while she fills him in on what he missed about the day's events and writes things down, and then they go to bed.

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And in the morning someone brings breakfast and the closet has dresses in her size.  

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...does breakfast person know how her measurements were obtained?

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Oh, they have some talented seamstresses who can do it near-perfect just by looking, it's the centuries of practice, why, are they off?

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Not as far as she knows, but seamstresses cannot do that by looking where she's from.

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Well! Menegroth was a very peaceful place before the war and people took pride in all kinds of obscure skills. 

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Anyway the dresses look lovely please convey Kiri's compliments to the seamstresses.

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She will do so!

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Good.

Kiri picks out a dress, changes, steps out to see what the day holds.

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The day holds as much politicking as she can tolerate, and Luthien's happy to show her around, and the Dwarves want hot forges. 

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Sounds like a day. She goes about it.

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I have to admit, Luthien says hurriedly to her mid-afternoon, I didn't think the prisoner problem would come up for months, it is not like it happens constantly. But we have someone. 

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And they're willing to be checked?

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I didn't say you could edit minds - you won't, right? - just that you can check them and make sure they're safe. 

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I won't unless they want me to.

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Okay. Well you can explain that yourself, I think she'd have been scared off if I'd tried. 

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Yeah, that's fine. Where?

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Usually we don't let them into Doriath at all but I pleaded with my father. She's outside the gates of Menegroth under guard. 

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So there goes Kiri.

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And there she is. Under guard. Emaciated and shivering and looking utterly terrified. 

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...is she cold? She does not have to be cold. Hello. You said it would be okay for me to check your mind over to see if you're safe?

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I don't want them to drive me off, I could get captured again - I told them to just kill me and then they said you had powerful magic that could test whether I was safe -

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Sometimes people come out of Angband and then hurt other people. I can read minds. If you want to let me read your mind I can check if you're likely to do that.

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Okay. 

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Kiri approaches within range.

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She wants to stop existing but even Mandos cannot do that and she does not want to go to Mandos they say you can't interact with others there and it'll be a long time - such a long time - she's not fit for Valinor, not fit even for Menegroth, Mandos will not let her into his paradise to despoil it with the wants to stop existing - suicide is a crime - here she is - she is not in pain right now but she is not very far from the memories of it and they are very vivid memories. 

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...Kiri owes it to whoever she'd be living among to look a little harder. Impulses to violence: any?

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She would definitely kill pretty much everyone in Angband given the chance. She doesn't seem to want to hurt Elves. 

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I think you're safe.

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From what, exactly? 

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For what. I think you're safe to be around. - If you want me to but only if you want me to I can do more than read.

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I don't want anyone messing with my head again. 

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That's okay. It's up to you.

Kiri steps back. I don't think she wants to hurt any of you.

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It's not obvious that any of them wanted to, Luthien says. Just that somehow the Enemy can make them. 

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Is there something in particular I should be looking for?

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We don't know why they did it. I'm sorry. I do think you'd find it by looking but I don't know for what exactly and it's probably not intent. 

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...Kiri nods and steps back into range and... rummages.

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And finds torture. A lot of very elaborate torture. Much of it aimed at forcing oaths, which she did not give. There are forced hallucinations in which she's back at home with her family and then their faces melt into those of orcs. 

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...nothing in which this particular victim kills anyone who does not at that moment look like an orc?

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There are some hallucinations in the dark. Still doing other things to suggest 'orc', though. 

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Is there anything - placed - such that the Enemy could remotely interfere with her perceptions -

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Osanwe from a Maia or Vala can sometimes do that, but very clumsily. 

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To Lúthien: It is loosely possible that someone could osanwë her false perceptions leading her to believe that someone nearby was an orc.

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But she'd know that wasn't likely, since there aren't orcs in Menegroth! Right?

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No. She wouldn't. She doesn't have a way to be sure this is real.

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Can we just say to her - even if it's not real, it's not worth the chance, if you're in Angband anyway it's not like it does any good to kill orcs...

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You could try it. I am not sure at this point that her reasons to want to kill orcs have to do with whether it will accomplish anything.

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Do you think there's a way to make it safe?

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I could make her safe the same way I could make an orc safe but she doesn't want anyone else messing with her head. I haven't asked what she'll do if she has to pick between being driven out alone and risking recapture to being tampered with. She doesn't want to go to Mandos either.

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Mandos isn't so bad. 

Can I come talk with her?

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If you like.

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And she appears a little while later, flanked by guards, looking miserable. 

Kiri explained to me why you might hurt people by accident. The Enemy could maybe make it look like they were melting into orcs?

Happens all the time.

And you can't just - not kill the orcs, even if it happens?

I get so panicked -

- and then we'll panic right back and try to stop you, it'll get worse - ugh. 

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Kiri, can you make it so she doesn't kill Elves even if she thinks they're orcs in Angband, but she can still fight back against actual orcs?

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I don't think so. Not if they look the same to her.

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I - I don't think we can let you stay unless Kiri makes it so you don't kill anyone if they melt into an orc. Even if they attack you. Because people will know what happened to you and if you panic at them they might try to hold you down -

 

What does it feel like how will I know that's all she's doing -

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It doesn't feel like anything. I can bounce you what I'm doing with osanwë but it's all synaesthetic and might not make sense.

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Please let us, Luthien says, she doesn't need your permission she's just good and won't do it without, you don't have to do anything except say that if this were real you'd want us to stop you from killing people -

If this were real I would want that. 

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...okay. That'll do. Kiri can do the conditioning on reality part herself.

Do you want to see?

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Sure.

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So Kiri shows her her own mind and what she's doing: this and only this, just no attacking people, that's all -

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She shudders. Okay. Thank you. I can stay?

 

You can stay, Luthien says. 

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Kiri steps out of her range. You're welcome.

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Can I have something to eat?

Luthien has something. 

Thank you, Luthien says. You can see why we had such a hard time. 

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Yeah.

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Still not sure what we'll do without you. 

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I think the plan is for me to stay around here for a while.

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I thought only for a few months?

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...well, that's a while for me, but yes.

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I'm sorry, I forget how young you are. 

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I'll take that as a compliment.

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It's meant as one! You make me feel very silly for not having accomplished more. I always told myself 'well, you're barely two hundred' and what a threadbare excuse that looks, by this light!

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Well, you spent more of that time as a child.

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Pfft. 

 

And really, thank you. 

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You're welcome.

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I can find you a guest room, Luthien goes on happily, and food, and everything. 

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...well, that's sweet.

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And they go off together. 

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And Kiri goes to warm things for Dwarves.

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Maitimo joins her to play translator if it's needed further. I heard you helped someone. 

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Yes.

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Congratulations. 

 

We need the Enemy dead. I asked my father to have a look at range-extension for you as well. 

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Thank you.

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Everyone in Doriath likes you very well, apparently the Queen had fun and she's been stressed so they're all relieved. 

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Oh, I couldn't tell she was enjoying herself but I'm glad she did.

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The Maiar are dreadful at emotional cues. I'd have expected Melian to have learned but - they're also slow learners.

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Well, I will retroactively imagine her smiling.

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Smiling and giggling delightedly, the Maiar revel in Creation and its boundless capabilities. 

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Giggling it is.

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I know it's a bit hard to imagine. 

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Little bit.

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She's done a good job here. First Maia I've met who left me impressed with what she did with what she had.

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What do the others do?

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Wander around putting sticks in their mouths, a lot of them - they find senses really interesting and confusing - or protect one specific river at all costs and against all reason, or live in a tree and offer passersby prophecies about their life. 

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...the prophecies sound potentially useful.

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They are useless by design! If you'll change something about your fate you are not permitted to know it. So you get only information that definitionally won't affect the course of events.

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Then what's the point?

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I asked a prophecy-Maia that once and he looked at me very sadly and said I should take it up.

 

I guess that was a prophecy, which I did not listen to.

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Take it up?

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Sitting in a tree prophecying in full knowledge it wouldn't affect the world. I think the implication was supposed to be that was a better life than whatever one I had destined for me. But I might just disagree with that Maia about the nature of a good life.

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Could you in fact take up prophecy? Is it an acquired skill or something?

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You get knowledge you won't use. So if you're sincerely committed to sitting in a tree being useless, you'll get lots of knowledge, though nothing that'd move you to stop being useless.

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I think I like blessing divination better.

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Laughter. Me too.

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Pity it doesn't work for you.

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I expect it'd be gloomy on me. Our can't-do-a-thing-about-it kind is.

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Blessings can only get so gloomy. They're blessings. This does make them less informative, though.

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How would blessings convey pessimism?

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I would have been pessimistic if I'd drawn 'endurance' when I was drawing for the question of whether my powers work on the enemy. It's contextual. Sometimes you don't want 'surprise', or 'courage', or 'resilience', or 'fertility'.

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First three make sense. When would fertility mean pessimism?

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If one does not want children, usually. I mean, it can metaphorically stand in for having a really nice garden, but a classic limited-draw is people who are planning to have sex mixing 'health luck surprise fertility' draw two you want the first two?

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There is a very big cultural gap present, I think.

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Oh?

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Nothing about that makes any sense. Do - do married couples just sometimes accidentally wake up with a baby?

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...there is a pregnancy first. And while it is frowned upon they are not necessarily married at the time.

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Yes, there's a large cultural gap here. The Eldar couldn't get pregnant by accident, and couldn't stay pregnant without both fully desiring a child, and couldn't do things that result in pregnancy without being married.

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Marriage is a social recognition thing for us. And pregnancies just happen given the biological prerequisites and do not require paternal knowledge let alone either party's consent.

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You may have better prophecy but I think we have better reproduction.

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I'll concede that. Although inextricably tying marriage and sex seems like it'd have its own drawbacks.

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Accidental marriages happen but are very uncommon. Coerced ones have happened a few times in our history and are considered a terrible evil.

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Terrible evil if you don't call the parties 'married' afterwards, and I don't think that part could possibly help.

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Yes. Coerced or unintentional children seems much worse, though.

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Never occurred to me to compare. Anyway, in Welce the blessings are a reasonable warning as long as people remember to use them and wait if they get a result they don't like; I'm not sure what they do in other countries.

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Refrain, perhaps. That is quite a chance to take.

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I do not think that is what they do.

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If there's an engineering solution possible I think lots of people will be very interested in developing it for your world after we've ended death.

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That would be nice!

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I cannot promise the timescale on which it happens will impress you.

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It'd still be nice, just not as nice.

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My father works fast even in mortal terms but biology's pretty far afield for him. 

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Well, nobody's holding their breath.

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We are tremendously indebted to you. We'll make it happen.

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Thanks. It is not a traditional reward for wartime assistance but it's much more practical.

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Our world has no traditional rewards for wartime assistance and this seems like a good one to start a tradition with.

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Good plan.