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a curse on the streets of gold
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Naomi spends her childhood learning as much, as quickly, as she can. Her parents are ecstatic when her attention turns towards computing -- their field. She gets books, her own hardware from a very young age, excited conversations about so-and-so language, and hours and hours left alone, tinkering. 

She makes her first calculator when she is six and doesn't stop -- except in frustration when she encounters access restrictions.

A conversation from the dinner table. Naomi shows her mother an application, across which angry letters spell: "ACCESS DENIED."

This doesn't make sense to Naomi. If they were trying to prevent access to bad people, then the bad people would want to find out their secrets more. She wants to, too, so, so badly -- but her mother has been consumed by her work again. Naomi, ignored, goes back to her machine.

She finds the source. It's easier than she expected. Better. Thrilling. She picks up an interest in cryptography and computer security. She practices.

When she meets people who share her instincts she feels a breath of fresh air. In one corner of the internet they call themselves "Spiders".Their mission is to expose corporate secrets. There are now too many avenues for a firm to hide money -- the rich being so astronomically rich, and the poor being such a good excuse to hold a charity ball or two. Everyone agrees that the people at the top are corrupt, that income and class mobility is impossible, and that people will do the jobs their parents did until those jobs disappear and they die in the slums. Not everyone agrees on where the money goes. 

"I swear." One of the more influential members' pet topics is their Illuminati theory. "I've looked at some of the financials for this one. Billions of dollars go to departments with black-box budget items that haven't been properly audited in decades. No one knows where this money is going and every 'investigation' turns up clean. There have to be spies in the government or something. I'm even seeing stuff for massive large-scale fake IDs."

The evidence mounts. Others start to come around. Maybe it's not the Illuminati, but there is something tying many of the major corps together. Including the shipping company Naomi's parents work for. Mr. Illuminati Theory thinks that one in particular is running drugs, or sex trafficking, or both. She's never thought to steal their passwords before, or to try to get at their secure computers at work. But to think that even they could be part of something like this ...

The information she finds confirms some of the spiders' theories, but not all of them. And before the actual investigation starts, the one that would prove once and for all that they are involved in massive criminal activity, Naomi finds that she did her job too well -- the backdoor virus spread so thoroughly that the firm collapsed under the scandal and mounting costs of fixing it.

Six months later, another dinner conversation. Naomi's parents tell her they've found a new job. The firms they've picked are infected. She tells them not to take the jobs. They condescend at her until she storms off. Ignored, as usual. 

Naomi can't use the same strategy twice. Not for both of them, it would be so suspicious. She wants to, though. Not least because she knows what she'll find.

For days, she seethes.

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A small white creature appears in her window one night.

I can help you fix it, it says without speaking.

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She blinks. "Um. Fix what?"

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The problem that is making you upset! Make a contract with me and become a magical girl, and I can grant you a wish!

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Her gaze sharpens. "Any wish?"

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If it's within your potential.

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"What determines potential?"

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A variety of factors. I think you could get most things you might want.

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Most -- 

Her head spins with things she could fix. "Could I wish for an end to poverty?"

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I'm afraid you do not have enough potential for such a wish to succeed.

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"Can I wish for an infinite energy machine -- you'll probably say no. Damn it. Lower bounds. Can I wish for information -- all the words that have ever been spoken -- every secret or encrypted data, everywhere --"

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If you have strong feelings about your wish, that helps! All secrets is probably too much, still. The universe is a very big place, after all.

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"What else helps?"

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A variety of factors, as I said. But it's not a good idea to try to meddle with them too much. That can interfere with the purity of your wish!

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"Do you want anything in return for the wish? Or do you just care about -- about -- what do you mean by 'purity' --"

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It is the duty of all magical girls to fight and slay the demons that feed on the negative thoughts of ordinary people!

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That's ridiculous. This whole situation is ridiculous. But a wish ... "Current life expectancy? Time commitment? I don't -- I'm not good at fighting."

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The oldest magical girl I know of is almost two centuries old! There are other girls in the area who can help you.

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"Average current life expectancy?"

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It is climbing year by year. Current projections indicate that you can expect more than a century and a half.

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"That's ... for everyone? No matter the wish? Does no one die of old age?"

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Magical girls do not age like regular humans!

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"Do. They. Die. Of. Old. Age."

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No.

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Finally, a fucking straight answer. "How long could a magical girl, theoretically, live?"

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As long as the universe, in the most optimal conditions.

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She can do everything she wants to do herself

She can --

 

 

"Can I wish -- I want to be able to find out anything, to get into any system and keep everything I find or know, and copy it so everyone can know everything I do."

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That is within your potential. Are you ready to contract with me and become a magical girl?

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"Yes."

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Then with what wish will your soul shine?

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"I wish to be able to get into any system and decrypt anything and record anything I sense or do or think so everyone can know and so I can -- copy it and -- and prove it when I'm right --"

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Wish granted. Congratulations, you have successfully reduced net entropy.

For the briefest of instants, she experiences pain vastly in excess of anything she has ever known, in every particle of her being- and then it's over, and there's a light shining in front of her, pure and bright.

Take it, says the Incubator.

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She does. 

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In her hands rests a smooth purple gem, softly glowing and encased in a golden filigree harness with a small stylized eye shape at the top.

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Hundreds of years. Better get cracking. 

 

She transforms. Her dress has epaulettes made of various types of cable and about a dozen buttons. Her gem is on the back of her neck, and a cord -- entirely superficial -- extends from it and into both of the epaulettes. Her weapon is a sniper rifle. She can connect it to a visor that will expand her field of vision and let her interface with her data.

She extends the cords from her epaulettes with a twist of magic. One connects into her computer, and suddenly she is inside it, swimming, watching as its entire contents are copied and safe. The whole process occurs in the blink of an eye.

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Very impressive, says a new voice inside her head. An older girl in a dark green vest and long skirt stands outside the window, despite it being some forty stories above the ground. She taps the glass and gives a short wave.

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"How long have you been there?"

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"Fifteen seconds, give or take."

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"Long enough to hear my wish?" Naomi feels vaguely exposed.

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"I saw your transformation."

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"That's not a no," she says slowly. "Come on, I just spent like ten minutes talking to this thing." She points her thumb at the ... magic ... cat. "I want to talk to someone without feeling like I'm pulling teeth."

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"MSY policy is that a girl's wish is private, but they do maintain a confidential database of known wishes for statistical analysis. If the girl wants to share she can, or if her mentor hears it, she's encouraged to. You seem like you'd disprefer that. I can't share what I haven't heard, but I thought lying to your face would be a poor start to our relationship."

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"Oh! Oh it's not the content of the wish or anything I just, well, it was a very emotional moment and, I mean I just felt kind of exposed, but that's no reason to keep it secret, especially if it's useful." 

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"All right. Do you mind if I come in?"

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"Yes! I mean, no! Um. Let me open the window."

 

The curtains rustle as she fumbles with the screen.

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She waits patiently, then agilely slips inside.

"My name's Ellie, by the way."

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"Naomi. Nice to meet you," she says absently. "I think I have the wish memorized, but let me write it down just in case." Her visor blinks as a screen passes across it. She copies her memory of making the wish and saves it.

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"Did the Incubator tell you about grief cubes?"

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"No. I forgot to ask about basically everything. I don't think I was thinking very clearly."

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"They tend to be like that. It at least mentioned demons?"

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Naomi checks. (She can check!) "Yep. How long does it generally take to kill them? I had no clue how to use any kind of weapon. Before now."

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"They're not hard to kill, working in a group. The trick used to be finding them, but these days we have patrol schedules. And you'll find that you have an instinct for combat and your weapon now."

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"I'm not sure I would have chosen a sniper rifle, but I'll take it. What's yours?"

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She pulls a long-handled blade out of thin air and flicks it upwards before disappearing it.

"Knives."

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"Neat. Is there a dossier on the patrol schedules?"

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"There's a whole packet of introductory material. That I don't have with me because the little rat didn't tell me tonight was the night."

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"Right. So you're here for, um. Moral support? Answering basic questions? Or does the mentor assignment thing happen right away?"

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"I was slated for the next girl. Unless you really can't stand me."

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"I'm optimistic. And full of questions, but I don't know which answers are inside the introductory material and which you'd have to say yourself."

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"What say we walk and talk? Headquarters is downtown. We might run across the patrol on the way."

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Headquarters. So they really are that organized. "Sure, that works."

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"Can you get out the front without comment or are we both taking the window?"

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"My parents are both working late tonight, I'll be fine going out the front."

 

She detransforms in the kitchen, grabs a couple bananas from the counter, and heads downstairs. Then she waits in the part of the parking lot near the complex service entrance and puts her costume back on. It is extremely odd that she can move so easily in high heels. 

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Ellie is waiting and indicates the direction they should start heading in.

"The first thing that you should know is that your magic comes from your soul gem, and your soul gem is tied to your emotional state. Using magic or falling too deep into a negative emotional state taints your soul gem, and if it gets too dark that can turn into a feedback loop. If left alone, this can kill you. Grief cubes can purify your gem and clear your mind."

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Naomi follows. "Does 'negative emotional state' include anger?"

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"The true distinction is perhaps closer to states which inspire action and states that provoke lethargy."

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"I've never been prone to lethargy. Although the dark soul gem effect might happen regardless, which means I won't have any good coping mechanisms for if it gets that bad. Would it be a good idea to practice having a darker gem or is it safer to just keep it not-dark?"

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"Safer not to court disaster. Grief cubes are not in short supply such that that would be a useful skill."

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"How'd you get into all this?"

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"'All this' meaning...?"

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"Was there someone waiting outside your window, ready to show you the ropes? Because I am so sorry if you had to get all your information from the cat thing."

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"There was one other girl in my town. She died about a month later."

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"I asked the cat about life expectancy. It thinks people who wished more recently are going to live hundreds of years."

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"We probably will. Lots of things have changed since the MSY came."

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"Tell me more about MSY."

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"It stands for Mahou Shoujo Youkai. Originally Japanese, as the name implies. Founded in 2020, or thereabouts. These days it's a global organization."

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"What were things like for you before it came around? If you don't mind me asking."

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"It wasn't easy. I dropped out of school to hunt demons. There was very little margin."

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"I keep kicking myself about how I wished, I was way too distracted by 'any wish' and 'immortal' to really press for answers to my questions about, like, basic time commitment."

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"The MSY will give you a stipend. And an afterschool group to join so you have a reason to be out of the house. And a job, once you're old enough."

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"Convenient! What's your day-job?"

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"I manage Accounts Receivable at the local branch."

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"Do you do that for MSY or for someone else?"

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"One of our front companies."

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Naomi's not the best actress. It's a good thing she has to stay behind Ellie to follow her.

She does manage to compose herself after a few seconds. "So, what kinds of mentoring things are you expected to do?"

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"Make sure you know enough not to get yourself killed fighting demons. Help you figure out what your magic can do, what its strengths are and how to extend it. And recommend a place in the MSY that will fit you."

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"I can't wait to get started."

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"Eager. That's good." Pause. "Patrol's fighting a spawn about six blocks north, want to drop in?"

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"Sure!

 

I think I got better senses, on top of the wire thing you saw."

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"Stay alert, then, and tell me if you sense anything off."

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Does she?

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Everything looks normal from here.

After a few blocks, the street ahead begins to look slightly blurry, like it's behind a haze of evaporation.

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"There's some fog coming on the next street."

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"That would be the miasma. Formed by a concentration of demons. It's a sort of pocket dimension. The demons feed on normal humans who wander in."

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"Pocket dimension, huh. How will we know when we're inside it?"

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"Things go a little- curvy. Like bad perspective in old paintings."

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"Thanks for the warning."

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They get closer.

"Within the miasma, the only collateral damage you'll have to worry about is to other girls and any trapped humans."

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"Any common newbie mistakes?"

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"Demons can walk through walls. Don't let yourself get surrounded. If you pay attention to your soul gem, you can tell where they are."

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... Naomi starts paying attention to her soul gem and continues to keep a look out. 

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She feels like there are demons ahead. Nothing more specific until they enter the miasma, when as promised, everything bends just a little bit. Then she can sense three distinct groups, spaced in a rough semicircle in front of them.

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We're here, broadcasts Ellie.

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A girl in a mostly-orange costume appears in front of them.

"Hey Ellie. Hey new girl."

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"Kara. This is Naomi."

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"Nice to meet you."

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"Ah! Nice to meet you too." She manifests her rifle and visor. 

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"Sniper? Cool." She grins.

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She grins nervously. Too much of her remembers knowing almost nothing about guns. "I also got better senses. I don't know how much better. Haven't tested anything yet." She looks back over to Ellie.

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"Now's a good time. Can you drop us on that roof over there?"

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"Sure thing." She reaches out to grab them both-

And then they're on the roof.

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They do tests! Mostly on range, since they don't have enough time for more specific discernment. 

 

 

It turns out that Naomi's senses have twice the range of a baseline human. This includes receiving, but not broadcasting, magical girl telepathy. 

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"Handy for a sniper. You could have a melee spotter."

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"Do you think you'd be a good one?"

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"Technically I'm mid-range, but I can get closer than you more effectively."

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"We can try it. Unless being mid-range will put you in more danger."

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"Not until I'm satisfied you're capable of watching your own back alone."

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"Right."

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Speaking of which, is she still staying on the lookout for demons?

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Yep ...?

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Because there's a group coming up through the building.

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Naomi doesn't have any special sense for them, but she can hear them, and that's enough.

Some're coming up through this building. We need to move. 

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Kara?

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One sec.

Aaannnd- poof, they're across the street.

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"If you take me there I can get set up on that rooftop," she points. It's a tall one, about a block away. "Or if you're too tired I can stay and cover the entrance."

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"Good sightlines to the main battle from there."

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"Take her; I'll handle that group."

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Naomi is taken. Her setup is unrealistically fast. Thanks, magic. "I can receive telepathic messages from twice the distance of normal magical girls, but my transmission range is shorter. Just so you know."

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"Cool. Try not to hit me while you're sniping." And Kara poofs off.

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She's normally more chipper than this. But it's been a very disorienting day. She's incorporating -- more information than she had expected to. Tonight was going to be for her home computers, tomorrow morning for testing wireless download/upload speeds with magic. Instead she found out she has instinctual knowledge of how to operate a particular kind of sniper rifle, and that the organization her friend has been looking for might be composed of demon-fighting teenage girls with superpowers.

She wants to just tell them. She can, even. Her wish gave her the ability to record everything she senses, after this is done she could just go home and --

... no. She'll wait. Later she'll have more. She can stick with this for now.

She keeps a watch.

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There's a lot of demons on the street below, fighting a handful of girls. She could probably pick some of the outlying crowd off.

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She's cautious. She only makes shots she knows she can land. Her visor gives her lots of helpful information about how fast they're moving, among other things.

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Then she can thin out the pack a bit before Ellie returns, bearing a handful of eerie black cubes.

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When the pack is gone she cleans up and waves at the rest of the group. 

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"These are called grief cubes. Summon your gem."

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Gem!

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Ellie holds one of the cubes next to it. The faint tinge of darkness infusing Naomi's gem is sucked out, and the cube becomes blacker.

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Oh. Oh.

She giggles. "Thaaat was something. Oh, man, maybe next time I could even set up inside! ... if there's room, anyway. I guess there isn't in most buildings."

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"Not typically. Maybe if you come up with a close-quarters technique and practice."

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"Maybe I could! The visor has a lot of features I wasn't expecting -- and there were new interface options when there were demons versus when there weren't -- I wonder if I could change it myself, consciously? Or maybe change the kinds of bullets I fire or guide them with magic or something, I'm not sure what's most efficient yet --"

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"You don't have to figure everything out tonight."

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"True! I probably don't even have enough information to start prioritizing -- oh, we should probably go to the headquarters thing to get an information packet. Or it can wait if it's too late, I don't know anything about your schedule."

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"My schedule is clear."

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"Ooh, nice! I suppose you did that when you found out you were going to get a mentee. Nice meeting you all!" She turns around and waves at the other girls.

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They wave back from below.

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"Let's keep going then. Keep up." And she runs and jumps to the next roof.

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Naomi keeps up.

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They can make good time on rooftops. Their destination is one of the taller buildings downtown, they land in the alley behind and change out of their costumes.

"We'll go in the front."

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"Right. I'll follow you."

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The smartglass in the lobby displays a series of tasteful landscapes interspersed with corporate logos as Ellie palms the scanner to open the door.

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Naomi doesn't recognize all of them but she looks anyway, systematically, because she knows she'll be able to compare them later --

She follows.

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The security guard nods at them from behind the desk as they cross and enter the elevator. Ellie pushes the button for the top floor, and scans her palm again to authorize it.

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"Should I do that too?"

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"You'd only set off an alert. You're not in the system yet."

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"Glad I asked."

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"We could just talk to the girl who came to investigate, of course. There is a... range of responses for others."

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"Oh?"

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"Depending on who it is and how many of them there are and their reasons for trying to access the top floor."

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"Has that ever happened before?"

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"Not since I've been in town. A few years."

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Nod. 

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They reach the top, a sort of open-plan office space.

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"Hi there! You must be Naomi."

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"Yep! Naomi McPherson. Ellie's been really nice." She has been. All of the questions she thinks it's safe to ask get answered, no comments on her being particularly suspicious ... and probably a really excellent fighter, given how many demons she took out.

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"That's good to hear. Do you think you might want to keep her as mentor?"

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"Sure!" 

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"I'll make a note of it. This way, please." She leads the way over to a workstation and starts filling in a form. "Ellie, do you mind grabbing one of the tablets for her? In that drawer."

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She does so, and passes it over.

"You'll probably be able to pull the information right off it, but you're welcome to keep it."

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"Thanks!" She takes the tablet. It is a very very new model. She'd ask about restrictions on what she can do with it, but it's not like she'd actually follow them. 

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"That's yours, by the by, feel free to do whatever. Can I just get your palm scan here?"

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She hesitates. She'll have to look into what the palm record is later so she can know how much information they have on her, though.

Her hand goes forward and she reminds herself that every corp requires the same thing of its employees and that it's really not a big deal.

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The scanner flashes, then beeps.

"Thank you! Now, this next section is for magical specialization. In your own words, how would you describe it?"

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"I have two categories of abilities -- the first is a super-sensory suite where I have twice the range with sight and hearing and receiving telepathy messages, but not sending them. Haven't tested taste or smell or touch or the others but I'd expect them to be better too, somehow. The second is the ability to interface with computers and other machines that store digital media. An in-between thing is a visor I get when I transform that gives me different information depending on the situation I'm in -- the effect is entirely magic and I don't have conscious control over which bits I get, but it seems to be meant to work with my weapon."

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"Which is a sniper rifle."

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She nods and writes that all down.

"Sounds like a promising start to a fairly versatile clairvoyance set."

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"Agreed."

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"Ah! Thank you!"

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"Are you part of any clubs at school?"

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"The video game club. Apparently there's an ... us-specific ... club to join too?"

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"We try to tailor the cover story to the particular girl's strengths and interests."

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"You don't just give out targeted scholarships? Or is this for the time taken up by patrolling; I suppose you want to make it specific enough that no one else would be interested."

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"It's to cover for patrolling and training."

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"Right, right." All else aside, training sounds fun. "I'm just wondering how you generate the cover stories -- I guess you don't have a single Key Club-style volunteer organization that everyone joins, if you try to tailor it to everyone's interests ... or maybe you do and there are different ways to be involved?" Pause. "What's the age distribution around here, anyway?"

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"New contractees are around your age, late middle school to early high school. Most girls like to keep their apparent age around there; those of us in public-facing roles age up a little."

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Naomi blinks. "That is a thing I can do? Neat! Man, what other things can I do -- how magic efficient are they, does it take more to change from a default appearance or is it a transformation effect that's more one-and-done --"

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Are you sure about this? Ellie thinks privately to Makoto.

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I don't think she'll take it badly. Better to get it done while I'm here, in any case.

"It's actually a function of your soul gem," she says aloud, not giving any hint of the nonverbal exchange. "Your self resides in the gem and the body is a vehicle you drive. If you change your self-image, your body will shift to match."

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"Right, sure, but -- wow. Wow. That has so many implications. Is there a way to connect to multiple bodies? A form that always uses less magic no matter what your self-image is? How do you even change self-image, anyway?" 

 More relevantly to her interests: is the information she's downloaded stored in her gem, instead of her epaulettes, and how exactly is her magic interfacing with her computers, and how is it going to produce readable copies of the things she's sensed -- she's fairly sure now that her power works over wireless. Especially since, in general, the magic has been fairly friendly.

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"Maybe if you could find an empty body to link to. No one has ever succeeded or taken a notably non-human form."

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"It's just a trick of concentration. A lot of girls even do it subconsciously to make themselves prettier."

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"So I guess I should start looking at pictures of muscular women and start thinking of myself as someone who is really athletic? Or does that waste magic, would I have to do that the long way --" She doesn't want to bother if she would have to do it the long way but it would be nice. 

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"It's a small drain, but sustainable."

I guess you were right.

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I usually am.

"Be careful of drawing attention by changing too suddenly, though."

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"What happens if I mess up?"

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"We may have to spread some bribe money around, or we might ask you to relocate."

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... nod.

(So they don't have more magical ways of ensuring people don't know -- or they do, and they're not telling her.)

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"I'm sure it won't be a problem, though. It's very rare that it ever becomes one."

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"Right. Thanks for the reassurance." She's not reassured.

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"Anyway. We were talking about cover stories."

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Relief. "Right. What do you think would work?"

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"How are your grades? We could do something academic."

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"Or a gym membership."

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"My grades are good and I've never expressed an interest in sports before ... both, something academic first? What academic thing are you thinking of?"

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"Perhaps a tutoring program."

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"Wouldn't that work better for someone who didn't have good grades? ... honestly the gym membership is starting to sound more convenient, it's potentially an every-day activity. Or very time consuming on particular days."

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"You would be the one doing the tutoring, in that scenario."

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"Oh! Of course! Heh. You want to come up with the fictional student or should I?"

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"If you want to invent someone, you can."

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Fictional student! She has a name (Ansel Choate), is homeschooled -- rare, these days, but not unheard of -- and Naomi met her online when they hit it off and she said she was in her area. She lives in one of the richest parts of Boston, where the hyperclasses built their gigantic towers, and pays for Naomi's train tickets.

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"Looks good. I'll make sure it can stand some scrutiny."

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Nod. 

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"Let's see... We'll also want to set up a meeting for you with the MHD, Mental Health Department, but that doesn't have to happen right away."

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".... right." 

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"Mostly they just want to make sure your soul gem isn't corroding for non-magical reasons, and try to help if it is. Minimally intrusive."

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"Right! Right. Thanks. Do they have ways of measuring soul gem corrosion?"

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"Visual inspection usually suffices, but you could do spectrographic measurements if you wanted to."

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"I actually might!" She giggles. 

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"I think that's everything for tonight."

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"Sure! Any contact information if I need it? I guess it's probably more important I know how to contact you, Ellie -- do you want to schedule the next time we meet or should we wait for the paperwork to go through?"

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"It's all on the tablet."

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"Let me know when you've told your parents about the tutoring."

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"Will do!" She holds the tablet to her chest, tapping her fingers against it.

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"Shall we return, then?"

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"Yeah. In a week, or two, or?"

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"Sooner, if possible."

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"Tomorrow?"

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"I will be available."

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"Great! Meet here? After school or later?"

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"Here, after school if you can get away so quickly."

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"Sure."

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"It was nice meeting you, Naomi."

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"Nice to meet you too!" She leaves and makes her way back home.

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"She's a good fit for you."

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"You say that every time."

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"You're a good teacher, Ellie. Face it."

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"Give it a little more time. You'll be back at it soon enough."

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"Yeah."

 

The next afternoon, Ellie's waiting.

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Naomi's on time. She looks tired, probably because she spent all of last night reviewing her information security. She has no reason to keep any personal information anywhere except in her soul, now. She was torn on what to do with the few accounts that were attached to the pseudonym she used to talk to the Spiders, until she remembered that she could rely on her wish.

Of all the impossible things she saw that day, correct passwords appearing on her visor instantly was ... more mundane. 

Now the accounts never existed. Nor does any record of her accessing the servers from any computer, let alone her own.

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"Sleep well?"

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"Not really. I'll be fine.

 

 

What're we getting done today?"

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"More detailed powers testing. Do you want to start with your weapon or your hacking?"

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Do they know? "Uh. Um. You mean the computer stuff? By 'hacking'?"

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"It's a fairly obvious application."

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"Sure -- I guess I wasn't expecting you to get there so quickly -- since I think I can also do plenty of other things with it -- I'm still not sure if it works on wireless -- um. Does MSY have a particular use ... for ..." She waves a hand.

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"Take a deep breath and try to relax. I doubt you've done anything that could get you into trouble."

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She doubts that, doesn't she.

... Only on the internet does no one know if you're sixteen. Even in an organization where everyone looks sixteen by preference.

 

"Right," she says, "sorry. What tests did you want to do?"

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"That depends," she says patiently, "on whether you prefer to start with your weapon or your computer skills."

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"Computer skills."

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"Then let's go see how far you've gotten with it."

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Nod.

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They make their way to a computer lab.

"First, a simple speed test, I think."

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"Sure." Naomi transforms. Are the computers on? 

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Naomi reaches out her wires to connect to them as quickly as she can. It takes about a quarter of a second.

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"Can you turn them on like that?"

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She tries to dive in, like she did with her own computer. She sends her awareness down the wire -- nope. 

 

Maybe if she tries it through the Ethernet? Imitating a Wake-on-LAN signal? She sends out another wire and concentrates -- yes you do have it enabled, computer -- and then the screen blinks on. "Got it."

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"Good. Now try moving all the data from that one to this one." She points.

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"Everything including the operating system or just the files?"

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"Just the files."

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That task is pretty simple. Wires attach, copy paste done.

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She does a quick verification. All three hundred terabytes.

"Did you retain any of that?"

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She knows before she checks but she checks anyway. "Yep."

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"Interesting. How much?"

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"All of it?"

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"Do you have a storage limit?"

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"Not to my knowledge. I think I'd get pings on my visor about it if I had one. Any ideas on how to check for sure?"

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"From the outside, not beyond attempting to fill you up."

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"May as well try it?"

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"This is the largest concentration of junk data we have. Try copying again."

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She does it again. And again. And again.

 

 

"If you want me to go for an hour I can? I don't even need to concentrate on it that much."

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"Oh, really?"

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"It's like getting a ping and clicking "yes" every thirty seconds. It's not like I'm actively concentrating on channeling the data.

... it might help that I've done it before? I dunno."

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"Can you review the data as you copy it?"

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"No, unless I'm misunderstanding what you mean by review. I just copy and paste. There's an abstraction that represents the data and it moves and there's a progress bar on my visor."

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"I see. Is there no way to see your capacity?"

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"It's not showing up ..." Visor? Viiiiisor? 

 

 

"Nope."

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"That's slightly unhelpful."

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"No kidding. It's goddamn magic. Nothing about this makes sense."

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"Hmm. Perhaps we should set this inquiry aside for a while."

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"What do you want to do next?"

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"How quickly can you search through the data you have?"

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"I think if I'm looking for something specific I can get any particular datum basically immediately. For more depth it's limited by how quickly I can review everything personally. I'm going to have to organize it somehow ... collect more metadata? I'm not sure how the magic will handle it."

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"It's almost certainly worth the time to come up with an organizational scheme now rather than later."

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"I'll make one when I go home, how about?"

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"Do you have enough of a proper corpus?"

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"I mean, if you can think of other info you'd be okay with giving me I'm not going to say no."

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"Have you downloaded the Library of Congress yet?"

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"Nope! But now I really really want to."

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Ellie logs onto another computer. "Here you go."

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"Thank you so much!! This is the best present I've ever gotten."

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"You're welcome."

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Download. "And it comes with tons and tons of metadata! Which will probably help for the organizational system for integrating new things -- there must be some efficiency gained from having everything in one place. And maybe the hundred-thousandfold speed increase translates to other kinds of runtime problems."

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"Can you do other sorts of computation?"

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"Sometimes. It's hard to distinguish between the things that are mostly instant because of magic and the things that aren't, and I can't produce some effects unless I'm actively working with a system and it would be convenient to have a particular piece of information, in which case I get it immediately."

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"Related to the phrasing of your wish, no doubt."

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"Yeah."

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"You mentioned decryption, then. Have you tried it?"

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"Yep. It's worked for every problem I've tried, which means I'm probably not coming up with good enough tests."

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"We have access to some higher-grade algorithms if you want to try your hand at cracking those."

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"Sure."

 

Naomi tries them. She gets all the way up to one time pads and then cracks those. That has to be magic because cracking a one time pad is impossible. "Hmm. Maybe the limitations are if the power doesn't recognize something as encrypted? Or maybe they need a complete message."

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"All right." Fiddle fiddle. "Here are three encrypted datasets. At least one of them is a comprehensible message, and at least one of them is gibberish."

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She identifies the first comprehensible message when she notices that her power returns a decrypted version. The next one doesn't go. The last one produces a string of presumably-comprehensible Farsi.

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"Interesting. You don't speak this last, I assume?"

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"Nope. I'd have to machine-translate it afterwards to know what it means."

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"Try decrypting it again."

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She tries it once and gets a literal translation of each individual word. She tries it again and gets something more fluid, but there are footnotes crowding her visor screen that mark places where the translation isn't quite exact or where there's no equivalent meaning in English. Each successive try produces a compromise between those two options.

 

"... I think my wish is trying to teach me linguistics."

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"Excellent. A non-obvious capability."

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"The first of many, I hope."

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"And a suggestion for how to go about uncovering others."

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"Was your powers testing this straightforward?"

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"No, but I was more focused on the combat applications at the beginning."

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"Did you ever find something for short range?"

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"Some area denial effects. And just because the knives are made for throwing doesn't mean I have to."

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"Area denial effects?"

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"One of the first tricks I learned was how to make lightning jump continuously between two or more knives."

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"I'm worried that I have lots of useful skills but relatively fewer that are combat relevant. And I'm going to die on a patrol some day."

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"It's doubtful you will be assigned that many patrols. There are lots of girls with more direct skillsets than you, and the 'obligation' is only one hunt per year."

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"How many do you get?"

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"Several a week, typically."

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"Then I want more than one per year. Besides, I'd be crazy to pass up the opportunity to learn from someone who's that good at fighting."

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"As you like."

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"Do you wish you specialized elsewhere?"

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"Occasionally. Not while fighting."

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"I suppose in a way it's safer. If MSY ever breaks down or has to conscript more people to fight -- demons or something else -- you're likelier to survive."

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"That's what they call a low-percentage scenario."

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"I guess."

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"Why are you so concerned about this?"

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"MSY's nice. It's definitely helped people. But from what I can tell there's also no exit option. Which makes sense, because you'd still have to coordinate grief cube patrols and distribution. But I'm worried about -- alienating someone higher up from me and being put on dangerous patrols for the rest of my life. And then not being able to defend myself, or go somewhere else because MSY is global -- is it only MSY that does this?"

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"The MSY is currently the only large-scale organization of magical girls. But it is a federal structure. If you don't care for one region, move to another."

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Breathe. "Good."

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"There are always options."

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"Helps to know what they are first." 

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"Don't be afraid to create your own."

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"If I can find out how."

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"That comes from experience, as long as you're looking for opportunities."

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"I can substitute for experience by reading, sometimes. Or asking people questions. Obviously not as much as I'd like."

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"You're young, yet. There's time."

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"It's pretty nice being immortal."

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"Just so."

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"Anything else on the docket for today?"

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"I think that will suffice. Show me your gem, if you would."

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Naomi reaches behind her neck and grabs it and holds it out in front of her. 

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"It's not darkened too badly. Do you intend on using magic tonight?"

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Not darkened too badly after having used her visor all last night and all today means she could probably stand to wait -- "I think I'll be fine until tomorrow."

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"Better safe than sorry, then." Ellie hands her a small metal case.

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She takes the case. "How are these rationed?"

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"On an as-needed basis for frequent patrollers, around two a week for baseline."

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"Will you be able to return tomorrow?"

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"Yep! Same time as today?"

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"Yes."

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Naomi goes home. Yesterday she was too distracted by how obviously powerful MSY was to do any major decision making about what to do about it -- too terrified of them finding out about what she did to think about whether it was justified that she did it. Whatever Ellie says, it would almost certainly be a black mark on her record -- in an organization she will never be able to leave -- for them to find out that she destroyed one of their major shipping companies. A company she thought was incurably corrupt, a company she thought was running drugs and sex trafficking and in bed with the government besides.

She had seen firsthand some of the correspondence with contacts in government about fake IDs, about conveniently failing to audit certain departments, about the "cake" classification which seemed so obviously to be drugs before she realized it was probably grief cubes. About the frequency with which young, beautiful girls could be seen in some departments that she only now knew to be there not because they were sex workers but because they were immortal and had superpowers that the firms needed to maintain their competitive advantage.

But now ...

Almost all of the evidence she remembers was explained by what she now knew about MSY. The only exceptions are the extent to which the magical girls have infiltrated the government, and what kinds of conduct they'll excuse from one of their own -- and what amounts or styles of money, influence, or magic they'll throw around to protect them. 

She takes out her gem and looks at it. This is her, now. Not that she really minds -- the things she can do now! -- but it also means she's dependent on the same cubes she condemned her parents' company for transporting. If she had contracted a month earlier she could have died, having less access to grief cubes than she does now. If MSY didn't exist she could have died. Maybe they're not so bad.

Maybe everything she did was for nothing --

Maybe she cost her parents their jobs for nothing --

Maybe --

She notices her gem getting darker and her eyes widen and she cries, so scared, before fumbling for the box of grief cubes and holding one to her gem and fixing it --

No, she tells herself firmly. Everything was not for nothing. It's ... probably. No. It's almost certainly true that their massive collusion means they're overvalued and prices are higher than they would be otherwise, that everyone who knows about MSY has insider information about which firms will succeed and which will fail based on whether they have access to magic, that no one except they can make informed decisions about anything, that they're an integral part of the hyperclass apathy problem that plagues her world.

And that is something she can fix. Maybe she can even work with MSY to do it.

A sudden tiredness overcomes Naomi as she realizes that she hasn't slept in over 24 hours. She can ... she can investigate tomorrow. She can work out a plan to rise through the ranks of MSY and reveal them to the world -- tomorrow.

She sleeps.

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The night passes and so does the day, as is their wont.

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Naomi arrives at MSY headquarters, chipper and rested and five minutes early. 

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"Good afternoon."

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"Heya! Slept better today." She bounces.

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"That is apparent. How do you feel about combat training today?"

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"Good! Is there a training room?"

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"Yes. Underground." They take the elevator.

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"I'm actually really excited to learn different applications -- there are a bunch of utility uses for magic, right?"

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"Certainly, though few are capable of exploiting most."

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"Do some people just find it harder to use magic?"

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"Expanding your magic beyond what you are initially capable of is no mean feat."

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"And 'initially capable' is set when you wish? That's it?"

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"Yes."

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"That's horrible. Is there at least a way to test how much you have so people with less magic don't have to do as many patrols?"

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"Power levels are comparable, in general. The variation in specific application is most often the discriminating criterion."

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"I suppose that's not so bad. Still seems sad if someone really hates whatever ability they ended up with."

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"I suppose it would be."

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"Now, what can I do. Hmm." She transforms and fans out her epaulettes, which turn into various different cables. "Could maybe add a whip for short range? Or use them like rope for tying. I bet some have better tensile strength than others, and I can control which ones appear. So long as they could also feasibly transmit data and have ports on the end."

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"Worth exploring. Can you only extend them from the shoulders?"

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She tries manifesting a cable in her hand. It works. "That felt way more effortful than it does extending them from the shoulders. Which barely uses more magic than moving my arm, not that I've actually tested that."

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"Can you make them tougher on purpose?"

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"Probably?"

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Ellie conjures a knife in her hand and throws it, slicing through the cable coming from Naomi's hand.

"Show me."

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Naomi conjures a sheet of thick cables and twists it into a rope. "Try now?"

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The next knife gets stuck halfway through the cables.

"Better."

A spark jumps from Ellie's hand to the knife.

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The cables are coated in non-conductive kevlar so Naomi's not concerned.

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The inside of the cables, however, are not non-conductive. The spark travels through the knife up the cables and back to her body.

Zap.

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Ouch. 

"Damn it, fuck, fuck --" Her hair is a bit singed. "I should have seen that coming."

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"Yes. Don't get so excited by a clever idea that you fail to consider ways it could go wrong."

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"Want to try again?"

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The knives disappear.

"When you're ready."

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This time she makes a giant electric grid cable. It curls around from her center back and she has it stand ready by her side. "Fire away."

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Ellie produces four knives, two in each hand and throws them one after the other. They all cut exactly the same spot, the previous disappearing just before the next hits.

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Naomi doesn't notice this at first. When she does she starts rotating the wire.

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More knives. And since they no longer need to disappear to make room for new ones, they stay in place. When there are three sticking out of the cable, Ellie sends another charge of electricity at them. This one doesn't travel up the wire, but bounces between the knives, seeming to grow stronger with each jump.

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Naomi manifests a ball of interconnected netted cables around the knives.

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Another pair of knives crossing the net and the contained electricity jumps up to one and amplifies again, and courses through the wires burning through them from the inside out before hitting the other knife and and bouncing back down.

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Naomi manifests another ball of more thinly netted cables and compresses it around the electricity, trying to smother it.

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It leaps off through a gap into a waiting knife in Ellie's hand, which she then throws at Naomi.

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Eep. Her shoulder cables fan out in front of her and weave together into a shield. 

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The knife clatters off the cables and falls to the ground, thrumming faintly.

"Good." Ellie holds out a hand towards the fallen blade, and a fat bolt arcs from it into her palm.

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"They're easiest to move. Felt a bit like covering my face with my hands."

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"That's important to know. You need options for the 'oh shit' moments."

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... she giggles. "So what other things should we test? How long I can leave the cables manifested, whether they disappear if I get too far away or out of sight ..."

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Nod. "A good idea."

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Naomi manifests some cables. "Right, first test it is then. What other things do you think are important -- I was considering learning how to use the cables as a whip too but I don't know anything about how to use one so I'd have to learn by myself."

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"It's an uncommon weapon form. I don't think there is a girl in town who has one natively."

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"Inconvenient. What other things could I focus on? What should I prioritize?"

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"As far as combat- don't try to get good with everything at once. Expand your horizons, keep what possibilities in mind, but have a base first. Pick one or two things. An easy attack and an easy defense. Learn those well, then branch out. Trust your teammates to cover your back while you're learning."

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"So I'll save the whip for later then and focus on -- probably the rifle, since I got more instincts for that. And use the cables as defense."

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"Sensible. This way." They move to a larger open room, with a terminal near the doorway. Ellie starts fiddling with it.

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Naomi disperses the cables -- they were using spectrographic analysis to measure the decay rate of her gem -- and follows.

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Panels slide out of the floor and walls, constructing a veritable maze. Built-in holoprojectors turn it into a facsimile of a section of city alleyways."

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Oooooh. "We going to play capture the flag or something?"

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"More of a search-and-destroy."

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"Oooh, go on."

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"There is a powerful demon hiding somewhere within this maze, along with its minions. There may also be civilians trapped within the miasma. Your task is to infiltrate, locate the demon, and kill it, without harming or being seen by any civilians."

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"Time frame?"

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"Quicker is better; the longer it stays alive, the greater the chance it will kill a civilian."

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Nod. Are there places Naomi can jump up to to get a better vantage point?

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Not from her current position.

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There's a lot of twists and turns. That will certainly be helpful.

She hears footsteps ahead, approaching.

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... probably a civilian. She goes another way.

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Dead end.

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Still no way to get higher?

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She could probably jump up over there...

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Jump! And while she does that, she looks down and around for her map and for anything remotely demon-shaped.

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Frustratingly, her lines of sight are not great, even from elevation.


She does catch a flicker of demon-shaped movement disappearing around that corner, though.

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Her visor can do a lot with tiny glimpses. Although it's annoying to have to keep swiveling her head around. Maybe she should bring drones or cameras next time.

She follows it. 

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It stays a step ahead for a few turns, then flits into what's likely to be a cul-de-sac.

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Her gun doesn't easily do "at the ready". She keeps her cables flared just in case as she goes towards it.

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A demon arm comes flying toward her at head height as she rounds the corner.

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The cables block it -- fuck, she didn't expect it to be right there --

Is there any high ground she can get to? A roof, maybe?

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She's a magical girl. She has complete control of a body that can be re-shaped to her will. She jumps.

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The demon reaches but fails to grasp her.

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She vaults onto the roof and sets up and each of the two seconds she spends doing it feel like an eternity. She aims and fires.

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It drops, and the projectors giving it its appearance flicker out, leaving a robotic shell. The "buildings" begin to retract back into the floor.

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She's not sure whether she should be hiding from any additional minions. Are they gone too?

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Yep.

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"Hey Ellie! Was I supposed to be able to one-shot it?"

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"If you were able to engineer a situation in which you could effectively bring your primary weapon to bear in an environment mildly hostile to that task, that would not be an unexpected outcome."

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"... you can make the simulations as powerful as you want, right? Are they based on the power levels of real demons or am I going against weak ones for practice?"

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"It was typical of one you might encounter, though you would seldom see one at that level alone."

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"... I'm going to be really screwed if there are too many, aren't I. Maybe I should practice firing it from short range too. I wouldn't hurt myself doing that."

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"Yes, that can be arranged." More terminal typing, and walls once again slide up from the floor. This time they form a shooting range with three tiers of targets: close, midrange, and far.

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"Fast!"

 

This time she stays on her feet and forgoes the gun's mount. She fires at the close range target several times, as quickly as she can, and ... well, she hits it, but she was aiming for the center of mass and clips the shoulder instead.

She frowns, tries again while giving herself the half-second it takes to aim, and fires true. "Rate of fire's going to be a problem."

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"It's a different sort of information gathering than hacking a database."

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"Yeah. Feels kind of like muscle memory, like it's expecting me to go at a specific pace depending on how far I am from the target."

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"Why?"

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"You mentioned that fighting instincts come with the magic? It's like that."

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"Instincts are well and good, but don't let them limit you."

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"Practice makes perfect!"

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"Continue, then."

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Mid range and long range! Aim is easier if she's mounted, closer to the ground, or closer to the target. For long-range she averages a round every two seconds, for short range she goes down to a half-second per.

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"So you can fire faster over shorter distances."

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"Takes less time for the targeting program to work, I think. But it's not fast enough to matter unless I really practice. Half a second is a long time." Instincts feeding her information, so handy. 

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"How literal a program is it?"

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"You asking if I can tinker with it?"

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"Yes."

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She checks. "Looks like I can."

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"You may want to look into what tradeoffs or optimizations can be made, or perhaps set up multiple for different situations."

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"What kindsa situations?"

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"Close range, long range, low light, bright light, no light, target saturation, rain, high winds, fog."

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Note note note. "How about inside a miasma?"

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"Worth a try, though the miasma's distortion is resistant to many clarifying effects."

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"Inconvenient. Oh well."

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"But I think that will do for a homework assignment."

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"Awww. I was having fun."

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"In all things, moderation."

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Nod. She almost skips home. When she's there she gets through about half of the implementations for the different light-environment targeting systems before remembering that she should probably find a way to organize the data she already has in preparation for Mission: Download the Internet. The targeting system is comparatively easier, but this problem is more fun, even though she doesn't make much progress on it in the six hours before she falls asleep.

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Ellie and Makoto are out patrolling.

"So what do you think of your new girl so far?"

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"Sharp. Quick to learn and eager to improve."

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"Mhm."

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"You found something interesting. What?"

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"Not something. A lack of something. Her parents worked for Xeltan before it folded."

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"The one we let the spiders take?"

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"Yes. We took the parents back in at Iti, and days later..."

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Soft grunt. "With that wish. You think she was involved with the takedown?"

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"There are absolutely no records that would indicate that."

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"Of course not."

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"Quick learner indeed. You won't have much work to teach her proper paranoia."

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"So it's just going to slide?"

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"Not in a way that would be constructive, no."

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"So yeah, it'll slide for now. Maybe later when she's invested we'll tell her we're adding it to her resume."

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The next day Naomi's getting ready to leave when she hears her mother come home from work early. She winces. "Hey Mom, heading out!"

"Again?"

"Yeah. Tutoring."

"That girl sure needs a lot of help --"

"Yep, Ansel's pretty awful at math."

"Dear, can I see that ticket she bought you --"

Naomi opens it on her tablet. Her mother looks it over. "If I find out," she says darkly, "that you made this --"

"Jesus -- Mom, no. Please, I'm going to be late."

Her mother sniffs and turns to make herself a snack and Naomi ghosts out the door, texting Ellie to warn her about her tardiness. 

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Thanks for understanding.

She gets there when she gets there. "What're we doing today?"

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"What would you like to do?"

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"I made a new targeting program for different light situations. But I was mostly making it using the lights in my room and I haven't properly tested it yet."

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"Let's go put it through its paces, then."

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They get to the training room quickly. Naomi talks Ellie's ear off about how she made it and where she thinks the flaws are so far.

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Ellie offers some additional pointers on what to look at and how things might behave in a realistic scenario.

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Naomi listens attentively! She interrupts sometimes to ask for clarification on some points.

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The range can be modified to explicitly demonstrate these.

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Testing!

 

... Naomi blinks her eyes, wincing, after they put her tracking system through a flashbang. "I want to find a way to predict those so I can shut my eyes and see a sped-up recording of what happened afterwards."

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"Have you studied object-recognition algorithms in school?"

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"Not in school ..."

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"But you're familiar with them."

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"Yeah."

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"I can procure examples of the most common grenade varieties for you to train on, if you wish."

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"Ooooooh."

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"Provided, of course, you will not use them as grenades in an unsupervised setting."

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"I wasn't even considering the possibility that I could take them out of the training room, but now that you mention it ..."

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"Okay, okay, fine. It was worth a shot anyway."

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"Grenades are not toys."

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"I am aware! But also pressure cookers are not toys, and I've ever used one of those before. And also they can explode, have you ever seen a pressure cooker explode?"

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"An exploded pressure cooker is a failed state. An exploded grenade is a successful state."

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"Look. I know how they work. I know that they're dangerous. I wasn't actually expecting you to let them leave this room. I will be safe around the grenades."

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"Good."

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They run tests. Naomi gets lots of images of various unexploded grenades and flashbangs.

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So many.

And they can also make sure the recording functions as expected.

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So many sample sounds! Turns out that Naomi can save sounds that she's heard as easily as she can save, copy, and organize her other memories.

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Can she reconstruct a sound recording into a physical map of an area?

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She could probably do it if she wrote something for it, but not presently. 

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"That would be another option for dealing with visual impairment."

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"Do you guys have any echolocation imaging software handy? Because otherwise that's going to take me some time."

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"I'm sure we can find some somewhere."

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"Do you expect that you would feel comfortable going on patrol soon?"

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"Yeah. Helps to have gotten some practice at using the cables. And done research into what counts as a cable and what materials I can manifest with how much magic."

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"Do you need a free day before we go into that for any reason?"

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"Yeah. I'll want to finish those projects I started. Can magic make you not need sleep? If it's reasonable I could take some cubes, get at least the grenade one done over tonight and tomorrow, and we could go out on Saturday."

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"Yes, it's another artifact of control over your body."

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"You don't need to practice fine control or anything to make sure you don't get brain damage?"

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"Just don't stay up more than four days in a row and you'll be fine."

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Nod. 

She goes home with two extra grief cubes. When she gets there she thinks about self-modification -- if she has perfect recall of her sense memories, she should be at an advantage with adjusting, not just her body, but her brain. If she can safely make it so she doesn't need sleep, she might be able to do the same thing with a stimulant -- notice a particular mental state and preserve it for longer than it would naturally go, fix problems as they came up afterwards. 

She tries it with coffee, working for a couple hours in a flow state so focused that she forgets why she's working on her current problem, forgets entirely about magic and magical girls and her impending patrol in a little over a day from now. Then when she notices she's out of it she looks at the experience and picks it apart. She finds one of those moments, one where reliving it makes her feel like herself, sets a reminder to start getting ready for school, and tells her magic to make her feel that for the next twelve hours.

When the sun comes up she's done with the grenade recognition program, with fixing her targeting system so it responds better to different light environments, and with an organization system that will help her store and sort through her sense data. At some point she'll be less conservative about using the data to adjust her mental state, but right now she doesn't know enough neuroscience. (And when she learns some more she'll probably want to touch those systems even less -- but she can probably get somewhere just from looking at the way her magic records information about states she already knows are safe.)

She goes to school feeling accomplished and like she's had a fresh night of sleep. 

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Yeah. I took the lack of sleep thing a bit further and extended a caffeinated flow state for a while. I want to try it again for tomorrow night. Do you know anything about magical girl brain modification experiments? Do the gems work like reset points or is everything more malleable? 

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It is generally inadvisable to perform extensive self-modification of that sort without a spotter or a knack for healing in general and an excellent idea of what you are doing.
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Oh shit was the coffee thing unsafe is there a list of things that are safe

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There are better and worse methods. How long did you maintain it for?
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twelve hours

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Makoto, I need you to check Naomi's status.

And you were able to disengage with no problems? No withdrawal symptoms?
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On it.

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no more than usual? I drink coffee pretty regularly

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She's fine. No sign of a cascade.
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Good.


Please check in with me before implementing your next truly brilliant scheme to transcend the limits of your mortal frame.
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yes okay it was a bad idea sorry

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Otherwise I will see you Saturday. 10 PM.
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Right, I'll be at the office then

I don't want to send you questions at all hours if you're busy, when are good times to check in if I have a question or idea that's not covered in the material I have

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Your training is my highest priority. You may contact me whenever you wish.
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That's really nice of you but also I don't want to wake you up in the middle of the night if I don't have to

Emergency contact can be whenever but non-emergency stuff should wait until what time frames, generally?

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Thanks! :)

By now Naomi's train has arrived. She goes to school and spends most of her class time paying a quarter of her attention to her schoolwork and spending the rest working on her projects. When she gets home she considers doing the coffee trick again before she decides that doing research into how to do it sustainably can wait and in the meanwhile she can just stay up by drinking actual coffee. 

By 1 PM Saturday she's ... not quite done with the mapping program. It works when she gets her cables to produce a soft, consistent, microphonic sound, but trying to map the walls with normal noise looks like it'll be a longer-term project.

Then she organizes her bedroom and notes to make it look like she's been doing homework, falls asleep, and sneaks out the window at 9:30. She gets to the local MSY office fifteen minutes later.

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Ellie is there.

"You're early. Good."

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She's also nervous. Her returning grin is a bit shaky. "Been practicing the cable stuff too. The shield comes up a lot faster than it used to."

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"With luck you won't need to use it much tonight."

The other four girls arrive. "We'll start near the airport, and sweep north through Chelsea."

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Nod.

Naomi transforms and sets up a cable to produce noise for her map. She sets the frequency much higher than can be heard by standard humans, but not so high that she herself can't hear. A high-pitched mosquito whine gives her more information about her surroundings than she would get otherwise, even with her better senses. 

It is still extremely annoying and she half-wishes she came up with a different brilliant idea to get the program to work.

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Boston does not stay awake as late as New York City, but at ten on a Saturday night there's still enough bustle on the main streets below to produce extraneous echoes as they jump roof to roof.

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Which are mostly in the wrong frequency and therefore irrelevant. God, but she wishes she didn't have to keep paying attention to the whine. It sounds like a fly buzzing constantly in her ear. 

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"You seem distracted."

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"Echolocation map works by emitting a high-pitched frequency I can hear. Good for not re-checking areas, and it can see further than I can unassisted."

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"Work on compartmentalizing. Dividing your attention is a useful trick if you can do it reliably."

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"Will do."

How is finding demons going?

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None so fa- no wait that street looks weird to her echolocator.

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"Hey guys, something's off about Endicott Street."

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"Yes. A miasma. Check your gem."

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It's fainty glowing. Figures. "How long ago did you notice it?"

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"A minute or so. The benefits of experience. But you did better than most new girls. Can you scout it before we enter?"

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"What should I be looking for?"

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"Significant terrain alteration, number and position of enemy forces, civilians."

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Sounds simple enough.

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Her echolocator can't pick up any details, and simple visual inspection is similarly fruitless.

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"I can't see anything. It looks like a big fuzzy mess."

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"Try extending a cable inside."

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No such luck.

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"Doesn't work. Maybe if I had a microphone."

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"The normal way, then." Everyone groups up, and they enter the miasma together.

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It's just as annoyingly disorienting as last time. Naomi tries, vainly, to put together a general map using her echolocator, but it gets so many conflicting signals about where the walls are that all she can see on her interface is a fuzzy mess. She cuts the sound irritably and pulls up a gauge tracking the brightness of her gem instead. 

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Her eyes can see more clearly than the echolocator.

There's a small group of people slowly walking down the street away from them, as if in a daze.

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"Oh, good. Kara, take Naomi and check that that building's clear. Once she's set up, start scouting for other groups. We'll move these people out of the way, report back if you find anything."

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"Will do."

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The orange teleporter offers a hand and a smile. "We'll check by triangulation first, okay?"

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Tentative smile back. Hand-grab. 

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They teleport. Kara checks her gem for signs of demons, then moves them to the next location where she repeats the action. After another jump, she says "Looks clear to me."

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"So we mark this area clear somehow? Or keep going?"

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"You're a sniper, right? I'm gonna drop you at the top so you can do your thing."

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"Sounds good. I can hear, but not send, telepathy from twice the normal distance. Might help in a tight spot or if you need me to relay something."

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"Gotcha." Pop up.

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Whoosh-clang-clang setup done. Naomi waits and watches.

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Orange Kara pops away.

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Keep an eye out for civilians.

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On it.

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One to the north, slowly shuffling towards a pair of demons.

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Does she have a clear line of fire to the demons?

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Yep. Easy shot.

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She fires. The one closest to the civilian, first, and then the other one.

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Bang bang. Two kills.

The civilian continues shuffling forwards, seemingly unaffected.

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There's a civilian over there, she broadcasts, sending the location. Might be demons too, I just got a couple. 

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Noted. Keep looking.

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Naomi scans the shifting buildings.

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A couple more stragglers, hostile and otherwise. Easily mopped up.


Then Kara broadcasts to the group: Big group! Northwest of entry, block and a half!

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Not really, no.

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She sighs and remanifests her rifle, holding it at the ready by her side. 

Can she safely jump off the building and head in that direction?

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Yep.

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She does that, keeping her eyes out and her cables up. 

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"Joining us, are you?"

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Nervous grin. "Figured I could help."

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"Don't forget to call your movements out. Communication is key."

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"Right, sorry."

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"Gladly."

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There are a lot of demons waiting. But there are six magical girls, and five of them are well-practiced at this sort of thing.


When it's over, Ellie tosses a grief cube to Naomi.

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Who takes it, shakily. She ended up having to rely on her cables more than she was hoping.

"Th -- thanks." Has she ever done this much physical activity at once? She's not sure.

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"Deep breaths."

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Deep breaths. Yeah. She can do that. In, out. In, out.

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"You did well. Your control of the cables was good."

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"Yeah!" enthuses one of the others. "So cool. Like Mami-san."

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"Mami-san?"

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"Mami Tomoe, leader of the Mitakihara Four and one of the founding members of the MSY. Her signature is ribbons, and flintlock muskets."

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Giggle. "I guess the cat thing sticks to what it likes when it dishes out powers. Or maybe it's just unoriginal."

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"There are a lot of magical girls."

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"And so it makes sense that powers and weapons get repeated ...? Okay ... is there a database of all the weapons people have?"

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"Yes."

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"Right, of course there is -- is there an anonymized one? Or just one with weapon variance?"

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"Yes."

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"Caaaan I have a copy?" Puppy dog eyes. 

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"I don't see why not."

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"For now, though, we should continue our sweep."

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The rest of the patrol is uneventful, and they return to the headquarters building a few hours later.

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"That was way less terrifying than I thought it would be."

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"Caution is good, but fear in excess is as much a problem as a lack thereof."

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"Good advice, as usual."

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"I try."

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"See you again tomorrow?"

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"Yes."

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They arrange a time. Naomi considers going through the window, before reasoning that Ellie is way better at stealth and she might fuck up their security. She changes back and goes through the front door. 

... only to meet her father there. "Where the hell have you been?"

"Um. Out with friends?"

"Which friends? You've been locked in your room all day and now suddenly you're spending Saturday night who knows where and coming home at one in the morning?"

"I'm safe, Dad. I'm right here. I can take care of myself."

"No. Naomi, you're grounded. And after two weeks of that, you'll need to stick to a curfew. Home by ten."

"Dad!"

"Don't 'dad!' me."

... Naomi goes up to her room and fumes. She picks up her phone.

Can't do tomorrow. Got grounded. 

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two weeks

should maybe have come in through the window

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A lesson to remember for the future. There are various options for circumventing this, if you wish.
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yeah they didn't like

demand to see this phone

I have some precautions for them deciding to pick through all my electronics when I'm gone, but fewer for them demanding to see something I'm using while I'm using it

I should look for cameras around the windows maybe

or find a way to be invisible or stealthy or something

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If you require any outside resources, feel free to ask.
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how did you get into my room that one night

did you know where the cameras were beforehand or

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We have watchdogs in the public systems that stop our travels from raising any flags.
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can I look at them to see how good they are? will send you a way to do that securely, unless

She stops typing. It's probably not a good idea to ask Ellie to break into her room every night. If she keeps to herself she'll be able to stick to her normal routine -- or what was her normal routine, before she turned into a magic rock.

unless msy has other resources for that. worried about parents seeing you if you come personally, especially often

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One moment.


About ten minutes later, another text.

Log in here with MSY credentials.
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Naomi fiddles around with the pad she was given on her first day. 

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Naomi downloads it. 

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It's complex, to say the least. Certainly the most intricate program she's ever seen.

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She uses her magic to crack it, then tries to reverse engineer the method it used, since it's something she's familiar with. She tries it again, but doesn't get anywhere with the next method.

She writes up a note of the vulnerability and uploads it to the server. 

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There's no immediate response.

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I found a flaw in the watchdog but it was non-trivial and I had to use magic to find it

I could maybe do more things? it was kind of fun

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well hopefully I'll learn about the systems that way

I guess some of it's too classified for that

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thanks

 

She spends the night in her room. She can't talk to the spiders any more, since that would compromise her ... cover? Is she really undercover? She did just white-hat for MSY, and is personally reliant on them to keep her alive, via their grief cubes. It would probably be rude to go patrolling herself for some extras. Not to mention dangerous. Maybe even against some-or-other rule.

She works on the projects she made for herself. She'll finish them after a week, if she doesn't have anything else to do.

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There's a familiar face on her train that Monday.

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"What are you doing here?"

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She pats the small briefcase next to her.

"Just a drop off. And to check if there's anything you'd rather say face-to-face."

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"Mostly I'm going completely stir crazy and I can't wait for this to be over."

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"It's been less than two days."

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She can't exactly say that she cut all ties to most of her friends on the internet after she became a magical girl. And that Ellie, and playing around with her magic, has been occupying most of her free time since then.

 

"I get bored easily."

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"Do you want to try harder to circumvent your parents' restrictions?"

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"Yes. But it's not worth it. And also my mental state is affected by not having those grief cubes, so I'm not sure if I'm in the best place to be making those kinds of decisions."

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"Take these, then, and text me if you need more. And I'll see about adding more to the server for you to check over."

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"Thanks."

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"Your mental health is important."

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"Are you saying I should just leave? Wouldn't that be a little suspicious?"

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"I'm saying that I'm here to help you, and that's easier to do if you'll talk to me."

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"My parents found out that I was out late and they grounded me. It's not that complicated."

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"Regardless."

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"I need more secure communication. On the hardware end. Talking to you here is fine but makes me nervous." She looks at the other passengers of the train.

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"Secured against what?"

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"Against my parents. Who work in computer security at their firm and so know how to get past basic security measures. I'm not conscientious enough to reliably keep them out without something more substantial."

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"What model of phone do you use?"

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Naomi names a brand and model. "I've jailbroken mine."

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"I'll get you a replacement."

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"Is it meant to be a decoy or what?"

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"Visually the same, but with better encryption than is commercially available."

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"... thanks."

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"Ah, this is my stop. I'll have that for you by tomorrow."

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"Same place?" A corner of her mouth quirks up.

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"Yes."

The doors of the train open, and she steps out.

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She takes the same train to school the following day.

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Ellie's there again.

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"Heya! Thanks for the pick-me-up."

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"Clearly you needed it."

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"Annoying, but true! How've you been?"

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"Well enough, considering."

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"Considering what?"

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"I was concerned for you."

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"Oh! Oh. Thanks! I didn't -- I used a cube pretty much immediately, my day was pretty good."

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"That is good. I have the phone for you."

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"Thanks! And um, I'm really sorry about worrying you, do you want me to text you next time or something?"

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"That would help." She passes the phone over.

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"I'll do it." Phone: accepted. She'll configure it when she gets home. 

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"Thank you. Are you still interested in looking at other coding projects?"

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"Sure. But I'm not sure if I'll be able to fix all of them. It depends on what my wish thinks of as 'hacking.'"

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"It's more than nothing."

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"True enough!"

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"I may not be able to get anything as interesting, but I'll see what I can do."

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Naomi goes to school and works on her new projects and tries hard not to be desperately bored. In the evenings she organizes her gem's memory and, when she's sure her parents are asleep, she practices with her cables. In particular she practices holding herself aloft with them. The resulting image is like having spider legs. (The irony is not lost on her.)

She texts Ellie.

might need more cubes early, been practicing with the cables

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Understood. Tomorrow.
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thanks. oh and here's some pics of what I've been practicing.

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Ellie has some tips.

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They're useful! Naomi finds herself better able to balance, among other benefits. 

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And cubes, the next day.

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She accepts them eagerly. "I might want to set up something with MSY so I get more of these. A research budget, maybe."

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"Such things are possible if you can demonstrate both benefit and need."

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"Is there some complicated form?"

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"Several."

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"It's like they want to you to save it for an emergency or something."

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"Logistics are very attached to their spreadsheets and projections."

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"Are they good projections?"

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"Within five percent, most years."

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"... I guess there are people who can predict the future working on that?"

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"Mostly statisticians. True precognition is something of a lost art."

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"Oh?"

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"There are stories of girls who could see the future, but no one alive has that power."

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"Bet everyone wishes they knew what their wishes were."

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"Metaphorically, yes. It's a common subject of discussion."

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"What's your favorite theory?"

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"That the Incubators, for whatever reason, stopped giving it out."

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"How much do we know about them?"

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"Very little, in truth. They've had a long time to practice their evasiveness."

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"I wouldn't want to be the person interviewing them just in case one spilled something."

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"Why not?"

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"It sounds really frustrating and tedious? And the one I talked to never gave straight answers to anything."

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"Some girls find them cute."

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"Some girls? They're objectively cute. Frustrating. But cute."

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"I do not cherish the times I must speak with them, but they do not lie if you are relentlessly direct in your questioning."

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"A lie and a misleading truth are basically the same thing."

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"Only if you're inclined to irresponsible over-speculation."

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"In other words, only if you do anything that relies on them having given the truth the whole truth, nothing but."

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"If you like."

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"Well, anyway! I'll try to help them keep to their projections. Since I don't know how much leeway they have or whether they need a surplus."

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"And it's better to not overextend yourself while disengaged from your support."

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"Right, right, I'll stick to safer things, don't worry."

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"Thank you." And here's her stop again.

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Naomi goes to school! It is boring, even if she pays attention.

When she gets home she sticks to the kind of experimentation that she can do with minimal magic use. Most of it amounts to organizing and re-organizing the material in her head. She almost clicks through the process of getting onto a proxy while she's waiting for something in her gem to compile before she realizes what she's doing.

Theoretically the internet is endlessly entertaining, but Naomi still feels restless. She clicks through news aggregators and social media and watches a movie while researching different cable properties to memorize. 

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There are new files on the secure server.

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She looks through them and finds security flaws and fixes them and is still bored

 

... she could probably just leave through the window, even though she's grounded. It's not like her parents will notice. Probably. Actually no, if she goes out to MSY headquarters she should probably do it after the time when she's supposed to go to bed.

She texts Ellie.

Getting stir-crazy. Thinking of going out the window and leaving around eleven, when I'm supposed to be in bed. Just to MSY HQ if I can't go anywhere else. Tips for staying unnoticed?

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Transform inside with the curtain closed. Stick to rooftops. Wait until your parents have done the last check.
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She waits, restraining the impulse to pace. She really shouldn't have let all her attention and interest get eaten up by Spiders, back ... before. She wouldn't be nearly this bored if she had other engaging hobbies -- she used to play video games, sometimes. But no video game compares to the itch she feels when she thinks about MSY. She can't shake the feeling that they only give new girls the information they need to work in the field and no more. She's already worked through the stuff she was handed, and most of it was junk.

She wonders how much Ellie knows and thinks about whether she could get away with asking her directly, without it being suspicious. Her boss would probably know even more.

Starting with Ellie is probably best. Maybe framing it as career advancement, since she was interested in that anyway.

The time nears midnight and she checks to see her parents soundly asleep. She heads out.

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Some residual activity from the Bruins game, but the city is mostly quiet.

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Good, she won't have to worry about ... whatever msy does to explain away eyewitnesses. She keeps moving.

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Looks like a patrol over thataways a bit.

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... the itch is in the direction of MSY headquarters, not here. But she does want combat practice. "Hey!" She calls. "Can I join you?"

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"Naomi, wasn't it? Did you check with Ellie?"

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"Oh, should I do that? Sorry." She pulls out her phone.

Ran into the patrol. Mind if I join it?

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Go ahead. Don't take any foolish risks.
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Right

"Got a go-ahead." She explains her powers and skillset.

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She's paired off with Ashley in red ruffles, hefting a longbow. They stick to the back and provide covering fire.

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"That's a pretty cool weapon." Small talk: not one of her strong suits.

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"'S no sniper rifle, but I make do."

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"Aren't they both powered by magic? In theory the weapon type shouldn't matter as much compared to that, right? At least in the documents I've read where, um, I saw someone with a frying pan weapon and I don't think she fights any worse than someone with a bat ..."

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh she is so bad at this and should not be rambling about dossier information, what if she already knows that stuff, aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah.

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"Dude. You have a sniper rifle. There's cool, and then there's cool."

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"It's kind of unfair that you can't pick based on preference."

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Shrug. "Eh."

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"Well, thank you anyway."

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The patrol's quiet. No big spawns. They head back to HQ.

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Naomi continues to try to make small talk! It's not very effective. 

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The other girls are humoring her(?), at least.

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She appreciates it!

When she gets to HQ she texts Ellie and tries to make a beeline for Makoto's office.

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Ellie finds her before she gets that far.

"Plans?"

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"Wanna find something to do. Free up enough of someone's time that I can ask them more questions about how MSY works."

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"In form or function?"

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"Both?"

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"Intending on climbing the ranks?"

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"I want to know more about the organization I'll be spending the rest of my life working for. Also yes."

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"Makoto is not a bad person to ask about that sort of thing." Eyebrow raise. "If that's where you were going?"

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"She's the only boss type I was introduced to," Naomi says sheepishly.

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"I suppose that's true. And as the local representative of MSY Central, she's well placed to answer your questions."

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"You're not sad I didn't go to you, are you?'

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"I'll live."

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"But you are sad."

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"You," she says. "are a cheeky little girl."

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"I just want to know!"

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"Yes."

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"Fuck. I'm sorry."

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"It's all right."

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"Do you want to. Uh. Talk privately? Is there a place where we can do that."

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There's an empty office just there.

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Why don't they step in. "... I want to say 'where do you see yourself in five years' but that's ... probably not appropriate. For a host of reasons."

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"What do you imagine those to be?"

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"I just insulted you? Also don't you work on timescales way larger than that?"

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"You'll have to try much harder than that to insult me. And five years is a surprisingly convenient length of time to plan around. Have you covered twentieth-century Russia in your history class yet?"

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"No...?"

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"The Soviet government of that period centrally controlled their economy through a series of five-year plans. It was... mostly unsuccessful, but that can be attributed to the planners' rigid insistence on ideological dogma over empirical reality."

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".... ooooh! That's when Leonid Kantorovich lived, right? We learned about him a couple years ago in introductory linear programming."

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"Kantorovich... Ah. Yes."

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"I mean, I don't know much about him, we just learned the stuff he invented in class."

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"He was assigned the task of efficiently allocating the production of... something. Perhaps lumber. In response to which task he invented linear programming."

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"Anyway. Five years. How long does it take to get promoted? Is there tracking?"

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"That is highly dependent on who you know, and what it is you wish to do."

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Frown. "Who you know?"

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"The MSY is a political system, and political systems run on people. People run on other people."

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"Right, so -- who do you know? Who are the good people to know in general?"

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"I'm acquainted with most the regular hunters here. Jenna Iverly, the Rules Committee representative. Sara and Amanda Bosconi, they head up Logistics. Makoto, you know. And I know a few people on the West Coast and in the Soul Guard."

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"Soul Guard?"

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"The active branch of the judiciary."

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"Lawyers or law enforcement?"

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"Enforcement."

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"I guess they're in charge, then?"

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"No. Neither in theory nor practice."

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"It can't all be like in the information packet, right? There has to be someone who has more power than they should -- some way it really works that's never written down on paper."

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"It more or less does, actually. First Executive Akemi and the other founders are still around, and their... mm, idealism has colored the MSY from the beginning in many ways."

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"I guess if your leaders don't die they can stay in charge indefinitely. Are they good at adapting to changing times?'

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"They have rather been the cause of times changing, for the most part."

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"I wish I had a better handle of what they want. Versus what most magical girls want. I get the impression that there's a lot of desire to -- stay comfortable." 

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"How do you mean?"

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"Setting people up with cushy jobs, keeping the masquerade up. That's not to say they don't also do charitable things. Just that people might prefer to stay safe and not take risks even if they might be helpful."

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"There are factions which advocate the MSY take a more active role in the world. But a significant disruption to the masquerade would have far-reaching and certainly unintended consequences, and many say that it is better to prioritize resources to those already in the know."

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"Does the faction that wants to take a more active role in the world also advocate for a reduced masquerade? I could imagine them wanting the former without the latter."

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"Usually not in so many words. That is one of the very few things the Incubators have offered their opinion on. They say widespread knowledge of magic will decrease average expected potential and reduce efficiency."

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"Why am I not surprised that those cat-things are in favor of keeping more secrets."

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"Because you've met one."

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Sigh.

 

"I want to be positioned so that I can help MSY share its resources with as many people as possible. Sustainably, obviously, but ..." she frowns. "There's too much inequality. People are angry. And it's only going to get worse. If there -- if there are more products we could make and disseminate, that help more people, that bring people out of poverty ..."

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"You almost certainly want a political track, then."

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"I'm. Uh. Bad at politics. Does the research branch have no way to influence how their inventions are used?"

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"Fewer, and less effective."

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Frown. "What about Soul Guard?"

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"In general, you would be following directives, not giving them."

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"Not my preference, yeah."

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"But if you distinguish yourself in such service, it may be that you would be afforded more opportunities to talk with important politicians than you would otherwise have."

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"Do you think it might be faster than trying to make it up through politics?"

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"If you approach politics with the mindset that you are "bad at politics", you will not succeed. In that case, alternative methods will certainly be better."

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"I mean, I could learn how. It would just take a while. They'll probably want me doing stuff related to my power, anyway, and unless there's crossover between data management and politics ..."

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"A significant portion of the back-end work is keeping track of who owes what favors, voting habits, relationships, and so forth."

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"I suppose I could do that ..."

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"If that sounds like secretarial duties, that's because that is what it would be. Choosing to pursue that path would likely begin with you managing someone else's appointments while you build your own network and contacts."

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Nod. "What path do you think you're going to take?"

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"Me? I have no designs as grand as yours."

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She lets go a breath she didn't know she was holding. "... would you want to help?"

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"It is my responsibility to look out for you."

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Her youthful enthusiasm is kind of cute.

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She is a youth, however smart she might be about some things. 

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"Did you still want to see Makoto?"

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"What do you think she'll make of my -- goals?"

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"I think that she will be supportive of your ambitions, and perhaps offer you some favors. And when you find yourself in a position that is useful to her, she may ask you to help her in return."

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Slow nod. "Sounds good. She seems trustworthy."

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Ellie smiles and motions to the door. "Shall we?"

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Nod. "Let's."

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Makoto is in her office, typing something up. When they enter, she flicks a finger and the projected screen slides shut before it can be seen.

"Hello, Naomi. How are you?"

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"Good!" Nervous smile. "I. Um. Was wondering what the promotion process is like. And whether you have recommendations about the department I go into."

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"Well, your powerset is versatile, and you seem have the smarts to pick up whatever you choose to study pretty quickly. I think you could fit in just about anywhere, if you wanted to. Do you have any more specific aspirations beyond 'get promoted'?"

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Dismantle the masquerade over time? Put more resources towards scaling magic use for everyone's benefit? Maybe if she increases MSY's information security they'll have more ability to intervene in peoples' lives, maybe if they have to rely on her to do it she'll be able to ask for more things --

"I want to help people. Not just people in MSY. I think more of our effort should go towards that."

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"How noble. But why make that your goal within the MSY? There are mundane charitable organizations you could contribute to or work with, many of them quite effective."

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"I don't like how secretive MSY is."

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"Why?"

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"It's probably good that MSY exists, but there's also no way for a magical girl to operate outside the system. Even if they move, they're still governed by the same rules. I'm worried that -- I think this makes too many people okay with the status quo."

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"It is a fairly nice status quo."

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"For us."

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"And you would like to... puncture this bubble?"

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"No! No." She shifts her weight from one foot to the other. "I don't know. The world needs help. I don't know how to convince everyone in MSY that the world needs help, but I'll do it. Somehow."

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Makoto tilts her head and appears to ponder Naomi for a moment.

To Ellie, Your thoughts?

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What do you expect me to say, that she's an idealist? She is. She's also sixteen.

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You support her?

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That's why you put me in this position, isn't it? To support the younger? I'm hardly going to be the one to shatter her illusions at this stage. The world will do that soon enough.

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Or it may not.

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That is always a possibility. It's on the anvil that a knife takes its form or is shattered.

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Blacksmithing metaphors? How quaint.


She smiles, and says out loud, "I think, Naomi, if I were in your position, I would set my sights on the Soul Guard."

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Blink. "Ellie recommended politics."

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"You're too honest for politics. And too young. It'd be decades before you could get anywhere, and even then you wouldn't have much influence. But in the Soul Guard, you'd be doing things, meeting people, making friends with those who've already moved up the political rungs. If you're good enough. And you'd have a better chance at opportunities for direct action."

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"What kind of direct action?"

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"When the MSY decides to topple a criminal organization, the Guard is who goes in. They have closer contact than anyone with the less-advantaged mundane."

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A cop. Right. "Do you know anything about the culture?"

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"I was in the Soul Guard once, but it's been some time. Twenty years or so. I'm sure things have changed since."

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"Different days."

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It is very obvious she wants to ask.

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"The Europeans had their own organization, the Système Magique Cordial. In the last part of the twenty-first century, the expansion of American MSY interests eastward met theirs coming west. Things were... tense, for a long while."

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"What made them collapse? I assume they did."

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"It was not so much a collapse as an integration."

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"Ohh, that's good. Cleaner."

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"Just so."

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"All right. Soul Guard.  Is there a pamphlet for that, like everything else?"

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"Of course!" And with a few taps, she sends the packet to Naomi's system.

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She skims the first page! Anything jump out?

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It's a history. Founded in 2043 by Tomoe Mami in accordance with Section Three of the Charter, dealing with the provisions for mutual aid against external threats and dangerous circumstances.

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... external threats and dangerous circumstances?

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That was the language used. If she'll recall from the orientation materials, the MSY was very small at its inception, six teams, twenty-four girls, one city. Large-scale cooperation was very much the exception, rather than the rule. It was not uncommon for groups to raid each other's territory or stockpiles of grief cubes. There were also drifters, and rogues, who would make their living more from other girls than from demons.

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And what kinds of threats are they concerned with now?

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Mostly criminal gangs, drug runners, sex traffickers. And despite the MHD's best efforts, there is still the occasional girl who goes completely off the rails and becomes a danger to herself and others.

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Naomi processes. If she joins Soul Guard, she will consistently be put into life-threatening situations. She'll get better at dealing with them, but she'll also incur more risk than anyone working at a desk job. She'll be asked to do think she doesn't want to do -- maybe even things against her principles. She might have to clean up MSY's masquerade -- her power makes it likely that she'll be specifically tasked with roles involving maintaining their secrets. She can only hope that her feelings on the matter will be taken into account.

But --

if she demonstrates her trustworthiness, if she accumulates enough information as leverage, and if she's patient and makes friends, she'll be able to work her way up. More quickly and more easily than in politics, since that kind of work doesn't come naturally to her. And she'll gain valuable combat experience for if she ever does need to go rogue. She doesn't think she'll need to, but magical girls are immortal, and she is very, very paranoid.

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"Ellie, why did you leave Soul Guard?"

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"There were some reorganizations following the merger. I was offered a desk job, or a transfer. I chose the transfer."

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"I think that that is a question you need to be able to answer for yourself. And not right now, either. You don't have to decide the course of your future in a single midnight meeting. Again. Take some time, think it over. But Makoto's assesment is accurate, for what that's worth."

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"... I'll keep that in mind." 

 

Wow, it is midnight. The mention of that fact hit her with a wave of exhaustion. "Thanks for your help."

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"Shall I walk you home?"

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"Sure."

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"Have a good night, you two."

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She nods farewell. "Makoto."

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They get going. "I'm sorry for offending you. Really."

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"Truly, think nothing of it."

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She nods, and they fall into a comfortable silent pace.

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"Will you be all right at home now?"

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"I think so. I have quite a few cubes left."

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"Call if you need anything."

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"Will do."

 

She's getting more used to going in through the window. She detransforms and almost immediately falls asleep.

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Back to work.

 

So now that we have more time, what are you playing at?

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What makes you think I'm playing at anything?

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Because you always are, especially when you're not.

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I suppose that's fair.

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Why are you pushing Soul Guard on her, Makoto?

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I do honestly think it'd be the best way for her to get what she wants, if she can handle it. Which I think she can. And she has skills we need there. And I think it would be good for you, as well.

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You were the one who told me to get out.

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And now I'm the one telling you it might be time to get back in.

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I thought I was a "good teacher".

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You are. But you need to keep in touch. Don't disconnect yourself.

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So you want me to put my application in with hers.

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Not necessarily, but think about it. I hope you keep in touch with her when she moves along, at the least.

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She's not the only one who has some thinking to do, then.

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Like you said. There's time. Oh, and some girls from Task Force Drake will be passing through in a few weeks. You two should stop by and say hello.

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How convenient.

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The memo just crossed my desk, I swear.

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Naomi writes up her application to the Soul Guard. She outlines her powers, not that they don't already know anything she's demonstrated to Ellie. She illustrates some applications, not that they can't extrapolate themselves. But her focus is on applications that would have positive effects for non-magical girls. Her power is tailor-made for the spread of information. She can break any lock to keep important information accessible. And she could give MSY more control over old and faulty government infrastructure. She could maybe, with some effort and a ton of personal involvement, improve the systems around various massively destructive weapons so that there's no chance they would go off by accident.

She's unsure about whether it's a good idea to tell everyone about magical girls, but she's willing to keep her head down and wait for now. She'll not lack for people to talk to about that issue in the Soul Guard. And she's willing to give them a fair chance to defend themselves before she tries to upend their social order.

But if they don't have good reasons for keeping their secrets ... she'll always have a lever to bring them down.