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Demon Cam in Haven City
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There's a windowless stone room in the basement of a building in a dead-end alley. Between the boiler, the several bunk beds, the piles of boxes, the shelf of bottles of assorted liquids, and the too-small table in the middle of the room, there's barely enough floor space for Rit to spread out the paper she's sketching on. It's supposed to be a map with some cryptic notes around the edges.

Rit almost looks human. She's a featherless biped, at least, with five-fingered hands and a very average face. But her limbs are slightly out of proportion, her ears are pointy and too big, and her brown hair has hot pink roots. The person sitting on one of the bunk beds frowning in her general direction is the same species, whatever it is.

She speaks one language and it's not related to any Earth languages.

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There appears upon her map a person! He is a featherless biped too, but his hair is brown all the way down and his ears are round and his limbs are differently proportioned and also he has navy blue wings and a tail. They match his pants. "- uh, hi," he says.

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His summoner gasps and switches her grip on her pencil to one that would work better if she had to stab someone with it. "How did you even get here?" she says.

The person on the bed, meanwhile, aims a gun at him.

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"...uh, you summoned me," he says, glancing nonchalantly at the pencil and the gun. "I'm... not going to hurt you?"

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The man on the bed doesn't move.

Rit sets her pencil down. "How did we do that?"

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"Drawing on the floor. Awful habit. Uh, where am I?"

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For some reason this question makes her grimace and suck in a breath through her teeth.

"Haven City," the man says.

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"Which is... where."

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They both relax slightly at this question.

"Second planet out of twelve," says his summoner, "and if that doesn't help I don't know how to identify the star system."

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"It doesn't help at all! How fascinating."

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"If you can get home," says the man, "you probably should. The baron would be interested if he knew you were here."

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"How ominous. What form might this interest take?"

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"If you're really lucky, maybe you can sell him alien tech to fight the metal heads. If not, I wouldn't put it past him to cut you open and see what's inside."

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"Metal heads?"

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"The other aliens - you can recognize them by the glowing yellow gems in their heads. There's a range of intelligence, a lot of them could theoretically be bargained with if they didn't universally hate us and want us dead. Oh, and if you somehow kill one, don't touch the corpse without gloves, they leak dark eco."

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"What is dark eco?"

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"They don't have it on other planets? Uh, eco is a fundamental part of physics, like matter and time. The lies-to-children version is that it comes in five or six colors and the purple kind, also called dark eco, is evil - it can dissolve some kinds of things, or warp them, and in smaller quantities just makes people sick and more likely to be violent. It's part of what we use for the power grid."

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"........gosh. What do the other four or five colors do?"

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"So, still bearing in mind that this is the lies-to-children version and if you want the other version I have a degree in it - green is used for poorly-directed or undirected healing, if you're fast enough and have enough to work with, and for encouraging plants to grow. Blue is also used for the power grid, the Precursors used it for all their cool stuff, and if you know how to channel it and grab a bunch you can run faster. Red sort of lets things act like they have more inertia than they do. Yellow's another good one for power generation but it tends to be sort of explosive and hot and very capable of starting fires - there's even a trick for channeling it to shoot fireballs. And light eco is probably real - you can sort of tell from studying the other colors, but it only shows up in old legends. If it exists, it's... probably related to negentropy somehow. Might do healing, might make things fall slower, might do levitation, I'm kind of guessing."

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"Goodness. Uh, how does the wisdom of my being here change if I cannot in fact be cut open by curious barons?"

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"...Then I'd expect him to want to convince you to fight for him. Against the metal heads that might even be worth it."

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"Why do they hate you so much?"

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"They practically run on dark eco, in amounts way bigger than what it takes to have a measurable effect on how evil a city full of humans is. And they probably think we're ugly aliens - we're not hot, our art is probably ugly, our crying orphans aren't whatever they think is cute. We both need eco and there's only so much of it and we're edible to them. Can't really imagine why they wouldn't hate us."

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"Hrm. Uh, is eco a - substance? Like, could you put it in a jar or whatever."

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"Yeah - not arbitrary jars, and it doesn't interact with the jar the same way it would if it were a gas or a liquid or a solid. But yeah."

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Jar of blue eco?

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Nope.

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Rats. "Do you think they'd leave you alone if they had all the food they wanted?"

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"...Maybe? I think they might also want their own planet."

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"If they had their own planet and all the food they wanted?"

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"I haven't talked to one. If we could give them their own planet, we could maybe not give them any way to get back to this one..."

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"Sounds plausible enough if neither of you guys has invented space travel."

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"They got here somehow."

"Yeah," says Rit, "but if they had their own independent warp network at all the entire war would look different and at least one wastelander would ever have seen at least one metal head teleport."

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"Oh, they're recent arrivals, this isn't a forever war situation?"

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"Written history says they suddenly arrived centuries ago and we've never found any fossils of them."

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"Interesting. Did they immediately start hostilities, according to your records?"

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"Supposedly, yes, they just arrived and started hunting us."

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"Yikes! Are there any communication attempts, is the language understood at all..."

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"Yes and sort of. There's a lot we don't get but there was a famous parlay attempt a long time ago - it broke down because they, uh, wanted us to unilaterally disarm in exchange for not being exterminated. The king at the time told them where to shove it."

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"...wow, okay. Uh, do you have any ideas of official people I could go to who do not like to cut apart and study strange visitors? It wouldn't work but it would be such a waste of time."

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He laughs darkly. "I'm it. Second in command in the Underground, the resistance here. Or you could check if Kras City still exists, but we haven't heard from them in years and we're assuming the worst."

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...does Kras City still exist?

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It does! It's not even in particularly bad shape. A number of convoluted racetracks loop around and through the entire city.

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"This look right?" he asks, displaying his palmful of city.

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"...Yeah. You really don't need to worry about the baron, do you."

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"I don't think so! Unless eco in particular can zap me. Do you have any around?"

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"Not pure. I could shoot you, most kinds of ammo use eco."

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"Sure, you wanna nip me in the wing? It's easy to replace." He sticks out a wing.

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He shoots. It's not any more effective than a normal bullet.

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"Cool," says Cam, shaking and refolding the relevant wing. "Okay, so, does Kras City existing change anything important here?"

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"Maybe. You have somewhere to go if you want to leave. We probably still don't."

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"You don't wanna come?"

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"Suppose we take the worst-off thousand people and go. If Kras can feed that many more, they won't do it for free. All thousand of them would need new jobs over there, without any idea who to trust less than usual and who to bribe in which business. And they're not on our warp network, so it'd be a long trip. The baron could shoot us down on the way out, Kras could get spooked and shoot us down on the way in, and in between here and there there are metal heads unless you put them on another planet first. And this is all assuming you want to help out with enough air trains to carry everyone, otherwise we can't get out."

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"I can feed people. And make a - I don't know what an air train is, a shuttle."

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"Might work. Wait. You got Kras without knowing it existed. Can you check for... places in Kras where they torture dissidents?"

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"...that is not a conjurable parameter but if you can name some dissidents I can see how they're doing?"

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"I don't know any in Kras - I do know some missing people here - what is conjurable?"

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"Books by title and author, locations by time, all the works ever written in a particular language... I should maybe do that anyway, try to train a computer to speak what the metal heads speak..."

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"Damn. - Can you do prisons in Kras?"

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"I don't think so but if there's a uniform the prison guards would wear, or something, I could bootstrap from there...?"

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"I wouldn't know. If you can do groups of armed people within fifteen feet of injured, unarmed people, that's either a prison or important anyway."

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"That's too elaborate. I can... do... surroundings of blood that is not in people? But that will get me a lot of false positives."

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"And negatives. - Better plan. You get rid of the metal heads and we make a new city."

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"I can start there, sure, after my computer's chewed on the language some - it might only be able to do writing if they don't have audio recordings - is this an okay place to put a person-sized amount of hardware?"

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"...Maybe. We probably won't be raided here but that's... say a seventy percent chance we make it another month."

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"Oh, it doesn't need to be safe, just not in the way, I can remake it if anything happens to it." He finds a corner to stash the processors.

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"Hey, while you're making things, can you get me everything Gol Acheron wrote, if he existed?"

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"That will get you his diary and love letters and whatnot, which I need a better reason than a casual suggestion to turn over."

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"I would guess he's too dead to be embarrassed, but fair enough."

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"Maybe you have an afterlife, who knows? Can someone recommend me a good map of this, let's say continent?"

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"There might be dozens of good maps but I kind of like the ones in the front matter of my history textbook, what was it called, Legacy of the Precursors? Something like that."

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Cam produces a nice big instance of that one.

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Haven City is along the southern coast of its continent, just west of a jungle and southwest of an active volcanic crater and some similarly geologically interesting areas. There are a lot of ruins: some lost cities, including one just off the coast marked only as "lost Precursor city", and some places marked with names like "ancient citadel". There are some known areas of metal head settlement, and some badlands that (based on their general latitude and distance from the ocean) should have been nice and fertile.

It's not a very big continent.

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"What's the deal with Precursors?" Cam asks.

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"That's the million-orb question. There's a bunch of ruins that would be older than recorded history if they didn't have words engraved on them. The tech still works, including the talking statues - we have one here but unfortunately it makes less sense than a romance novel plot, when it bothers to say anything."

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"It speaks your language though?"

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"It does, I think."

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"Can I meet it?"

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"Yeah - can you hide the wings and conjure really realistic fake ears? Not that the oracle will care, I think, but the people between here and there..."

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Cam puts on a long coat and a mirror with which to prosthetize his ears convincingly.

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"Should work. At least it's the season for a coat like that. I can show you the way there, then?"

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"Yes please!"

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Up a flight of steps to street level, the hideout exits into a dead-end alley that itself exits into a poor neighborhood. The uneven pavement is cracked and occasionally simply missing in irregular patches. In a couple of places there are huge trenches carved into the ground, with small wooden bridges placed over them that themselves are falling apart and full of gaps. The pavement is entirely for foot traffic; the vehicles fly overhead, just a couple feet below the lowest of the cables stretched across the streets. It's hard to tell which parts of the buildings are artistically uneven and which are just poorly made, but if nothing else the roofs tend to look sloppy. The air smells like some pollutant that isn't a normal byproduct of a gas engine. They pass one of the baron's propaganda stations, which is currently playing a recording of him exhorting everyone to sacrifice for their city, and then head out over the water on an uneven network of boardwalks. A lot of the other pedestrians are walking slowly and looking down.

Their destination is a smallish one-room building over the water. The statue inside has two glowing clear domes in front that might or might not be supposed to suggest eyes. The rest of the room is full of burning candles.

The statue deigns to speak to Cam. "Greetings, visitor," it says. "You are a surprise. I must urge you in the strongest terms to wait and learn until those things which are in progress now have begun. For your patience, I offer you a title and an author." It enunciates the title and author clearly, but they're definitely not in the local language.

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Cam resists the temptation to fix infrastructure on the way.

"Hello," Cam says. "I won't be able to read that today, do you have other suggestions for how to get oriented to the situation?"

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The oracle does not answer.

"Honestly that's better than most people get," Rit says after a few seconds.

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"Most people it won't talk to at all?"

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Wobbly gesture. "Not on their first try, anyway. Hey, I don't know if it counts if I don't have to buy it, but just in case can I have a candle to light while I'm here?"

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"Uh, sure." Little glass jar of vanilla candle. "What for?"

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"It's an offering - the oracle doesn't exactly ask, but people who pray and meditate and make offerings seem happier and less, you know, evil." She lights it from one of the other candles and sets it on the floor.

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"What does it do that's oracular?"

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"It says mysterious bullshit and seems to see the future or at least see the entire present and be very smart. You're the only person I've ever heard of getting a book recommendation you couldn't get at a library. And it told my mother once to 'embrace solitude and shun the imminent festivities' and she didn't go to a party the next day and the entire section of the city the party was held in was overrun by metal heads and most of the guests died."

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"Yikes, okay. I'll, uh, see if I can crack the book, same as the metal head language.." He produces a hard copy and flips through it in case it has useful illustrations.

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It has a map of a galaxy with a place marked, a map of a solar system with only two planets, pictures of alien scenery, pictures of metal heads and other creatures, a timeline, and a diagram.

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"...gosh," says Cam. "You said this is a twelve planet system, yes?" Do the other creatures look like they might be of a biosphere with the metal heads.

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"And that's not the yellow sun or the green one."

Like the metal heads, some of the other things depicted have glassy glowing parts, often but not always the same yellow color as skull gems. Like the metal heads, some of them have metal parts or half-exposed tubes.

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"You have two?" Is this the same language as his computer is currently chewing.

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No relation to that one at all.

"Arguably. The yellow one's our star."

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"And the green one visits on bank holidays? Can I put some more hardware here or should we go back -"

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"I figure we can go back whenever but I don't know what kind of hardware you're thinking."

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"Same kind I put in the corner of where I popped up."

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"It will definitely be noticed and examined and possibly have candles put on it but I don't think there's a rule that says you can't."

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"...maybe I'll put it inside a crate or something." Crate. Cam puts a few candles on top of it as extra obfuscation.

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"Anyway, we can go back but we could go to the port, I've got a red pass - I don't know how much freedom of movement you're used to but here you can't leave your neighborhood without clearance."

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"How dystopian! Do they check the passes against any kind of central authority that has a record of to whom they are issued?"

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"They explain when you get them that they're doing that. I know for a fact they have the capacity to do it. But in practice not really."

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"So I could have one too, presumably - where would you like to go?"

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"...To the green zone to watch the races, if that's an option - can I just get a copy of all of - if 'all the kinds' won't do it then all of Commander Erol's, if I promise they're not for bedrooms anything like that?"

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"I, uh, don't think smuggling you into entertainment venues is a priority for me, since there's a war on."

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"It's more war-related than it sounds but not in a way where me being there in person matters, especially not today. But the stadium section is also the section with the good library, which maybe doesn't matter anymore, and - almost everything that's set up to encourage people to think, or do anything for fun that doesn't involve drinking. And all the people who have access to that kind of thing. It's, I dunno. Fifty percent frivolous."

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"Library does not matter unless it comes with particularly helpful librarians," Cam confirms.

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"I mean, some of it is seeing which books they're putting on the shelves this month and which have disappeared, or who's reading what, but if you're about to make it safe to run then everyone can quit the cloak and dagger shit. And maybe you can conjure the other stuff anyway... Is there anything you need to do in person at all or is the smartest thing just to hide out reading stuff for a week?"

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"I will probably want to hang out reading stuff for a week."

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"...If, while you're doing that, you make a lot of boring food that people could plausibly have gotten around here, I bet they'll want to take time off from fighting to distribute it - you can't leave it in public for the taking and expect the guard not to confiscate it but we can probably get it where it needs to go."

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"I would be happy to also make some boring food if you can tell me what food bores people."

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"Personally when this is over I am never eating another limon again. Oh, or brown rice, or cornberry and cheese stew. I guess don't make the stew, just make the grains. You could leave some here first, I think, and then we can go back?"

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"Yeah, sure, what's a normal looking package situation for 'em?"

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"...Mm, the fastest to describe and hardest to get wrong would be burlap bags."

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"Cool." Burlap bags with "brown rice" and "cornberries" stitched into them appear.

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And then she can show him the way back if he needs a guide.

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He does not have such a perfect sense of direction as to turn her down. "Did you have a name, by the by? I'm Cam."

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"These days I go by Rit. Cam is such a normal name. Don't know what I expected, just."

They pass a couple of armed people in red armor, and the propaganda station again ("welcome not the unknown face," it intones).

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"Unknown faces a big deal around here?"

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"Well, they can't be immigrants, so they're either regular criminals in disguise or metal heads in disguise - second one's not likely, they'd have to be stupid powerful to even get inside the shield wall, but it's technically possible."

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"Shield wall is - eco thing, something else?"

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"Eco-powered thing. Also a physical wall but that doesn't help much when some of them fly."

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"I see. And 'powerful' here cashes out to...?"

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"So bearing in mind I spent half a semester on metal head bio and it was more about the cellular level, and the people who really work with these rankings are the ones who go out and shoot them, probably the ones that are smarter and less likely to just fall over dead for no reason and have armor that can stand up to more blaster rounds."

And here they are.

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"Some of them fall over for no reason?"

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"It's sort of like aging, but if you want to do math to it you want to pretend they have a half-life instead of - I don't know if your species even ages, though."

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"We do not. How interesting. Are they radioactive?"

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"Literally the entire planet is radioactive, you can even find out how old some things are by checking the isotopes of carbon in them. But metal heads aren't much more radioactive than the average crocadog."

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"Crocadog. Gosh. I wonder why the half-life model then."

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"I know a textbook that explains that - Metal Head Microanatomy by Doctor Lany, uh, but the preface is by someone else I forgot - actually, do you want a dozen titles and I can answer questions when you're done?"

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"Dozen titles sounds good. And your food order."

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"Oh. Yeah. Hey, Torn!"

The man, who is still resting on one of the beds, looks up. "Hm?"

"I thought if the strategic situation is about to change and we've got Cam to conjure things we could be giving out more free food, am I right?"

"Yeah. To start with, as many five-pound bags of cornberry flour as will fit under the table and two dozen cans of chipped yakow - make them look like the Laughing Lurker brand, if you can."

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"Can do." Bags under table, chipped yakow. He makes a nibble of chipped yakow to taste.

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It's dried meat, offensively salty and otherwise unseasoned.

Torn looks over the foods. For the first time since Cam's been here, he smiles.

Rit recommends an introductory biology textbook, an introductory eco studies textbook, a history textbook, a biography of Baron Praxis, What Makes A Zoomer Zoom, Computers Made Simple, A Brief History of Eco Studies, and a bunch of fiction she thinks will give cultural context.

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"Thanks!" He sticks them all into his computer on a little stick and starts in with the history textbook.

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The book explains that, while the Precursors were very important and existed in the past, they are the subject of an entirely different field of study and will not be covered here, and skips forward to the earliest currently readable narrative records and their archaeological context.

This continent was the second one settled by humans and the first one settled by most types of lurkers (the reader is assumed to know what a lurker is). Historically it wasn't the seat of the most important civilizations, as judged by people at the time. But the descendants of other civilizations are few and scattered and assimilated, and there's only so much room in one book, so the local civilizations get nearly all the focus. The book covers their migration to the continent, their initially peaceful relations with the more intelligent lurkers (there's substantial evidence of trade, and there are burials of lurker skeletons in human graveyards, buried with similar sorts of burial goods). The humans on the continent eventually unified politically, partly by making use of salvaged Precursor warp gates to keep travel times low.

The centuries that followed are sometimes known as the golden age of sagecraft. The sages were people who studied and worked with eco, and usually studied other things, and were recognized by other sages as learned and worth listening to. They were described at the time as usually having powers like levitation or the ability to communicate with plants.

Then at one point an unpopular law was followed by arson and acts of sabotage, many of which specifically took advantage of the warp network; the book claims that the resulting crackdown on dissidents wasn't strong enough, since the violence got worse. Eventually, for only partly related reasons, the country split down the middle, northwest and southeast, with lurkers controlling the territory in between. The fact that the split was along geographic lines was partly a coincidence but it made it much more appealing to just shut down the warp network. Written records from the west in the following centuries report fewer and eventually no sages, fewer scientific discoveries, increasing border raids from lurkers, and two famines. At least there are substantial records from the west, though. The east - might not have kept good records, or their records might have been destroyed. As best modern historians can tell, there was at least one all-out war with the lurkers, maybe more; the country fractured further, but it's not clear how much; there was a volcanic eruption in the middle of their territory; and this would have been when the lurker sharks migrated to the area en masse and would have taken a bite out of their fishing industry. One of the very few stories from this time and place is that of the Last Sage, also called the Dark Sage, Gol Acheron; the books assumes the reader has heard that one before. It does say there probably was a historical Gol Acheron; it's wildly unlikely that the legendary hero defeated him and opened a door in his citadel that let the metal heads out, because the metal heads arrived far to the south, near what is now Haven City, and the only plausible locations for his citadel are nowhere near there.

When the metal heads attacked, the east was devastated, but still had the knowledge and technical ability to put together primitive force fields. The west was hit later, but more thoroughly destroyed. Its survivors fled east. It isn't clear whether Mar came from the east or the west (the reader is assumed to have heard of Mar before), or even if he came from another continent; he appeared when he was needed, built Haven City, unified the southeast, drove the metal heads out of a substantial area, and made Haven City the capital of a smallish but prosperous country. Under his rule, science began advancing again, the population started growing again, and mankind even made peace with the lurkers. After his death, the war carried on at a stalemate for a while. The humans spread and prospered, but so did the metal heads.

Then there are centuries of names of rulers of Haven City, and the dates of their reigns, and the dates of the destruction of dozens of other important settlements; the last time a city fell was less than twenty years ago. As of the writing of the book, Haven and Kras were presumed to be the only two human settlements remaining anywhere on the planet. The book ends with Baron Praxis, who (contrary to popular belief) is related to the House of Mar, rescuing the city from the weakness and laziness of its prior ruler and preparing to reverse the era of decline.

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Cam's questions are:

- what's a lurker
- what's Gol Acheron's supposed deal
- what's Mar's deal

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"Lurkers are a whole group of related animal species - except lurker sharks, they're not real lurkers - they're pretty varied but they all have these weirdass jaws, it'll make sense once you've seen one. A few species talk - not random words, they know what they're saying, they mostly know what you're saying - and they even make tools that are almost as complicated as what people make. We have a couple that are citizens, they're not that much less civilized than, well." She smiles bitterly.

"Gol Acheron is supposedly the sage who first decided to start studying dark eco and supposedly might have turned evil and supposedly might have wanted to destroy the world and supposedly might have been friends with some lurkers and supposedly might have been killed by a legendary hero who might or might not have been Mar or Mar's father or Mar's lover or Mar's pet crocadog, I know five different versions of this bedtime story and I don't believe any of them but sages were real and someone started trying to study dark eco and turning evil is the kind of thing that could happen if you did that without taking any safety precautions and the world wasn't destroyed, thanks to Mar.

"Right, Mar is - I mean, he's in the book, there are lots more books about him. He's a hero, he's the next best thing to a Precursor, whatever. I don't know, I don't care much, I barely even celebrate the Feast of Mar."

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Cam makes a lurker model to investigate its jaw. "What's a good Mar book?"

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It has a pronounced underbite and four protrusions from the lower lip.

"Dunno," Rit says, "it's not my field."

"Early Governance of Haven City: a New Perspective by Samos," says Torn.

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Cam adds that to his reading list. "Did you find anywhere else to put food or anything while I was reading?"

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"I texted the Shadow about it. He's interested in seeing if you can 'heal the ecology'," he says with barely detectable sarcasm, "so we can farm more in the long term. We could use more potable water for the stockpile, too. We need things for the war, but it's hard to say what we'd still need if the metal heads were on another planet. Other than that, what kind of assurances do you need to do recon for us?"

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"You don't have the species I'm used to so my ecology healing would be inexpert at best but if you tell me in what containers you want your water that I can do. Recon like...?"

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"Plastic jugs or glass bottles, doesn't matter. We need to know if the baron is planning anything in the next few weeks. I want everything he's written and every room he's visited and every person he's talked to in the last week. I want to know about every weapon he has. I want to know the location of Mar's Tomb. I want to know where an orphan we're taking care of came from. And while we're at it, I want to scout sites for the new city."

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Plastic water jugs. "I would need more reason to be confident the baron's bad news before spying on him. Tomb and orphan origins and a scale model of the continent I can do though, where do you want that last one and what time should I be looking for orphan contexts in? I'll also need their name."

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"Scale model of the entire continent should wait till I've cleared the food out of here, unless you can put it up on a wall. The kid can't tell us his name, is there a way around that?"

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"I could put it on the wall if you like, though I'll need to plasticize the water features and stuff so they don't slosh out. Do you have a name you're calling him?"

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"...'The kid.' And - I guess not much is secret from you - the Heir of Mar."

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"...like a descendant or something weirder?"

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"A descendant. I mean. We think so. I think."

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"Okay, I'm gonna call him Junior for conjuration purposes. When did you find him?"

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"Couple years ago, couldn't tell you the day."

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"Can you narrow it down like at all, I don't want to drown us in models."

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"I can call the Shadow - parents aren't a conjurable parameter or this is still trying to pin down who the kid is?"

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"I can conjure the parents, I thought you wanted something more like geographical provenance - who's the Shadow, anyway?"

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"The leader of the Underground. More than that is supposed to be secret but..." He makes a face. "He wrote that book about Mar."

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"Good for him." Tiny model parents of Junior.

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A tall bald man and a green-haired brown-skinned woman.

"That's impossible. - That's Damas, the one Praxis deposed. He's been dead a lot longer than this kid has been alive."

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"...could it just be a weird lookalike?"

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"It could be. Can you check?"

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"In a sort of roundabout fashion, sure... how old is Junior?"

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"Maybe four."

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Scale model of Mr. Damas five years ago, with surroundings?

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Leaning on a parked car, either talking or laughing, gesturing. The person next to him, a dark-skinned man with "life" tattooed around his arm, is reacting with mock anger.

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"This is Damas five years back."

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"...So he abandoned us. Guess I can't blame him. - I need to talk to the Shadow about this." He shakes his head. "In the mean time, you wanted more reason to believe the baron is bad news. For a first pass, you can get it by listening to whatever the propaganda is today - even he can't make himself sound good. And I can name some laws he came up with. That'll only scratch the surface but it's what I've got that's already public."

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"What do I wanna grab to read up on that?"

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He can name laws, mostly by numbers but sometimes by nicknames. "The propaganda plays on the loudspeakers with the red holograms all day every day. I don't know if there's a file of all the soundbites for today and if there was I'd ask you to listen to it somewhere I don't have to hear it."

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Cam'll start with the laws then.

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This one makes leaving the city without permission a capital offense. This one declares a state of emergency and indefinitely suspends council elections, something similar to habeas corpus, funding for public television, and the right not to be subjected to torture without having been convicted of a crime. This one authorizes the exile of families that don't adequately support the city, such as by having members in the Krimzon Guard or donating eco. This one ends all funding for the publicly run orphanage and grants all its assets to the Ministry of Extreme Labor. This one declares that neither the city nor Mar Memorial Stadium is liable for any injuries or deaths that may occur during sporting events.

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...and the author of these things is definitely the Baron they're talking about?

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He doesn't seem to have written the one about the orphanage and he isn't the sole author of the one about exile or the one declaring a state of emergency.

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That leaves plenty to spare. "Yeah, okay, what did you want on this malevolent despot again?"

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"To start with, everything he's written in the past week - can you get it in a format where we can search for mentions of weapons or the underground?"

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"Do you have computers, want to learn to use computers, or want me to do the searching?"

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"They exist. I have one but not much of one. Can you make our kind? They run on eco."

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"It seems like I can't make eco. If the file storage doesn't run on eco I can make that, though."

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"Don't think so. Can you make one that works like a model I specify and runs on a power source you can make?"

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"I cannot naively do power conversion so that would involve a detour into electrical engineering."

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"Then I want the files and a new portable computer but the search'll go a lot faster if you do it."

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Cam hands him a computer, and loads another chip into his computer, and looks up what the Baron has to say about the requested topics this week.

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In a message to the commander of the Krimzon Guard, he wrote:

If we must make the choice, the weapon is a higher priority than the shield wall. The best defense is a good offense! Be prepared to take a stand and die for your city.

In a note to his daughter, he wrote:

Our plans are coming to fruition. The war will be over soon, one way or another. Afterward, I have no intention of continuing any of my sadly necessary wartime policies or prosecuting the rebels. Trust me for another three months. Keep up the good work. I'm proud of you.

In a message to a small handful of high-ranking people, he said:

Why can't we spread a rumor that the Underground is a honeypot? The vermin who flock to them would think twice about that!

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Cam is curious about more correspondence with the daughter!

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The daughter reported that she did find a buried artifact but wasn't able to move it, here's a picture, and she got attacked by metal heads while she was out, here's a list of the kinds involved. He told her not to bother going back to excavate it properly yet. His note about plans coming to fruition came after this and not in direct response to anything she wrote. She answered:

I'll do whatever I have to.

Do you want to spend the anniversary together?

And he told her when to be at the palace for dinner and which dining room to meet in.

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Scale model of the artifact.

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Chunk of metal with the seal of the House of Mar on it. It's not obvious that it does anything besides stick firmly in the rock and look pretty.

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Maybe there is normally eco stuck to it which didn't come along. What else did he write to the commander of the Guard?

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The baron sent him some requirements for the updated version of a patrol schedule and summoned him for some in-person meetings. They discussed how to keep someone called Krew from betraying them and whether it seemed like Krew understood their true aims. If he's conjuring both sides of the correspondence, the commander sent over reports on the numbers of various sorts of crimes reported and the number of criminals apprehended and mentioned that someone had voiced a worry about the eco reserves for the shield wall.

"Krew deals in weapons sometimes," says Torn, reading over his shoulder.

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"In, like, a supplying the resistance sort of way, or like an opportunistic black market sort of way, or...?"

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"Second one."

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"Charming." He shakes his head and goes back to his books. What's the deal with Mar.

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It's sort of unclear. Instead of going into too much detail about narrative accounts of Mar's actions, this book comes at it slantwise, looking at his policies and the growth of the city and associated country.

Specific laws and policies attributed to Mar include universal military service for people between twenty-two and twenty-four who couldn't prove health or financial hardship; exile and seizure of assets for rape and murder; the recently-suspended policy that resembles habeas corpus; jury trials, semi-voluntary for the jurors; money and food aid for pregnant people, all children under five, and children between five and ten actively attending school; and the election of an advisory council.

It's possible to infer a lower bound for tax revenue based on the number of person-hours of labor that went into the shield wall and the eco grid, both public works attributed to Mar, and given the amount of time those took to complete and the published tax rates (where those are still available), it's possible to put a lower bound on the mean population despite the lack of a census. That plus other records make it possible to guess the population growth rate, and it's particularly impressive given that they were actively subject to attempted genocide the entire time. Of course, part of it isn't from people being born. By all accounts they put a lot of effort into facilitating migration and trade between different settlements, and Haven City and its associated country seem to have gotten a lot of net immigration.

Another notable thing about Mar's reign is that, while it's remembered extremely fondly now, published works from the time, including newspaper editorials (something that only began to come into existence about halfway through his reign), included a lot of criticism of him and his policies.

It's possible to date the construction of nearly every large statue of or monument to him, and they all post-date his reign, with exactly one exception: his tomb was almost entirely completed in his lifetime.

There are not only no statues of him from during his reign, there are also no reliable contemporary depictions of Mar. Samos has a pet theory that Mar isn't even one person, but several working together under a shared pseudonym. Not just because his face isn't reliably known; also because he handled a lot of governance himself, at the same time as he directed the war against the metal heads, at the same time as he designed and organized the building of the shield wall and the eco grid and the sewer system and the tomb, at the same time as he collected and wrote commentaries on surviving samples of Precursor writing, at the same time as he apparently had a family, at the same time as he wrote an impassioned treatise on the concept of human rights, at the same time as he negotiated peace and mutual protection with the lurkers of Misty Island, at the same time as he wrote half a book on astronomy and two contradictory books on the philosophy of governance. It's also possible there was a Mar, but that other people's achievements ended up attributed to him somehow, whether because he deliberately stole the credit or just because of the unreliability of the historical record.

If this were true, the narrative of Mar as one person who appeared one day and won his victories through his personal valor and strength of character would be thoroughly ungrounded.

It's not a terribly long book.

While he's reading, Rit leaves, and someone stops by to pick up some of the food.

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Cam waves distractedly at the food-getter. Checks to see if "Mar" gets a unique conjuration result.

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Nope!

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Interesting! Author(s) of the attributed texts?

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The unfinished astronomy book is by a short man with green hair that fades to yellow and a conventionally pretty woman with callused hands and blue-and-green hair. The treatise on human rights is by that same man, a woman with facial tattoos that look a little like Torn's, a woman with black hair and a missing eye, a yellow-skinned man and a red-skinned man. One of the books on government is by the tattooed woman. The other is by a blue-skinned man, a man with a badly-damaged right ear, and an orange creature with a tail that isn't a lurker.

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"Hey, uh, help me out here, is this within normal variation for your species?"

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"I do know a guy with green skin. That one," (the orange one) "is an ottsel."

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"What's an ottsel?"

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"Don't I want to know. They talk. The one I know won't shut up."

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"But not about, say, where they come from or anything?"

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"They don't look alien but then neither do you. I haven't asked, the one I know lies for fun."

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"Charming. Okay, thanks." He puts the models aside. Reads the bio textbook.

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The biology book begins by explaining the concepts of phylogenetic taxonomy and evolution. There's a two-page spread of the tree of life, followed by a brief discussion of what phylogenetic groupings (like "fungus", "bird" or "reptile") are useful for and when paraphyletic groupings (like "arthropod", "plant" or "mammal") can be more useful. The book takes pains to clarify that this phylogenetic taxonomy is based primarily on observable, current genetic similarity; if, as is extremely plausible, the Precursors created all life, they nonetheless created it in such a way that it fits into this tree and more genetically "related" species are more likely to have similar reactions to drugs and be similar in their internal anatomy. Then the book explains the concept of a food web and illustrates with a sample one.

Eventually, after a disclaimer that none of this necessarily applies to metal heads, the book gets into more contingent facts about life on this planet. A lot of it is like Earth biology: the local people have cells, they have blood and lymph, they have organs recognizable as livers and hearts and stomachs, and they run it all on ATP. But they don't have a separate mitochondrial genome and their blood and bones have cells that are specialized at carrying and storing eco. Most species have the ability to draw energy from eco, instead of or in addition to things like food and oxygen, but the systems for that are woefully inadequate to the energy needs of large, active species, and in some cases animals can survive having mutations that make those systems nonfunctional.

And then it goes on to explain how photosynthesis works, which is not notably different from how photosynthesis works on Earth.

At one point Torn interrupts to let him know the Shadow is coming over soon and wants to meet Cam.

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"Sure, I can put this down when he gets here.'

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In the time it takes the Shadow to arrive, the guy handling food distribution stops by for another load and heads out again.

And then the Shadow arrives. He is the green-skinned person Torn knows. He is currently wearing his hair up and wrapped around an entire log, the ends of which are just poking out from what appears to be a sack that has tiny sprouts and mushrooms growing from it.

"Hello," he says. "You must be Cam."

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"Hello, that's me. Interesting updo."

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"Why, thank you. I find it helps me keep the natural world on my mind, so to speak. Anyway, I'm told you can make just about anything except eco and that you've been very helpful to the cause. I thought it would be... interesting to talk you about your goals."

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"Eternal flourishing of all sapient beings everywhere."

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"Eternal, hm? I suppose we wouldn't have to worry about the food chain or running out of planets."

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"You wouldn't! It's great!"

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"And you intend to stay here and fill the universe with eternally flourishing beings?"

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"I mean, I have to do something about your ongoing metal head conflict first and there might be logistical issues with my remaining here for always but in the broad strokes sure."

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"Aha. What sort of logistical issues?"

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"I need to be summoned, so if my summoner is no longer summoning me, poof. I could probably come back just fine with someone else summoning me, though, I'm just not sure - see, if it were possible for people here to summon us then it's very odd for this to be the first time it's happened."

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"Bizarre. How does a summoner summon you and how would your current summoner stop?"

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"I can make you pre-print circles to lay out on the floor and fill in, and if, say, she died, that would do it."

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"I'm not sure leaving something like that around is safe if the baron might raid this place. I am also asking what to avoid - I'd already be dead if you wanted that and I don't know whether to trust that all members of your species universally want the eternal flourishing of all sentient beings."

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"Oh, they don't, I was planning to leave you circles that mention me by name. The usual advice back home is not to draw on the floor; more specifically you don't want any diagrams roughly circular referring in any language to summoning anything, flat on the ground with room to stand in the middle."

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"It's not that surprising that it hasn't happened to anyone here before but I'm surprised it never happened to the Precursors. Speaking of which, I bet you can conjure their writings, can't you?"

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"Sure, though I'll need another of those," he waves at his hardware, "to decipher the language."

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"...Do you have a way to get rid of things you make?"

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"No. It won't be useful to random people from here, though, I guess they could learn some materials science from disassembling it but not the contents."

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"I wonder how hard it would be to get you a warehouse... Anyway, those might be slightly farther future concerns than - what exactly are your plans for the next, let's say the next month?"

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"Orienting to the situation - the metal heads' language will likely help with that, and the language the book the oracle recommended me is in."

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"Prudent of you. I can't say that I'd want to launch straight into a humanitarian project on your planet, if I found myself there, either. But, ah, there are ways I expect the situation might deteriorate unfixably in that time."

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"Oh?"

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"According to our sources there's currently enough eco in reserve to run the shield wall for another two days. The baron's mining operations are under attack by metal heads right now, and as best I can tell the reserve is shrinking. The city might well be overrun in a matter of weeks. Our plan of last resort is to get the Precursor Stone, which I doubt you can conjure a copy of, and use it to destroy their nest, with substantial risk of casualties - uh, on both sides." He doesn't particularly care about metal head casualties and isn't particularly convincing at pretending to but he has a feeling it'll play well with Cam to try. "And I don't even know what the baron is planning next but rest assured there's no chance it won't endanger anyone."

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"Does the Precursor Stone look like, uh, this -" He rummages in his models for the rock the Baron's daughter was after.

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"It would have a version of that symbol on it, but records indicate it would have been green and not made of metal."

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"Okay, uh, I can't make eco, but I could - go wade into the fight and see if the metal heads will back off if I'm indestructible at them and when my translation's up try to talk to them?"

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"That sounds like the best plan anyone has proposed this year." This may be damning it with faint praise, a bit. "Ah, you can probably have a conversation without the translation, but only with the ones who can sound... intelligible."

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"Oh, even better. Okay, gimme directions?"

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"Well, your best bet would be the nest, but they might take it amiss if you just barged in. You could leave the city through either the dead town exit or the north drain, and try talking to the metal heads there - they won't be able to talk back, but they might know who could."

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"I assume I shouldn't fly. How do I get to those on foot?"

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There is, conveniently, a map of the city already hanging on the wall for him to point at. "We're here. The drain is here." It's near the oracle. "You'll need to enter through the same exit you leave by and ideally not change shape while you're gone or bring anything living in with you."

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"...okay! I don't change shape, as a rule. Other last-minute advice?"

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"If you go for a swim you'll be shot. I don't imagine you'll care. - When you get done with that, I'll have written a wishlist, in case you want to consider doing some conjuration for me."

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"Sure, you wanna title your wishlist and I can check it out if I have downtime?"

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"Things I Want, Volume One. And good luck out there."

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"Thanks!"

And Cam heads out.

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By now it's dusk. There aren't really streetlights but there are fires and neon signs. As Cam passes it, the propaganda station is claiming the resistance is dead.

The exit is set up like an airlock, with two doors that never open at the same time. A computerized voice warns Cam that he's leaving the city.

Outside the city, there is a beach. A small part of the beach is taken up by sand and trees and palm trees and sparse grasses and a large chunk of shattered metal something; beyond that there are tall cliffs and lots of plumbing-related infrastructure that would be tricky but not impossible to climb. A tall metal head with four legs and two arms is pacing aimlessly on the sand and does not immediately notice the door open.

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"Excuse me!" Cam calls to it, waving his arm.

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That gets its attention and gets him shot at. Not by a weapon it's visibly holding, but directly from one of its arms.

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Gosh. He falls over. Gets back up. Approaches it.

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This gets him shot at again.

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It's really inconvenient for this plan that he's so unsteady on his feet. He encases the metal head's arm in a lot of ballistic gel and tries again.

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The metal head hesitates and then starts trying to bite and rip the gel off, backing a few steps away from Cam.

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"Hey, I just wanna talk," Cam says, still advancing. "Can you find someone who can talk to me?"

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The metal head hesitates, then bends down to write a few words in the sand with its non-gel-encased arm.

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Are they by any chance in a language Cam can read or no such luck.

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It's his summoner's language, or at least an attempt at it. It reads STAT YOUR BUISNESS.

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"I would like to talk to your people and try to find a resolution to your conflict with the other people."

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The metal head stares at him for a few seconds with its unblinking eyes, then writes STAY and scurries off up a cliff.

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...Cam will wait for a bit, then, reading his supply of books. History of Eco Studies?

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The field begins with the sages, whose approach was different from modern approaches to the subject in mixing practice and theory and being extremely interdisciplinary. The interdisciplinary approach led people to seek their advice on a variety of other topics, and gave them an interesting position in society.

- And he doesn't have time to get particularly far, because several metal heads show up, three of which look almost identical to the first. The others have only four limbs and are red.

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"Hello! Can any of you talk to me?"

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Not out loud, apparently. One of the red ones, though clumsier at actually forming the letters, is at least fully literate, and will try to write to him.

Hey, my real name is classified but you can call me Billy. What brings you here?

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"Hi, Billy! I'm trying to figure out why you guys are having this war and see if it can end."

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Who sent you?

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"I sent myself and do not know if my native guides wish to be named."

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Where are you from?

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"Washington."

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Are you from this planet?

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"Nope! Are you?"

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I hatched here. I can't say I like it.

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"How'd your ancestors get here?"

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Through a rift. How did you get here?

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"That's classified. Rift was - intentional? Natural phenomenon?"

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I wasn't there at the time. I'm really surprised you're not trying to kill me for my body parts.

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"I don't want your body parts. You don't have history about it?"

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I'm not a historian. It might have been made by the Precursors.

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"Okay. Is the war about people wanting your body parts?"

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The war is about the Precursor Stone and room to live in and eco and food and people wanting each other's body parts and the fact that we're in the habit of being at war. In descending order of importance.

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"What's the Precursor Stone for?"

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It's an egg.

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"One of yours?"

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A species we knew before we were stuck in the rift. Definitely not the locals.

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...Models of the Precursor Stone's parent(s).

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More than two ottsels, each of which is individually smaller than the Precursor Stone.

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"Ottsels," he diagnoses.

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Is that what they're calling them these days? How do you do that?

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"Magic. Why do you want an ottsel egg?"

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Why does it matter to you?

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"Trying to end the war, remember?"

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That explains why it matters THAT we want the egg.

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"It's why it matters why you want it! I'd like to get everybody what they want peacefully and you could get what you want from the egg another way, like if I make you a planet, then that will help a lot."

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We are not going to leave an egg of that species in their hands because of our history with its parents. THEY can use a different power source. And I'm not qualified to be making deals with you but I think our leader would agree leave them alone if we got the egg, they left us alone, and we got an entire planet with lots of food and eco and other things we want from a planet.

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"I can't make eco in particular, unfortunately."

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What else can't you make?

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"Vacuum, antimatter, people. - can make eggs."

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They confer amongst themselves briefly.

Under what circumstances would you make the eggs of things that can choose whether to cooperate?

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"...why the phrasing 'choose whether to cooperate'?"

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Imagine I want a rock to be grey. I can tell the rock to be grey but that won't change anything. Imagine I want you to make me a grey rock. I can tell you to do it and that will change something. If you do it and I bite you then you won't do it again. If you do it and I give you something you want then you will do it again. I know that, so I would not bite you if you did something I asked you to do. It is wrong to punish people who help you or reward people who hurt you. But at the very beginning, you aren't paying me back. You have a choice. Unlike a rock. Unlike some animals. So when would you make eggs of things that have that choice?

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"...well, I draw the important line somewhere else. I'd make you a chicken egg with fewer assurances than a person egg. I would need to be very confident that you planned to treat a person that hatched from an egg well and that this wouldn't have strategic effects that would concern me."

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Species that choose not to cooperate start wars of extermination. I'm not qualified to say for sure but I think we have enough of those and don't need more right now. I think our leader will probably be more worried about convincing you not to make eggs. But why would you care whether we planned to treat the person well?

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"I care about people in general and want them treated well and object to creating situations in which I am responsible for that not being the case."

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Do you object to the death penalty?

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"Yeah. I could imagine it being appropriate in some circumstance but generally object to political entities having the power to hand it down because they will not reserve it for such corner cases."

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A long time ago there was a species that had everything. Enough food, enough water, enough eco, enough space. They traveled the universe. They came to a planet where they found a different species. They did not like how this second species did things, how they went to war, what their favorite color of eco was, what they believed was right and wrong. So they decided to change all that by force without asking. Is that the sort of corner case you mean?

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"...I can see that starting a war but I associate the concept of the death penalty with justice systems."

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I don't understand that distinction. Is it important?

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"It matters to me. If you're in a position to wield a justice system at someone you likely have the option to choose non-death penalties; wars may not have that affordance."

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Because you want the minimum harm needed to stop them or because you think death is out of proportion?

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"The former."

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It may interest you to know that conquering this city would suffice to put an end to their use of slaves.

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"Cool, I like ending slavery. I'd like to achieve that as nonviolently as possible."

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I think we need to tell our leader what you've said. How can we talk to you again later?

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"You could take me to your leader? I'd like to get this sorted out quick, that's why I didn't wait till I had working translation for your language."

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It would be useful if you were there but we walked a long way and don't want to show you secret paths that make the trip easier.

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"Suppose I demonstrate that I could find the location anyway?"

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The location isn't secret, the paths are. I just don't want to walk the long way back with you. If you had an air train I'd consent to come along and tell you where to fly it.

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Cam takes his coat off and spreads his wings.

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Billy draws a very messy and approximate map of the area between the beach and the nest.

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"Thanks! See you there."

And he takes off and flies.

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It gets dark out. The green sun is just past zenith but it's a very underwhelming sun for its apparent size.

The area around the nest was once a city, and not a metal head city, but the ruins are buried under piles of dirt and scrap metal. A substantial fraction of the light comes from glowing plants lining a very uneven and winding path to the entrance. It would be extremely hard to get in on foot. Not impossible, but extremely hard. When he lands, the large spiderlike metal heads attempt to gesture that he should go through the large opening into the cave system that makes up the nest.

The nest itself is visibly alien. The ground looks as if it has veins or maybe a network of very shallow roots, and here and there opaque green domes stick out of it. There are big gaping pits, and the walkways past them have something a bit like fences made of mysterious spikes, some of which look as if they could be alive if they weren't so utterly still. A metal head whose head is bigger than Cam's entire body is waiting inside.

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What a creepsome setting. Cam snaps some photos on his way in.

"Hi," he says to the giant metal head.

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"I hear you want to negotiate," says the giant metal head, whose voice sounds noticeably off but isn't harder to parse than a slight accent would be, "and I am the one who would make the final decision about any peace treaty."

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"Nice to meet you! I'm Cam. I'm a newcomer and a neutral party to the situation and I'd like the war to end, and I am prepared to fabulously bribe you to get it, what can we do with that?"

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"I will need to provide context for this. Something I am learning about the people of this planet is the extent to which they operate as individuals. Many species do, to an extent. I am not every 'metal head'. Precursors were different people socially; one might like flying, and another calligraphy, and a third animated sculpture. But they are very similar in values; they make their children very precisely. And they share the memories of their ancestors. If the so-called Precursor Stone were to hatch, the Precursor that came forth would resume their war with us on the day of its hatching.

"I say all this because otherwise you might think it was overkill to hunt and destroy every single Precursor that has ever lived. You would not kill the infant grandchild of one who wronged you. But I will not compromise on the destruction of their species."

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"Oh, that's why you want the egg. ...Why has it taken so long to hatch, does it need special conditions to do that or something?"

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"It does, but ones persistently at risk of being fulfilled while it remains in their hands."

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"Can it think, yet?"

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"It is probably able to learn new information. I am not sure if it can draw inferences or feel anything. I suspect it cannot."

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"And you're very confident that it would immediately - while alone and many years after the initial conflict - start attacking you all again?"

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"I am not confident that it wouldn't, say, spend ten years building weapons and reproducing first."

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"Ah, if they can reproduce alone that's something. So you don't actually want the egg, you want the egg to be destroyed? And the other guys want it as a power source, right, how does an egg serve as a power source..."

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"Dishearteningly nondestructively! Although I suppose after enough millennia of it it might be exhausted. The egg contains a great amount of eco and energy intended for use by the newly hatched Precursor. There is... extra."

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"Where does eco come from under normal circumstances?"

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"From one perspective, this question is as answerable as 'where does mass come from under normal circumstances?' but I think you are asking from an engineer's perspective and that makes it easier. Often, where it appears there is no eco, the eco is simply too dispersed to be of any use - like water vapor in the air. It can condense, naturally or with assistance. Most rocky bodies have some trapped inside, as well; it has been mined both from planets and from asteroids."

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"Is there enough for everyone if there were enough condensation equipment? If there were that, and also I introduced non-eco-based power for various infrastructure?"

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"I am not sure it can be condensed as fast as Haven City uses it. I imagine if they stopped using it for lighting and flight and the shield wall and weaponry and medical experiments that would change. There might still be shortages of individual colors, but I expect we could solve that."

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"Okay. So if the egg is destroyed and they stop hogging the eco, do you have a further quarrel?"

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"They will need to stop hunting us for our skull gems; we might consider refraining from hunting them for their flesh in exchange. They will need to either allow partial terraforming of this planet or get out of the way of our space program. And there is more, but for that, you must also speak to Baron Praxis. As must I."

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You might consider it, wow. "I can supply flesh, if they're really that tasty, and possibly also skull gems unless those involve eco. My understanding is they like the planet how it is, though I didn't specifically ask - what terraforming did you want to do? What's their beef with the space program?"

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"It isn't tasty at all - very little that grows on this planet is. Our skull gems have many functions, but I think to the people of Haven City they are only trophies; it is possible the mere knowledge that you might be able to conjure them would suffice to destroy the market for them. To leave this place, we would need ships capable of carrying all of us to another planet, and fuel for them, and food for the journey. With the war disrupting our ability to build infrastructure or stockpile food or fuel, we are stuck here. And as for our terraforming plans, I find myself wondering if you can conjure them."

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"Probably, but I don't have translation for your language yet. Do you have a planet in mind?"

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"Some underwhelming candidates; we haven't pursued that while we have unfinished business here and could not leave anyway. We might be able to terraform one of the other planets in this system, or live in enclosed habitats, but we will, ah, understand if you would sooner see us leave the system entirely."

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"I can supply ships and fill 'em up. I can also terraform, but I won't be available for that until things are more stably squared away. What do you need besides materiel to clear off of here?"

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"We have an ongoing business relationship with someone on this planet, who owes us and is only falling farther behind on payments. We are willing to consider simply ending the relationship and having no further dealings with them, but I am not sure yet whether to offer them the chance to pay up and have us remain here doing what we were paid to do. I am leaning toward no."

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"What're they paying you to do?"

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"...It is secret, but I will tell you if you will demonstrate the ability to at least in principle find out for yourself. Would you be able to conjure, say, the multimedia presentation called..." something which cannot be pronounced by a human.

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"Sure." Pop.

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"Ah, you can. That isn't the secret, that is about our terraforming plans, but now I am convinced I am only saving you some time by telling you. We were hired to attack Haven City on a convenient schedule, by Baron Praxis."

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"Wow, everything I hear about that guy makes me like him less."

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"I have yet to meet anyone who feels differently. If your proposed resolution to the war involves us disappearing one day with the Precursor Stone, then he is not a concern. Otherwise, the, ah, division within Haven City will matter a great deal."

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"I was thinking I'd find and destroy the Precursor Stone, rather than you wandering off with it?"

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"...That might be agreeable to us. It would also be a very impressive feat."

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"Is it particularly hard to destroy?"

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"Yes. My primary plan was to arrange a hatching surrounded by metal heads, but I will accept other options. It might survive being thrown into the yellow sun but it is unlikely that it would ever be able to hatch under such conditions."

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Cam looks around for a rock, picks one up, interpolates it into dust.

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"I am somewhat concerned that if you break the stone open in such a way it would cause a violent release of energy."

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"I'm indestructible, but that's good to know, I can bring it into space first."

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"I would expect the resulting explosion to reach us from orbit unless the stone was very drained, much more so than I expect it to be by now. I would expect the resulting explosion to reach the suns from here. I would need to have studied more physics to say whether a light year would be far enough."

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"...gosh. Okay. Is there a way to usefully capture this explosion since eco is such a limited resource? Or are we talking about a non-eco explosion."

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"Both, and I can set my scientists to answering that."

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"Exciting, you do that. Do you maybe want to tell me what makes it hatch in case they're on the verge?"

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"Contact with one pure of heart. A certain affinity for eco might also be required."

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"...'pure of heart'?"

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"I am afraid I am a very biased source but I would expect it to mean someone who approves of the Precursors' values."

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"Which is the whole, conquest of you for being culturally distinct, thing?"

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"...I believe that is simply an implication of the rest of the set. They existed for many ages before we met, and in that time they pursued a number of projects that I am aware of. They were particularly fond of spreading life throughout the universe and particularly against war and chaos. They had an aesthetic sensibility which I'm sure you can discover through conjuring their ruins. They loved science and discovery, perhaps to an unwise degree. And, yes, they hated dissension, destruction, death, dark eco, the appearance of most things we find attractive, the infliction of pain, vengeance, and heterotrophy. I would even go so far as to say they hated change. And we were on our planet warring with each other and enjoying it - we were the only species there that I think you would consider people and we were still decades away from the capacity for interstellar travel."

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"You actively enjoy war?"

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"An amount of it. It has been many centuries of fighting with aliens who are unwilling or unable to arrange truces and I am... tired."

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"How sure are you that the Precursors weren't just - overreacting to a misunderstanding? Enjoying war is weird."

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"It has not seemed so in my experience but I am certain our experiences do not overlap much. They didn't ask, they didn't sue for peace when we responded in anger, they they never behaved in any way that gave me the impression that they were trying to understand. But no, I am not sure."

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"I'm, like, slightly worried that I will turn out to be pure of heart if I grab the egg, you see."

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"I would expect gloves to suffice but if you're particularly concerned you could try tongs. Made of Precursor metal, if you want to be very sure."

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"Also it would be a real pity if someone trying very hard with a suitably restricted baby Precursor could get them to cut it out and then instead genocided them, so I would like to do some background reading once I have their language translatable."

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"Naturally. I expect recommending any particular titles or helping with translation would only make it less useful to you. But do you have a communicator?"

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"A communicator?"

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"The people of this planet use them to speak to and hear each other over distances of miles, as if they were face to face."

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"Oh, I don't have one and if you mean that literally I don't have anything as good up my sleeve either but I could make something for it. You can also write to me without going to the trouble of sending the letter; just put 'Letter to Cam' on it and I'll get it next time I check."

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"That will work for me to write to you, but what if you have something to tell me?"

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"Oh, then it won't work at all, I can make some phones for us, but the letter option is available if it ever makes sense."

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"I appreciate it. And - I will, at least for a while, leave Haven City unharmed and let Baron Praxis know that I am ending our deal."

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"Thanks, I appreciate that! Do you guys need anything in the short term?"

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"Nothing you would find so immediately understandable that you could confirm it wasn't a weapon."

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"No? No tasty non-person foods from your home planet? Why are you here on this one, anyway, I didn't get a clear understanding of the history."

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"We would love the flesh of..." something unpronounceable to humans, "but I can imagine ways I could use it as a weapon. We were trapped inside a deprecated rift network by the Precursors, only for a curious young man to discover and open one of the gates. We were meant to languish outside time and space for all eternity."

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"Wow. I guess if you wanna do some genocide and don't like death that might happen."

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"In their defense it was not as long inside as out."

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"I think all eternity would have wound up being pretty long! What exactly is a rift network?"

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"A more powerful but less safe version of a warp network."

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"Which is..."

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"Warp rings are circular devices large enough for a person to pass through. When two are connected on a warp network, you go into one and out the other. The old rift network handled time as well as space; you could go in one gate and out the same gate a year earlier."

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"...wow, that has, uh, probably a lot of implications. I assume I can't go to the right place and go back in time and see if I can talk the Precursors out of conquest?"

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"Those gates, at those times, are not connected to the only gate on this planet. Even if they were, that is not what happened."

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"It enforces a consistent history?"

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"It is difficult to experimentally distinguish several possible theories that would explain the observed result that we have no records of anyone reporting having changed the past and seen those changes reverberate through the future. It might be that if you could go back, you would undo the war, and afterward you would remember a world where I had told you you were the destined peacemaker who had arrived to save us all from eons of misunderstanding and pointless losses and you went to play your destined role."

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"...well, that's disturbing but not as disturbing as the eons of pointless losses probably. But I can't try it?"

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"Not with this planet's gate."

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"Okay, but how far would it be in a spaceship?"

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"I do not know of any gates that are connected to the ones that would allow you access to the Precursors. The gate here would not require a spaceship to reach. If you wanted to find our old planet in the present - I do not know. We are lost."

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"...I could try to find it, though it would be kind of a hassle."

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"It is not a priority but it would mean a great deal to me."

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"Has the planet got a name?"

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"It has had many, although I'm afraid several are just various words for dirt. Perhaps you could try..." this short one.

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First order of business: planet exist?

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Nope.

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"- it's gone, sorry."

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"It is, at least, good to know." His inflections are humanlike enough to sound distinctly solemn.

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"Yeah. I'm sorry. I hope your new planet is nice. How exactly do you use food as a weapon?"

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"It would likely be toxic to local creatures."

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"I see. Do you have enough to eat without eating any people for the next little while?"

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"It will not kill anyone to refrain from eating anything that can speak for the next day."

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"Also babies of species that can speak."

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"I expect we can survive that too."

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"Would you like some person-flesh, which is less likely to be toxic, to tide you over more comfortably?"

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"I wouldn't turn it down."

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He makes a pile of it, vacuum-sealed so it won't go bad right away.

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"Thank you."

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"You're welcome. Anything else we should cover before I circle back?"

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"Not that I can think of."

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"Would any of you like to help refine my computer's understanding of the language?"

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"How?"

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"I'll give you one and it will ask questions about which of two sentences is more felicitous."

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"It's very possible that someone will do that once I've had a chance to let them know they can stop trying to ambush people."

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"Cool." He leaves a computer not too far from the pile of meat. "And a phone. Poke this to ring me."

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They can do that. After he leaves they set about checking whether he's tried to poison the meat.

The green sun, he might notice, is moving south in the sky.

The voice of the airlock computer tells him it's good to see him still alive. The area just inside, over the water, is one of the darkest parts of the city at this hour, not that he has much basis for comparison.

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He meanders back. Puts his coat back on when he gets to the edge of town.

Stops at the oracle's en route in case it has anything new to say.

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It's quiet for now. Some candles have burned out since the last time anyone was in to clean them up. The food has disappeared.

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"Hey oracle?" he says, in case that helps, but if it doesn't he'll turn around and go back to home base.

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It doesn't help. Someone does try to mug him with a kitchen knife on the way.

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The kitchen knife will mysteriously snap as soon as it strikes! Cam picks himself up off the ground, rummages in his pocket, offers the guy a limon.

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The guy will take the limon and run. No one else tries anything on the way.

Back at the hideout, Torn is asleep, Rit is gone, someone is sleeping restlessly on one of the top bunks, and someone is whispering a bedtime story to a small child.

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Aww. Cam will do his reading very quietly. What's in the rest of the eco book?

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When last he left the History of Eco Studies the field was dominated by the sages.

Their mix of theoretical and practical approaches supposedly became a problem when Gol Acheron and his sister began studying dark eco. There's a brief digression about how reliable various aspects of the various stories about them are, and what it would say about the societies that invented them if they were invented. One version of the story is even reproduced in full in the book: their exposure to dark eco drove them mad and led them to want to team up with the lurkers for world domination, only for them to be driven even madder and seek to betray the lurkers and destroy the entire planet; then someone from one of the villages they raided got mad, broke into their citadel, prayed for a miracle, received light eco from the heavens, and destroyed the dark sages.

Regardless, it is clear that treating dark eco as something to be studied, understood, and used represents a major change in the field. These days people take precautions to limit their exposure and don't try to destroy the world.

Recently, the attitude that eco is something sacred has been fading. Simultaneously, advances in statistics have led to changes in the way experimental results are reported. Consequently, modern and historical writing on the topic sound very different: the field has gone from discussing how red eco embodies the virtue of steadfastness to running controlled trials of people's running speed and grip strength with and without red eco exposure.

There's an entire chapter on the history of eco containment, and the weaknesses of older materials, and what new experiments have been made possible (for example, injecting eco into people is now technically feasible).

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Gosh.

Cam sets the book aside once he's through with it and does a bunch of conjurations to try to put together an origin and timeline about the origins of lurkers and ottsels and metal heads and - he doesn't actually know the name of the main species. Which of these are native, he knows where the metal heads came from but are there more in the universe, are there any Precursors left besides that one egg...?

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This planet was barren until the Precursors came and terraformed it hundreds of thousands of years ago, bringing or creating starting populations of a wide variety of species, including very close ancestors of the local humanoids and the lurkers (and the crocadogs and the palm trees and the ferns...). Precursors who have ever been present on this planet are overwhelmingly likely to have been ottsel-shaped at some point, with the distant second most common shape vaguely resembling the oracle.

There are no longer any other metal heads.

There is one ottsel-shaped person on this planet right now, an orange one who looks much more similar to the one who cowrote one of Mar's books than the average Precursor. There are a handful of ottsel-shaped Precursors elsewhere in the solar system. And then there are the other Precursors. They don't look much like ottsels. Some of them resemble the oracle even more vaguely than the others. Some look capable of flight. Most are cyborgs; most are purple or black or both; most are spiky. Other precursor artifacts tend to be smooth, curvy, and brown or bronze with occasional red or blue or black details; the ships the spiky purple Precursors are on, on the other hand, are purple, spiky, sometimes tentacled. This variety has existed for hundreds of thousands of years, but the share of all precursors who are spiky and purple has increased dramatically over time.

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Huh! (He made all these models very tiny and gave himself a magnifying glass; he sweeps them all into a paper bag once he's consolidated his notes.)

He phones the metal heads.

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The metal heads are phoneable.

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He puts headphones in, speaks very softly right into the pickup. "Hey, uh, I checked, and there are still Precursors around, which makes me more reluctant to abort their egg. Also nonzero of them are on this planet and they aren't obviously involving themself in your affairs, can you explain this?"

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"...I take it you met Daxter," says the metal head leader.

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"Didn't get the name."

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"The talkative one. He is not a Precursor. Baron Praxis has replaced part of his skull with metal but that does not make him a metal head. Daxter is not a Precursor."

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"Comes up when I conjure for members of the species."

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"Can you conjure people whose parents were Precursors, or who hatched from Precursor eggs?"

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"One sec." He does this.

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The non-egg one currently on this planet is in neither of those categories. The ones elsewhere in the solar system, on the other hand, seem to belong to the species in the normal way.

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"Okay, the ottsel manages somehow not to have this trait, I don't know why he's a member of the species, maybe they cloned him or something, that might do it. The rest of them have eggs and parents though."

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"It would be very surprising if they were aware of us and not planning our extermination."

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"Well, they're out there. There are two color schemes of 'em even."

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"Two - ah, the dark makers, yes. They were once Precursors. I expect the two, ah, 'color schemes' are at war with one another."

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"Did you have some kind of long term plan for avoiding them?"

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"No. I thought they were gone, because it has been ages and there is still life in the universe."

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"Okay. Do you have an early formulation of such a plan, or should I, like, maybe go talk to them?"

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"I would urge you not to draw their attention to this place."

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"If they're in reasonable commuting distance at all I wouldn't tell them where I came from but they might guess that I was in reasonable commuting distance."

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"If you are, we will need to plan for an invasion. Are you?"

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"Checking." Are they in this bit of galaxy here.

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There is one dark maker ship within a light year of their system.

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"Some of the purple guys are - not necessarily impossible to correspond with if I aim radio at them but definitely not convenient and definitely not someplace I can just jaunt casually."

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"It could be worse. Thank you for telling me all of this."

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"Please do not decide to murder the ottsel just to be sure, or anything."

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He laughs. "I am already sure. Have no fear on that count."

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Cam ends the call. Conjures the Shadow's list.

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He's organized it into four categories: war-related, scientific, urgent humanitarian, and long-term humanitarian.

For the war, he wants some forensic conjuring done on whatever it is Krew is making for the baron, whether there are any metal heads inside the city, and the amount of eco in several stockpiles (he's hoping Cam can make plastic models of it, or conjure specifically for barrels that are empty but should be full of it), and whether some missing people are dead or in prison or in trouble they could be rescued from. Besides that he'd like a set of fake Krimzon Guard armor and rifle. It will be less good but still potentially useful if the rifle can't fire, just as long as it looks right.

For science, he wants a few blank notebooks and pencils, the scientific writings of Gol Acheron if Cam has some sensible way of filtering love letters out, and similarly for a couple of other sages, and he'd like to know if Cam can conjure for something like sages who were contemporary with Gol. He wants a model of a Precursor and a sample of their writings and a diorama of the Lost Precursor City when it was inhabited by the Precursors, and confirmation of whether all life on their planet was created by the Precursors. Oh, and confirmation of whether Mar was one person.

For urgent humanitarian reasons, he'd like to fill a larger room than the hideout Cam is in with chipped yakow and tomato cherry jam and cherry tomato jam. He's working on clearing out a place for it and should have one in a day or two. He'd also like sterile bandages, needles, and for Cam to collaborate with Rit about what drugs would make the biggest difference to her practice.

For the longer term, he has a rough map of areas where the topsoil is either absent or thoroughly fucked up by the war, where he'd like Cam to try adding a couple of feet on top and planting this list of seeds, some of which are for plants that have gone extinct recently. And he'd like it if it were possible to make non-eco-powered versions of an eco condenser and an eco color sorter. And he'd like to be able to improve on the baron's urban development plans, maybe by finding someplace to add a nice tall hotel where people can stay while their condemned neighborhoods are destroyed and rebuilt, and maybe even by getting Cam involved in the rebuilding.

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Cam will do... most of this. He doesn't know what the Guard gear is supposed to be for and will hold on that till he knows. He'd like to talk to the metal heads - and to the Shadow about the metal heads - before relaying intel on them. And he'll wait till Rit is awake before designing a medical care package. Gol Acheron's published works can get got. When Rit wakes up he's fiddling with eco condenser designs and has a model hotel by his elbow next to a city diorama.

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Krew is making something a local engineer could, and Cam might, recognize as a bomb designed to mostly explode in one particular direction. Gol Acheron has no published works.

Rit comes in in the early morning at about the same time as an elderly man with a staff and very long sideburns.

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"Morning," says Cam. "I'm supposed to talk to you about medical supplies?"

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"Oh? Okay. I could use more of those, actually I have a list... somewhere... actually I bet you could make my list... some of them will be too big for the hideout but I can go over it and point those out."

The old man nods to Cam and waits for Torn to wake up.

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Once she has titled the list, lo, it appears. "I don't know the pharmacology for your species, I trained on other folks, but things like splints or whatever I might have improvements on."

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"That sounds worth taking a look at while I'm here. Are you an actual medical doctor, then?"

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"I went to medical school, but our credentialing system is probably not identical to yours."

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"I'm not even a doctor, they're just desperate. Or at least I wasn't one before I spent the last few years patching people up. Anyway, splints, make me one of ours and let me know how you'd improve on it?"

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He makes one of theirs and pulls up splinting-related information on his computer to go through with her. And bandages, and disinfectants, and anything else not directly related to the specific biology of this species. Do they have a name, by the way?

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Socially their name for themselves is broad enough to include similar species and would also apply to Earth humans, but they do have a system for giving species unique scientific names. It's just unwieldy. Theirs is nine syllables long.

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That is pretty long! He will call them their umbrella term if that isn't insensitive or anything for convenience.

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It's not insensitive, they call themselves humans all the time! Rit is so grateful for the supplies and the improved splints and bandages and so on.

Meanwhile Torn wakes up and talks to the old man, who's just come in from the wasteland with a report on the metal heads.

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What is the report on the metal heads?

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"They're up to something in the abandoned mine; I wasn't able to get close enough to see what they were doing in there. Something must have happened overnight because they're pulling back from the city; I was," yawn, "up for hours watching them. I hope you don't mind my taking a rest now."

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"They were in the Baron's employ and I have convinced them to break their deal with him in expectation of sending them all to another planet soon."

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"Very impressive."

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"Thanks!"

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The old man picks a lower bunk to nap on. Torn, now that he's up and not otherwise busy, asks Cam what else has changed overnight.

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"Nothing else changed much, I just learned some things."

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"Like?" he asks, getting some writing implements ready.

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"Ottsels are members of the Precursor species! Which comes in two color schemes and they are probably having a war out there in space somewhere. The Precursor Stone is an egg and the metal heads' original planet is gone presumably as a casualty of their original conflict with the Precursors. Things attributed to Mar were done by several people. Metal heads don't actually like eating humans but this planet isn't very well suited to them and any other food I could have made them might have been potentially usable as poison to local creatures so now they have a bunch of human meat nobody had to die for to tide them over while things are in flux."

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"Wow. I didn't know I could get less religious. Ottsels." He shakes his head. "If the metal heads aren't going to get in the way, we can either leave or depose Praxis. The Shadow will rather the second one."

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"He seems like he sucks! What's the deposition liable to look like?"

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"Best case scenario: kill him, make a deal with his daughter and have her act as regent for the heir, put Erol on trial and probably execute him, probably have a mass amnesty for everyone still alive in the fortress prison. That could go wrong if he got away. Or if Erol got away. Or if anything happened to Ashelin. Or if it turned out the KG wouldn't work for us. Or if it turned out anyone in the prison was there for a good reason. Or if the metal heads attacked while we were all busy."

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"Erol and Ashelin and KG are...?"

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"KG is short for Krimzon Guard, Erol is their commander, Ashelin is the baron's daughter."

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"Got it. Why is the baron being dead as opposed to locked up the best case?"

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He laughs bitterly. "Can't say he doesn't deserve it. Still. Better to be sure he's gone and not have to waste space keeping him around, especially if we're about to empty out the prison aside from him."

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"Are you sure he didn't ever bother to arrest non-political criminals? I did have a mugging attempt on my way back."

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"I've already talked that over with the Shadow and a friend of mine in the Guard. We aren't going to hold anyone who was convicted under Praxis and we aren't going to lock anyone up until we've had a chance to make a new facility - we don't have blueprints drawn up yet but we've talked it over some and I can tell you what we've already decided it should have. But we're not locking someone up who I'm sure didn't hurt you or take anything you can't replace."

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"- no, no, I broke his knife and gave him a limon, I don't want to go after the guy, I'm just pointing out the rate of actual crime is not zero. The jail itself is a problem here?"

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"We could probably do a lot better with the same building. Could do ten-hour workdays, visits twice a month, allow paper books... but the Shadow thinks it's important they get to see outside."

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"It has salutary effects on one's health," Cam agrees. "Okay, I'm not going to bat for the Baron, he's an asshole and a politically complicated one."

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"Yeah. If we don't have metal heads to worry about we can pull it off on our own but it might be easier with help and easier might mean lives saved. Or, we can run. I'll have to talk with the Shadow about that and I'm thinking we should loop you in, you know what you can offer us and you can get us information that'd make it easier to choose."

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"What kind of information?"

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"If we do run, we're leaving his current prisoners behind and don't know how many of them there are. If we move somewhere we'll need to know what else lives there now. We need to know if Praxis has any plans for what to do about it if a hundred air trains materialize and start flying people away. We need to know if he's booby-trapped the palace or the fortress or if he has anything destructive on a dead-man switch. We need to know how much of the countryside Kras claims and where."

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"Okay. I can do some of that easily, like number of prisoners - what's the building called?"

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"The fortress. - Not everyone in it is a prisoner or a guard, it's also the armory and a lot of other things."

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"Order of magnitude on expected number of occupants?"

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"It varies but probably more than fifty and less than two hundred."

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"If I just give you a heap of little plastic dudes can you sort them by clothing or something?"

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"Yeah."

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Little bag of little dudes.

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He sorts them. The ones in red armor and the ones in yellow armor go together in a pile, and the ones in assorted rags (with labels including "prisner", "renosirp", and "prisc r") go together in a pile, and the miscellaneous others go together in a pile.

Meanwhile Rit takes some of the medical supplies to deliver to another hideout, and someone takes the kid somewhere more suitable for a kid, and the hideout ends up empty except for Cam and Torn and Kor.

Once the models are all sorted out, Torn frowns at the pile of prisoners. "This is fewer than I was expecting, in better shape than I was expecting, and that's Samos."

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"Who's Samos?"

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He picks out the model of the Shadow in prison clothes and a new hairstyle. "See? It's weird for him to have a lookalike but I just talked to him yesterday... I should call him."

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"...huh." Is this the same person, Cam would like to know by means of more plastic dudes.

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Yes.

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"It's not a lookalike, it's the same guy. I don't remember if I explained how to write me but I'll check -" Letters to Cam?

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There are three. The first:

I have a new wishlist for you. Or you could call it an old one.

My daughter Keira's biological father and any published works of his. A restored Lost Precursor Coast swamp habitat, to the extent possible, which should include green swamp grass, Asher's swamp grass, common swamp grass, cattails, lurker bats, southern gray dragonflies, thornwalls, mangroves, black algae, swamp fleas, three species of green algae without distinguishing names, swamp flies, and unfortunately some extinct species that give birth to live young. A copy of Loran's sculpture titled Beauty and Ferocity of Nature. My notes that were lost to water damage on the third day of the third month of the 548th year as the sages reckon years.

The sages' reckoning hasn't been used for the calendar since before Mar.

The second:

if you feel like it, not that i would want to PRESUME to tell you how to use your time, you might CONSIDER getting me OUT OF HERE

The third contains strategically interesting information about the fortress prison and mockery of some of the guards.

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...Cam hands over the third letter and starts trying to figure out how old this guy is and who his daughter is and what species he is.

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Torn reads the letter and looks steadily more baffled, while waiting to see if Samos will pick up his communicator.

Samos exists in two places right now - the one with the fungal updo is taking a bath - and has existed in two places for about two years, before which he existed in one place for several decades. Before that, there were centuries of him not existing. But before that there's about a decade of him, just one of him, roughly contemporary with stories of Gol Acheron. He didn't exist at all before the fall of the continent-wide civilization.

He's the local sort of "human", just an unusual shade of it. His (adopted) daughter has callused hands and blue-and-green hair and looks an awful lot like one of the people who cowrote one of Mar's books.

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"- oh, I see, he time traveled. How interesting."

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He gives up on trying get through to fungal-updo-Samos. "What? How? Can we do that?"

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"Precursors had it but I didn't think there was any to be had nearby! Do you know where the one who isn't currently in jail is?"

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"Not sure. I would've guessed he was having breakfast but he'd pick up if he were."

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"In the bath. I just mean like the address."

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He can point it out on the city map hanging on the wall.

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"I will go pay him a visit unless you have reason to believe that's unwise."

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"Can't think of any. If you're slow he might head over to the forest before you get there."

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"If I ride around on a full sized version of this will that create more problems than it solves?" Cam asks, displaying a tiny motorcycle.

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"Yeah, lots. You can - you can't conjure the fuel, though - you can borrow the green zoomer parked in they alley if you stay in your lane, stay in the high hover zone, and don't run into anything."

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"I don't know how to drive one."

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"They come with a tutorial but that won't give you much practice, will it. Still probably safer than trying to drive on the ground."

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"You could zoom there? Take this with you." He hands over a little drone.

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He thinks about that for a moment.

"Might be fine. Conjure me some extra concealer?" His tattoos are unique and he's wanted.

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Makeup appears over the tats. Cam holds up a mirror.

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"Nice."

He can zoom to the Shadow, then, with the drone.

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Cam watches through the drone camera while trying to piece out the metatimeline of the Shadow's time traveling habits.

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Torn heads into another, slightly nicer, city section and knocks on a door. Samos invites him in and offers him tea.

Samos has the fungal updo at the earliest time he existed, when he appeared before the time of Mar, and by the end of his time back then he'd ditched it in favor of just wrapping his hair around a log and calling it done. During his continuous block of decades of singular existence up till a couple years ago he went from being a baby to being a child to being an adult.

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Okay, so Cam knows a version who has been in normal time his whole life, and he is - somehow going to - go back in time and live for a kinda weird amount of time and get thrown in jail - when did he get thrown in jail?

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Not very long after he arrived in this general era.

Torn declines the tea and tells the not-in-prison Samos that Cam sent him to bring over the drone.

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"Hi!" says the drone. "You might wish to know that you are apparently slated to time travel at some point! Your future self goes back a long ways and is still kicking but he's in jail and has sent me some letters."

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"We'll just have to fix that. And I'll have to pack, how far back was it?"

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"Pre-time-of-Mar."

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"The amenities are going to be terrible, aren't they. Well, we'll have to get the other me out and ask him what's going on. That dovetails nicely with the next steps we need to take to bring down the baron - Torn disagrees with me because he's wrong - so how about if we talk about it after I'm done visiting the plants and see if we can have a plan ready to go by tomorrow."

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"Visiting the plants?"

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"They have feelings too, you know! And besides, if you get in the habit of not going to the forest as long as there's anything more urgent, you'll never go, and then you'll turn into a sour cynic who hates everyone and wants to turn tail and run even though we're winning." He gives Torn a pointed look.

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"I wouldn't say I do know that plants have feelings but I suppose if that's how you feel about it perhaps your future self will understand."

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"It's not like you don't have recon to do first. Can I use this... alien communicator... to contact you in a quarter of an hour?"

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"Sure, I can leave the mic live, just don't do anything loud."

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The Shadow heads out to the forest, which isn't far, to quietly try (and fail) to meditate, until he isn't too horrified to face this mission the way he'd face any other. The ambient forest sounds are peaceful and not loud at all: a distant waterfall, a quiet chirping bird, a soft wind disturbing the trees.

Torn meanwhile heads back to the hideout. He takes a call while he's on the stairs on the way in and starts swearing by the time he's properly inside the room. He hangs up. "We have new problems - probably nothing worth wasting time on but maybe important, can you find where one of my men was ten minutes ago? His name's Jak and he's probably with the ottsel I told you about."

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Jak's surroundings ten minutes ago.

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Ten minutes ago, Jak, a teenager with a rifle who looks like one of the authors of Mar's half-finished astronomy book, was standing on what looks like the palace roof judging by the nearby series of merlons and spires. He did have an ottsel on his shoulder.

Ten minutes ago, Jak, the tiny Heir of Mar, was perched on the back of someone's badly worn-out sofa.

"Why am I surprised anymore," Torn mutters.

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...Cam checks real quick if "exists twice right now" is a conjurable parameter but it is not.

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"That's probably the palace. Can you figure out how he got in? We can assume the baron'll notice and patch the gap so we'll have to do this some other way - I'm going to skin those two alive, they've probably just made everything twice as messy as it has to be."

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"I hope you have a volcano to drop all these models in," says Cam, but he pans back to find the point at which he entered.

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"Yeah, just north of here. That elevator, huh - we can work around that."

Which is when the Shadow pipes up via the drone, "We shouldn't need to use one anyway. Just stage a trap for him outside the palace. - The plants have had enough of my company, I'll meet you in a few minutes."

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"See you in a bit, try not to fall in a time travel portal en route."

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They talk over their plans and then put them into action. The biggest delay is feeding Praxis the right information to lure him out; he's very prepared to defend himself against threats he's ever heard of before, but demons aren't one of those. Torn tips Ashelin off in advance; within ten minutes all the propaganda stations in the city are playing her announcing the change of leadership and a mass pardon for everyone still alive in the fortress and everyone charged exclusively with supporting the Underground.

As soon as the older Samos has access to a communicator he calls Torn and tells him to send someone to bring something back for him from the sacred site in dead town. And once he's done that, he writes a letter to Cam, burns it, and goes to the forest to commune with the trees.

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And what sayeth this letter?

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My younger self and the Heir of Mar need to visit the past for several reasons. Keira should be working on a rift rider they could use for the trip. I doubt you can conjure most of what she needs, but you might try. When it's done, it will need to pass through the rift gate, which is portable and no longer where it was when we last saw it. I'm worried the metal heads might have taken it.

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"Hey, is it still a big deal if I fly around what with the new management?"

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"Go for it, if anything happens I'll make a face at Ashelin about it."

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It's fairly open for a forest, with lots of open grassy areas. The wooden bridges over the streams and ditches are in much better repair than any of the ones in the slums, and look as if they were made with any attention to aesthetics whatsoever.

The older Samos is floating in the lotus position about seven feet off the ground in front of an especially large tree near a cliff.

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"You can levitate, that's cool. Your letter was a little light on the justifications?"

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"The continent would have been flooded with dark eco otherwise."

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"Howso?"

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"Gol and Maia studied it and they wouldn't listen to me when I warned them what would happen. No one ever does."

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"I don't feel very informed."

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He sighs and floats down until his head is level with Cam's.

"In the course of their studies, they were exposed to enough dark eco to entirely corrupt their values. They decided it was so beautiful that they just had to share it with the entire world! Never mind how many innocent creatures would die or worse if they did! I tried warning them but they blew me off, and next thing I knew they were trying to open the silos of dark eco the Precursors locked away."

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"How does dark eco do that, anyway?"

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"I wrote a book about that - the old baron wouldn't allow me to publish it, of course, and I'm going to update it with my new observations before trying again - but the short version is, all eco has the potential to cause partly reversible long-term cognitive changes after repeated exposure in a dose-dependent way. Thinking it's beautiful is normal for any kind and trying to destroy things is normal for dark eco. I don't suppose you want to hear about the microanatomical changes associated with chronic eco exposure."

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"They all appear to be less dramatic?"

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"Not all the behavioral changes seem to be caused by what we call matter, if that's what you're asking."

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"...can you just, like, elaborate more on everything you say in general."

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"Some of the eco-associated behavioral changes are probably metaphysically mediated. That means they aren't caused by matter. They're part of the other aspects of the mind. I expect that means you couldn't do anything about them even in theory. When people are aware they've been changed by eco exposure, they're usually glad of it. Even so I think you'll agree that dark eco is the worst of the lot and green eco is the best. Green eco generally makes people more proactive and less stuck in the limited perspective of their own species. At any rate, dealing with Gol and Maia is the most important of the several reasons we need to have visited the past. Unfortunately I'm not sure what you can conjure to confirm that unless maybe Gol kept a diary. A diary is a book in which someone writes about their life."

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He snorts at the definition of 'diary'. "What are the other reasons?"

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"Well, here everyone has a use for the kid. Sending him somewhere one person has a use for him and half a dozen people just treat him as a child would be better for him. I would have kept raising him if I had to but just think of the conflict of interest! And secondly dark eco was more avoidable back then so it's better for developing brains to grow up in the past, not that that's always good enough. Thirdly, while we were there, I had access to information that's been lost since - I corresponded with sages and documented soon-to-be-extinct species. I can redact and publish my notes and bring all that knowledge back. Fourth, without me, my daughter would have been orphaned as soon as her mother died - and then probably died herself when Gol and Maia opened the silos, instead of coming to the future to study modern engineering. Fifth, Onin thinks it's a good idea and Onin sees a great deal that the rest of us can't. And finally, I think all this might turn out to have something to do with Mar. Just call that intuition."

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"Who is Onin?"

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"A soothsayer. If you want to hire her, she works out of a tent in the bazaar."

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"Look, I just don't feel oriented enough to the situation to orchestrate an abduction of your past self into the past, have you considered suggesting it to him yourself?"

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"I'm not asking you orchestrate an abduction. He'll agree. That just won't do any good without the rift rider and the rift gate."

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"Oh, okay then. Next time lead with that." Cam spreads his wings to go back and follow up on the requests.

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Keira, who at least looks like one of the people behind the half-finished astronomy book, is in her garage near the stadium, past the canals and the gardens and in the nicest part of the city. She's working on her rift rider behind a curtain. Her front door is open. At the sound of someone coming in gets to a point where she can safely set down her tools and does that, but doesn't open the curtain.

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"Heard you might need parts."

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She steps out from behind the curtain and gawks just a bit. "Yeah. I heard you make stuff, huh? I'm close enough to finished with this that it's probably worth the extra space to conjure the whole thing out of thin air, but I can't find these two artifacts - here, I have illustrations, come see - I need an energy gem called the Heart of Mar and a Precursor artifact called the Time Map, and I don't even know where they are."

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"- okay, well, if they involve eco I can't make 'em but I can find 'em." Surroundings of these objects?

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They both exist twice right now. The Heart of Mar is inside a statue of Mar and encased in some brand-new igneous rock. The Time Map is buried in sand and chilling in a room full of artifacts that looks very much like it might be in the metal head nest somewhere.

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"I can ask the metal heads about this one," he says, indicating the last. "Do you know where to find the statue or should I zoom out?"

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"It was in a museum, I think, but it was stolen a while ago. It should still be in the city somewhere."

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Surrounding block?

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It's underground and underwater in what was once meant as a habitable building of some kind but never was adequately sealed off from the storm drains or the sewer system.

She wrinkles her nose. "I can probably design a robot that could navigate down there, especially if I don't have to build it."

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"I can do robots but I don't know off the top of my head if I have any optimized for both water navigation and art theft."

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"Hmm. I did read about this statue. You might not be able to conjure the gem or that key in its hand but what if we just drill those out and you copy the rest of it? I'm not sure how to get the gem out nondestructively anyway."

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"I can send in something with power tools, sure. You need the whole statue for some reason??"

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"Me? Nah. It's famous. People miss it. We can take the Heart of Mar and leave everything else for the museum."

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"Oh, sure thing. Where is this area, I can't make the robot in place from the model."

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"I think that might be under the red zone near the east wall."

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"I'll go get some altitude and eyeball it and drop a robot there and you can help me direct it to get your swag." He goes and flies up into the air to look at the east wall for a recognizable block.

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Fortunately all the blocks in that area are completely different sizes and shapes. Keira can help direct the robot if he leaves her a remote control or something.

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When the robot is placed he lands near her and lets her look at the display of its camera!

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She has never actually tried to navigate the accidental-extra-sewer-space before but she's heard from people who have and she does her best.

The easiest way to get anything this big and solid back out would be through the maintenance entrance, but it won't open for something it doesn't think is human; she can figure out where there'll be a grate that they could put back more easily if they had to remove it.

"Ugh, I'll have to wash these. But anyway, I think the best open space to put a new statue in is the courtyard outside the stadium."

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"You can tell me where that is after we get your stuff."

The robot has power tools and can disassemble the statue.

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It comes apart like nonmagical stone. The gem hidden inside is much harder and all but invulnerable, but Keira thinks the key in the statue's hand might be a normal amount of soft for the gold alloy it's mostly made of.

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The robot removes the hand entire just in case and fetches the objects back to them.

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"Thank you so much! Let me know if there's anything I can do for you while I'm here - anyway, if you walk out that door and turn right, the stadium will be on your left, and if you make another right and go down the stairs, there should be room for a copy of the statue."

And she can wash the artifacts and hand the key and the hand back over to him.

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"I don't need that," he says. "- I guess I could just attach the rest of the statue to it, save getting the key in the right position." He accepts the statue hand and heads for the stadium to place an art installation.

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Insofar as there's a place in the city where a spontaneously appearing large statue is appropriate and welcome, this is that place. People stare, though, and try with varying success not to look like they're staring. Someone on a zoomer gets distracted and drifts out of their lane for a second.

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Cam keeps an eye on them in case he needs to materialize airbags.

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Someone in Krimzon Guard armor asks who he is and what he's up to.

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"I'm Cam! I put the statue over there and now I'm done. Do you like it?"

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"Do I like it? I, um, I think it's kind of artistically lacking - are you the alien who arranged the truce with the metal heads?"

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"That's me! I'm about to go visit them again, would you like to pass on any messages?"

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"Messages. To the metal heads." She giggles slightly hysterically. "Sure, why not, ask if one of them wants to be my penpal!"

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"I'll make a note of it." He writes this down on his computer and looks for a clear space to take off; fortunately in a zoomer-populated city this is not that hard.

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Plenty of convenient clear space. There's even a ledge to jump off if that's better.

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It doesn't!

To the metal heads.

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To the metal heads. The very articulate one he spoke to before is busy somewhere but Billy is around.

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"Hi Billy! I'm looking for a rift gate. Do y'all have a rift gate? Also somebody wants a metal head pen pal."

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Yeah! There are specific humans we're supposed to let use the rift gate and an artifact for it if they ask. You're not one of them, though. What's a pen pal?

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"A pen pal is someone who you exchange letters with. I don't want to go through the rift gate, I just want to make sure it's available for some people who need to go through it for time loop reasons; can you tell me who it is you mean to let through?"

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A green one, a fake Precursor, and two I wouldn't recognize but our leader would. Not necessarily all at once. We're not completely sure who has to go to make the history we know happen. If it helps, one of them is young and important.

I'll ask around about the pen pal thing.

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"How do you guys know who is supposed to go?"

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Our leader saw them on the way out of the rift.

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"Stands to reason. You guys want more snacks while I'm here?"

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Sure! You know, they also eat meat in the city, in case you care about yakows and flut-fluts.

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"I will set them up with vat meat infrastructure before I go home but if yakows and flut-fluts are animals I do not care about them all that urgently." Meat.

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The way you do moral reasoning is weird. Thank you for the meat.

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"How do you do moral reasoning? People keep telling me dark eco messes with that but I don't know if that's what you're noticing or something else."

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I'll write up a summary but you might as well conjure it later, it might get long.

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"Sure, that works fine. You can write me about would-be pen pals too."

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Older Samos is still floating in the forest and glad to hear the gate is available. (Younger Samos is busy having a 3D video call with an architect.)

The one they call a fake Precursor is lying on top of the bar at the Hip Hog Heaven Saloon, flirting with the bartender.

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Anybody else need anything? Food, say, as a stopgap - and in the slightly longer term does anyone want to learn to operate meat vats?

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Lots of people need things, including food, and some of them would like to learn to operate meat vats. He also has a letter from Ashelin asking to arrange a meeting to talk about hiring him to redo some infrastructure soon, and one from Keira asking if she can hire him for more forensics.

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He will set up meeting times with both of those people, with priority to the infrastructure because that sounds like more fun.

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Ashelin, who appears to have written one of Mar's books on governance and co-written his treatise on human rights, arranges a small meeting in a fancy but not very comfortable meeting room in the palace. It's just her, Cam, the younger Samos, and two people who worked for her father: Vin, a jumpy man who works with the eco grid and has a doctorate in theoretical physics, and Count Krull, who works on housing and urban development.

She'd like to know what it would take for a newly constructed neighborhood to run on a non-eco energy source.

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"I'd need to put a generator in the neighborhood - or nearby enough that I can run wire to it. Unfortunately, while we have good power storage where I'm from, it's not enough to continue forever without refueling - I can make you wind-, tide-, and/or solar-powered electricity collection and run it into the place, though tidecatchers will only work if you're within wiring distance to an ocean. With tides. The appliances that can run on electricity may be unfamiliar, but include lights, computers, and assorted kitchen and cleaning objects; I'm not actually sure what-all you currently power with eco."

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She glances at Vin.

"Lights, computers, zoomers, vacuum cleaners, heating and cooling, elevators, passcode-operated locks, and security systems," Vin lists from memory, and then checks his notes and adds, "and artwork, communications, and automated industry."

"This is going to be a residential area, so there won't be much industry," says Ashelin, "but some things are quiet enough. It's right by the ocean but we'd have to keep the generator outside the walls and run the wires over or through, and then that's one more thing to defend outside the city. How tall a neighborhood could we support with solar generators on each roof?"

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"The one of those we don't have is zoomers. I mean, I'm sure someone has invented a flying motorcycle but it will not handle the same and I do not currently know how to drive one, though I can figure it out and give lessons. If you want solar alone, you can't get too tall - five, six stories if I make some generous assumptions about your weather and power requirements. I could put wires underground without having to dig though, if there's nothing important in the way."

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Krull has a 3D map of the underground pipes in the relevant area and a nifty hologram projector to make it seem to float over the table. There's a possible path around them and under the north wall.

"Even five or six stories is taller than what we have there now," says Ashelin, "but having a second power system for redundancy would be safer; we can set up something by the beach and have it charge batteries most of the time. If we can't run zoomers on electricity we'll still have to hook the new neighborhood up to the eco grid but if we run the rest of the amenities on electricity it'll help."

"How much can we power that way in the rest of the city without having to retrofit some kind of - electric grid?" Vin asks.

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"If you want everything battery-operable and just have people swap them out at chargers as necessary, everything I've listed, but this approach has drawbacks for some things, especially climate control - you can make air conditioners and heaters that work like that but they're just generally more annoying. Also possibly hard to childproof, those designs are mostly popular in Hell which has vanishingly few children."

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She looks at Vin. "How long do we have?"

"Uh, it depends on how soon we can hook up the new wells to the city grid and whether the truce holds but in the best-case scenario I think we have at least a year. More pessimistically, a couple of months or less."

"How soon could you have an electric grid in place without destroying any existing buildings or blocking any streets, assuming I could get everyone on board with letting you run wires through their walls?"

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"...difficult. I can put wires underground because what's underground is going to be rocks and dirt the exact positions of which don't matter so I can do miles at once; in walls I might bust a water pipe or something and I'd have to do each house one at a time. I think you might want to go with the battery-forward option and I can do spot installations for anywhere that's a particularly bad choice. I'd want some small empty lots to put the charging stations on and then I can set up panels and tidecatchers to fuel them."

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"If it won't make it structurally unsound you can cover most of the palace roof with solar panels. Maybe some of the fortress, too, but I'll have to check. Hmm. If electric appliances are going to be less convenient for the near future, and the main benefit is to the city... what if I hire an artist to collaborate with you on, I don't know, limited edition battery-powered electric table lamps to commemorate... something, there's no shortage of things worth commemorating right now. If we only had, say, two thousand - we wouldn't have enough but we might have better uptake to start with if they're scarce and upscale."

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"Sure, something like, hm, this?" He materializes a little glowing golden tree in his hands.

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She smiles. "Like that. Maybe another couple of tree species or colors too so they're not all the same. Is that your own design?"

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"No, I saw it in a friend's house one time, but I can do it in different shapes and colors."

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"That works. Traditionally there'd be some kind of engraved caption on the base but I'll have to think about what to say these are for. How much do you want for, let's say four hundred each of gold, white, red, green, blue - no, make it three hundred ninety each of those, and fifty purple?"

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"Can do! Where do you want 'em?"

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"Might as well just put them in the next room, through that door. You aren't charging?"

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"...what, for lamps? Nnnno?"

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"Artisans usually charge but if you don't need to buy food and it's no effort I guess you wouldn't."

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"I don't and it's not! If you do want me to put wires in the walls of a lot of houses then I will get bored and might want some sort of compensation but not for some lamps." He materializes the lamps in boxes.

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"I'm definitely not complaining. All right, you should look over the blueprints we have and see how they need to change to accommodate an electric grid." She glances at Count Krull, who offers Cam the local equivalent of a thumb drive. "And, ah, Samos has a proposal for a new prison compound outside the city that I'd like you to take a look at and see if it can be... electrified?"

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"Sure, can do! I'll need to convert that to put it on my computer -" Does this just work straightforwardly?

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That works.

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Oh good. What's the compound look like?

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There's one main building laid out a bit like a squarish 8, with translucent force fields over its two internal courtyards. It has lots of windows that overlook the courtyards, most of them tiny and barred and reinforced with forcefields. It's supposed to serve as a factory, too, and not one OSHA would approve of. It is, at least, also supposed to have a library and a clinic and something that isn't quite a chapel but is something similar. There are small outlying buildings for use by the guards. Then around all of it there's one big outer wall.

Other than the force fields, some of the things eco would be used for are lighting, door locks, motion-detecting lights, motion-detecting computer-operated weaponry, cameras, elevators, and the automated parts of the factory.

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"Electricity doesn't do force fields," Cam remarks. "You might want, like, safety railings and things in the factory - what will it be manufacturing? - I can replace all the non-force-field eco use with electrical stuff though the factory equipment might be a little fiddly to get exact and I would like to consider non-shooting-people options for security."

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He starts frowning slightly at the mention of safety railings. "I hadn't thought your species would have more safety features in their factories than ours - or, ah, that you'd have factories at all - but anyway it's for zoomer and air train parts I doubt you can help with. The non-shooting-people security is what the force fields and locks and guards are for but if you have more ideas let's hear them."

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"Oh, we don't, humans of our acquaintance do. Robots? Do you have the concept of robots? Or you could hire a fairy, that's usual for prisons."

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"We do have robots." This Samos is too young to even be tempted to brag about his daughter having cracked computer vision all on her own. "How would we hire a fairy?"

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"You'd summon one! Mind, I'm not sure it will work normally, since it's very weird that I'm the only daeva who's ever been summoned here, so first I will want you to summon someone who is, say, okay with being a test subject on the condition that if they are stuck here forever they get to adopt the nearest orphaned baby."

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"There are people we could summon here who would want to adopt orphans?" This is not the best news she's heard this year but it's in the top ten.

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"Yeah, loads, daeva can't have children."

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"Would their adopted children grow up to have powers like yours?"

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"No. However, people who perform summonings might turn into daeva when they die, that being how it works where I'm from - except that where I'm from, dead people who haven't summoned anyone also have an afterlife and it doesn't have any of your folks in it."

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Samos looks as if something suddenly makes dramatically more sense to him.

"That seems worth testing," Ashelin says, just as Vin volunteers to be the one test it.

"Can daeva themselves die?" asks Krull.

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"Nope! We're indestructible."

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"Something of a downside but I'm sure not everyone will see it that way," says Krull.

"Is there any kind of system in place for making sure none of these prospective parents want to destroy the world?"

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"I would be starting with well-regarded members of relevant interest groups and also, normally, daeva are summoned with bindings; I can copy what's kept planets back home safe when fairies adopt kids and tweak it to fit demons."

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"And it needs to be tweaked because...?"

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"Fairies have different powers - in particular they cannot trivially destroy the world."

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"And no one with an orphan problem has bothered with demons when fairies are safer and - after all it doesn't matter if anyone starves where you're from, does it."

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"Actually, the existence of an afterlife is not widely known among the living, but they have cut it out with the starving anyway and there are not many orphans per capita."

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"Wow. Well, we have... I didn't expect to need numbers on that today but more than a hundred just with the Ministry of Extreme Labor and probably a lot more than that in the city."

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"...the Ministry of Extreme Labor? Has orphans?"

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"Yes, but I'm hoping to change that."

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"Oh good! Let me whip up a circle and ask for a recommendation from Wistful..." He fiddles with his computer.

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They'll let him work on that for a moment. Samos smirks the smirk of someone who was rescuing orphans from slavery before it went mainstream.

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"- Wistful recommends a Mrindeh, Mrindeh confirms she is willing to live here forever adopting babies in case she can't go home," Cam says after a bit, "I have a circle whipped up for the case, here it is -" He presents a circle on the floor and a pen to the would-be human test subject.

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Vin can finish it. He's so excited to maybe get to be indestructible. 

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There appears a woman of Cam's species! She's dark-skinned and red-winged and looks very excited. "H-hi everyone!"

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Vin squeaks and jumps a bit when she appears but then waves and goes back to his seat.

"Welcome to Haven City," says Ashelin. "I hear you're interested in adopting a child here."

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"Yes! Yes I am - the letter said you needed to try to send me back -"

"Yeah, if you can just concentrate on sending her home for a minute I can give you another circle and you can redo it and she can go pick out a baby - are they mostly babies or are there a lot of older kids, that'll be an important screening criterion -"

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"The ministry won't have anyone younger than four."

"The Underground does but not many," says Samos.

Vin concentrates on sending Mrindeh home.

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Mrindeh disappears after one minute of this. "Huzzah," Cam says. "If I could get a rough list of age distribution available then Wistful will probably be able to sort out the rest." He puts down a new Mrindeh circle. "I think she should get a baby though, for agreeing to be our guinea pig."

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"Let me just call someone about that," says Ashelin.

Samos, on the other hand, can give him the numbers of children of each age with the Underground. Their youngest is about a year old. (He omits the Heir but without having the four-year-olds all in one room to count them it's not obvious he's doing that.)

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Cam takes notes. "Do I want to know what happened to all the younger babies," he says, not really inflecting it into a question.

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"I know for a fact that at least one of them found a loving home."

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"Good for that one baby." He gestures toward the new circle, waiting to be completed.

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Vin completes the new circle too. (Meanwhile Ashelin takes notes on age distribution and titles her notes something sensible for Cam to conjure later.)

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Mrindeh appears immediately.

"They don't have tiny infants but they've got, like, one year olds, is that good?" Cam tells her.

"Mm-hm," says Mrindeh.

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"I can introduce you after the meeting," says Samos.

"Do you expect you'll want to pick up any other jobs while you're here?" asks Ashelin.

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"I can make things," says Mrindeh. "I don't have any real specialist skills..."

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"That'll be plenty on its own, there are shortages of most things around here." And turning to Cam: "But you said fairies are less dangerous and better for the other job we were talking about?"

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"A fairy can still absolutely kill you or destroy the entire city, to be clear, they just can't trivially wreck a planet. You need bindings and to be on decent terms with the fairy for this to work out well. But, yes, fairies sitting up in a crow's nest over a prison scanning for escapees are standard, they can pick 'em up and put 'em back."

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"That sounds like an improvement. - I don't think you ever told us exactly what kinds of daeva there are and what their powers are?"

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"Demons make things, angels change things, fairies move things."

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"Taxi service. No eco necessary, we can repurpose an old zoomer or several, they don't even have to be flightworthy anymore."

"How about medicine?" Vin asks.

"How about a - book about daeva and how other people have hired them for infrastructure, and we can adjourn the meeting and talk more when everyone's had time to go over it?"

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"I can machine translate such a book but machine translation is... bad," says Cam. "Mostly you want angels for medicine though I am a trained medical demon, but they're not trained on your species and neither am I."

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"Hm. Would any angels like to adopt children and go to medical school?"

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"Almost certainly. They will be harder to find, though, since we can't write letters directly to them - or fairies - just summon couriers."

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"Then let's summon couriers and have them start putting together lists for us."

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"Sure, I'll dig up some names for you." Rummage rummage.

"Um, do I get to adopt the baby now or should I just - wait somewhere," says Mrindeh.

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"I'll take you there - we'll talk about the prison later, shall we," he adds to Cam as he gets up.

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"Sure thing," Cam agrees.

Mrindeh follows, nervously bouncing along.

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Then Samos can show her the way, out of the nice neighborhood around the palace and through the worst parts of the city.

And meanwhile Vin can finish any more circles Cam gives them.

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They come on an occasional basis as he tracks down fairies or angels listed on Davidson's for courier work. Some of them don't get answered right away.

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In that case Krull will eventually leave and Ashelin will skim some old laws and draft edits while they wait. At one point she asks what happens if you roll a circle back up after finishing it and before it gets answered.

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"Then it won't get answered while it's rolled up but is still live if you lay it back out."

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"Good to know."

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"Does the baby already have a name?" Mrindeh asks. "Is it a boy or a girl?"

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"A boy, and we have unreliable information that his name might be Storm. I suppose if we keep calling him that long enough it'll be true whether it was to begin with or not."

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"Storm," sighs Mrindeh. "That's a nice name."

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"I prefer traditional names like Mar and Lexa, myself, but I suppose it's convenient if you have different taste."

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"I don't know much about names in this language yet."

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Samos does and can go on about it at length. His name is from a fad several decades ago for names like Samos, Damas, and Kerkis, but almost no one under thirty has a name like that and the babies these days get names like Storm and Rayn that used to be popular in Kras City ("and why anyone wants to imitate them is anyone's guess").

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"Is something wrong with Kras City?"

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"There's something wrong with every city these days, but at least Haven is ours. And Kras doesn't even try to respect history or minimize audience casualties at sporting events."

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"Oh dear. Is that from - sports riots, or from the sport itself?"

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"Well, both, but I meant the second one. Racing is bloody here too but it stays in the stadium."

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"Racing what?"

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"In Kras they drive 'cars' - like zoomers, but with wheels."

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"Oh, people back home have those."

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"I suppose it's probably less dangerous if all your pedestrians are indestructible."

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"I think humans use them too? But less recently."

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"I'll never understand why anyone would put cars and human pedestrians on the same streets."

They pass a propaganda station playing a recording of Ashelin announcing that leaving the city is no longer a capital offense.

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"- it used to be a capital offense -"

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"We're very happy about the recent regime change. - Just through this door and down some stairs."

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"Who's taking care of Storm right now?"

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"In general, members of the former resistance movement. Today, Kor."

Through the door and down the stairs is the hideout where Cam was first summoned, where Storm is sleeping and Kor is cleaning up from Storm's last mostly successful attempt to feed himself.

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"Ohhhhhh," coos Mrindeh, "he's beautiful."

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"He is soft and small and growing into an intelligent child," Kor says, looking up. "Hello, are you a friend of Cam's?"

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"We've never met, he got my name from Wistful - that's a wannabe-parents organization in Hell -"

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"I have never heard of such an organization. What sorts of things does it do?"

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"...mostly we just talk about how much we wish we had kids and what we'd do if we did. Once in a great while a child demon will come in and somebody'll adopt them but it's never a sweet little baby."

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"And you don't make your own child demons. That sounds... very upsetting."

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"Yeah, demons just start existing one day, and always adults, except for the ones who used to be humans."

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"Only humans? No former lurkers or Precursors...?"

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"Yeah, I didn't know you existed till today." She sits on the floor next to Storm's bed.

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Kor laughs at that, very quietly.

Storm wakes eventually. While they're waiting for that, Samos fills Kor in on what Cam told them about summoning.

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"Hi there Storm," whispers Mrindeh, when he's awake.

Storm looks at her groggily. Hides under a pillow.

When he peeks, she's got her face hidden behind her hands, just barely able to tell when he's looking through the gaps between her fingers. She drops her hands, smiling. "Peekaboo."

Storm hides again.

"Wheeeere'd Storm go?" she whispers.

He peeks.

"Peekaboo!" Mrindeh chirps. "What does he like to eat, I don't know if Earth-type food will be good for him -"

When she has a menu, she makes him some breakfast, and feeds it to him, and by slow degrees coaxes him onto her lap, beaming.

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This all reassures Samos quite a bit about the alien they're handing Storm over to.

The next time Cam checks his mail after the meeting he has letters that say they're from Kor, the metal head leader, Billy, and the leader of the Precursors in the local star system.

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...well, that's, uh, a convenient implication of time travel he hadn't especially considered, cool, he will read all these letters.

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Kor, who is after all very old, is tentatively interested in the experimental use of summoning for immortality and wants a recommendation for a safe circle design to use for it and ideally a recommendation for what to pay fairies with. He might or might not end up wanting immortality but he wants the information just in case.

The metal head leader writes that he had a conversation with the oracle. The oracle claims to be interested in peace, given the current truce between the metal heads and Haven City and given the situation with the dark makers. Also, he heard that Billy wasn't able to identify all of the humans who are allowed to use the rift gate, and he can clarify that one of them is the Heir of Mar.

The Precursor writes that they're tentatively optimistic about the progress toward a lasting peace with the metal heads, and that the dark makers are an extremely urgent threat worth taking their attention away from the metal heads to deal with anyway, and that they have no desire for war with those who sincerely seek peace, and that further questions or comments should be directed to their oracle in Haven. It's costly for the oracle to speak to people but this is important enough that it will try.

Billy has finally penned an explanation of metal head moral reasoning. Bearing in mind that it varies (though less than human moral reasoning), metal heads generally consider entities whose decisionmaking includes choices about whether or not to cooperate to be moral agents. They can be made up of other entities who are also moral agents: for example, if a democracy is composed of people who elect a leader and then do whatever that leader says instead of independently evaluating the quality of the leader's decisions. (They thought for a long time that humans worked this way but it turns out they really, really don't.) There are actions which, if one agent does them to a second agent, provoke the second agent to want revenge: battery, theft, and so on. There are actions which, if one agent does them to a second agent, provoke third parties to want revenge: perfidy, for example, is not a crime against the agent who accepts the false surrender, but against anyone who might want to surrender to that agent in the future. And then there are actions which are an offense against everything sacred, that provoke everyone and mean that the offending agent is downright evil: trying to alter someone's mind is a salient one, but trying to convince someone that an act of war is actually an act of peace counts too. (This is different from spying undercover, but they would have been much less surprised to meet aliens who thought spying was evil in this way than they were by aliens they actually met.) Happiness and flourishing don't directly enter into it, except insofar as some actions are an attack to some entities and a kindness to others; intelligence doesn't either, except insofar as it's a necessary prerequisite for making moral choices in the first place. Oh, and it's only from their centuries of exposure to humans that they're picking up on why anyone would think forgiveness was desirable or even acceptable, but these days they are starting to see it.

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Cam delivers a standard prison fairy circle to Kor and will stick around long enough to pay the fairy for him before visiting the oracle.

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Kor examines the circle for a bit and then goes ahead and finishes it. The fairy gets multiple languages from him, including the metal head one. Also, Kor wants to know if it's safe to keep the used circle as a souvenir.

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"Yes, that's safe, it's used up now - I guess someone might copy it and if they messed up with that it could be a problem but it's not dangerous by itself."

This particular fairy does not want a long term prison job but knows someone who does.

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Convenient. Kor folds up the circle to keep it and wishes Cam happy travels.

The oracle won't be the one to break the ice but it is there among the candles, listening, whenever he gets there.

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"Hi?" Cam says to the oracle. "I don't know exactly what it costs you to speak but I'd like to know how I can be confident that the egg won't embark on a campaign of genocide if it hatches."

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"You can observe that we are in your star system, ignoring the ones you call metal heads. You can observe our greater foe and our history of trustworthiness. You can observe that we have never been the first to attack in any conflict."

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"They didn't turn up nearby when I looked."

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"Perhaps they are too entwined with eco for you to conjure some of the time."

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"I guess that could be. Is there a way I can talk to them directly?"

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"At this distance and moving into the future rather than stepping backward, if I relay messages directly, the round trip would take more than one of your hours. You could shorten this time by conjuring their responses."

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"You're in communication with them?"

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"I am."

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Cam checks to see if he already has anything from local Precursors.

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"The story I got from the metal heads indicated that the Precursors started the conflict, even if there is some definition of 'attack' that they did first."

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"Our history of this matter is summarized in the book I gave you."

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"I will see how the machine translation is doing now, then." He plugs in the output of the translation software into his computer and opens it up.

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It's from the last days of the older phase of Precursor civilization (not that they called themselves that; they called themselves makers or life makers), and attempts to summarize the hora quan war in an easy-to-follow way. It's a tertiary work whose position on the tradeoff curve between telling a straightforward easy-to-understand story and giving all the evidence is far toward the former end and it openly admits this. It is also intended to be possible to contain only on low-tech non-eco-powered media like scrolls or stone tablets, which is unusual for a book from their civilization at the time.

They were working on a terraforming project and removed some dark eco from a planet to make it nicer. They sent it away, aiming for it to end up in orbit around a foreign sun where it could stay for ages. This was far enough before the invention of time travel that the time period in question was inaccessible by the time anyone double-checked where it had ended up. And it appeared that the dark eco asteroid was missing, and that a planet around that sun had an unusual amount of dark eco and signs of a recent impact. And that planet had people living on it. Not just life, but intelligent life. Intelligent life that had faced some manner of apocalypse, given the ruins, but was now rebuilding and reaching for the stars. They had already visited the other planet in their system. And they were cruel, destructive, violent, and dark.

There's an interlude about their ecology and speculation about what it might have been like before it was warped into something so evil. Then the narrative resumes.

The aliens, whom the makers named the hora quan, were warring with each other, even though you'd expect that they'd get along best with each other since they were the same species. The amount of war, and the extent to which it was open and not happening through proxies or cold wars or space races, was frankly surprising given both their tech level and the fact that they were still around to keep doing it.

There was one group in particular that had recently destroyed or conquered some of its neighbors and was in the process of trying to conquer a much smaller polity. This aggressive group was particularly disliked even by their conspecifics and considered excessively warlike. The makers took some of their leaders to a maker ship and - fixed them. Made them light instead of dark. Kind instead of warlike. Patient, nurturing, peaceful, almost serene. Then they returned the healed hora quan to their home planet, where they were met with horror and confusion and then, eventually, hatred. Their own polity dissolved almost overnight. Some of its former members joined the polity they'd been trying to destroy, but not enough to make them a majority and not many who had been in decisionmaking roles.

The polity that the makers had protected by doing this declared war on them. The leader of the group of hora quan whom they had saved from annihilation proclaimed the healed hora quan an abomination, and the makers likewise, and insisted that the only fair and proper response was genocide. Initially they may have intended to aim at a smaller political unit, but later they learned that the makers were not at war among themselves, and so the hora quan aimed for the destruction of all makers, everywhere.

Well, not all hora quan. Several other polities lent either material support or manpower to the one that had declared the war, but no others declared war themselves. The war quickly moved into space and away from the hora quan home planet, and the makers left that planet alone during the war, other than surveillance and destroying any spacecraft they tried to launch. There were eventually attempts to retaliate for the spacecraft destruction, but not especially effective or disproportionate ones.

Attempts to ask any group of hora quan what they had done to deserve genocide generally got the answer that they had done something abominable in trying to heal the hora quan, who wanted to be left alone and allowed to continue being evil, and that it was just and right to exterminate them for trying to spread light and healing.

There's a description of various battles and the heavy losses the makers (and, for that matter, the hora quan) took during the war, and the only partly related shutdown of the rift network and the eventual success in sealing their enemies away inside it. By their own account the makers tried pretty hard to avoid doing anything they considered terribly evil in the war, while the hora quan didn't seem to have any qualms about things like attacking medics and damaging life-bearing planets and employing dark eco as a weapon. Descriptions of ship-to-ship combat and space logistics and so on take up about half the book.

Meanwhile, the dark makers (mostly not appearing in this book but evidently very important) killed the makers guarding the hora quan home world and then destroyed the entire planet.

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"...yeah, I'm comfortable describing 'abducted world leaders and mind controlled them' as a form of starting the conflict even if they didn't acquit themselves well in subsequent deescalation attempts."

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"The war has taught us many valuable lessons. We would handle first contact differently now."

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"Oh? What would you do?"

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"We would give but not take. We would account for differences in values. We would seek balance and peace. I have a more recent track record which you may examine."

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"Yes please, where will I find it?"

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"You would speak to our hero, who was before his birth and will yet have been again."

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"...that seems to describe several people."

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"He keeps company with one who was made a Precursor."

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"Does he have, like, a name."

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"He has multiple names. The one who was made a Precursor calls him Jak."

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"Okay, I can go ask Jak. Anything else I should check out?"

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"Not immediately."

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So Cam goes looking for Jak (the one who is old enough to speak in complete sentences).

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He's out in the wasteland with Daxter, a ways away from the city, cooking a dead animal while Daxter collects fruit. They both see Cam coming and tense up but don't run or shoot him.

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"Hi! The oracle said we should chat."

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Jak relaxes slightly at that.

"Oh? And what are you hoping to chat with me about?" Daxter asks.

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"The Precursors' track record on first contact."

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Jak and Daxter trade baffled looks.

"I don't know much about the Precursors," Jak says.

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"...maybe there is time travel going on and I am supposed to speak with you in a few hundred years or something, that seems like par for the course of this place. I assume I'm not supposed to talk to you when you're a small child..."

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Jak frowns.

"The oracle is pretty wacko," Daxter agrees, "and it does say weird stuff about the Precursors. Doesn't it, Jak?"

Jak shrugs. "What exactly did it say?"

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Cam reads out his transcript of the conversation starting from "we would handle first contact differently now".

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They trade baffled looks again.

"We're from the future," Jak says, "that must be what 'was before his birth' means. But the rest of it..."

"It's gonna be another 'beware the dark light', isn't it," Daxter says bitterly. "You think you know what it's talking about but no! It's something completely different! And useless, don't forget useless."

"It said 'I'. I've talked with that oracle twice - unless it's one of the ones from the past - it hired me to kill metal heads but I don't know what that has to do with first contact."

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"Well, it's not encouraging that it hired you to kill metal heads because it's trying to convince me that it can leave them alone going forward! Beware the dark light?"

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Daxter glances at Jak, who nods slightly.

"Oh, oh, there's a story behind that one," Daxter says. "So Jak and I went to Misty Island a couple y... uh, centuries back - spying on the lurkers. They were having this meeting about how they were gonna attack the village later. Now, they may say discretion is the better part of valor, but valor is also the better part of valor, so we poked around a little more while we were there. And we found this huge vat filled with dark eco. Just - completely huge. You could go for a swim in it! But, word to the wise, don't. Anyway, the lurkers found us, and Jak and I stood our ground, but in the battle, I was knocked back into the pool. And when I came out? I was conveniently travel-sized and orange.

"So we were on our way north to try to convince Gol to change me back when we met this oracle, and it says..." Daxter doesn't so much mimic the oracle's voice as mock it: "'Beware the dark light, for it has twisted the fate of one of you.' And I'm thinking, 'wow! Couldn't you have told me that last week?' Well, guess what. Then we came here. And the second we set foot in Haven City, the guys in red came after Jak, too many to fight all at once, armed and armored while we were bare-handed and flat-footed. Then they took Jak away to do experiments and now he has sparkly dark powers and the oracle has leverage. 'Cause, see, Jak needs help controlling his neat new powers, and the oracle can help him. For a price. Basically what I'm saying is we thought the warning was just useless, but, surprise! Turns out it's useless and insulting."

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"Yikes. I wonder if that's a side effect of using time travel to generate advice or if it's just like that."

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"Dunno, but don't listen to it."

"You said you didn't want it to kill metal heads," Jak says. "Why not?"

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"...they're people?"

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He laughs. "So was Praxis."

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"I mean, the metal heads absolutely have a body count, but they wanna fuck off and live somewhere else, they don't even like it here."

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"They sound just like you and me," Daxter says in a mocking singsong.

Jak frowns deeply. "I think it wants me to talk you out of that. Because I need to kill eighteen more metal heads before it'll teach me anything else. But - fine. There's no reason they shouldn't run away if they want to."

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"It might be willing to teach you more now that peace with the metal heads is a requirement for my help with its stuff."

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"What stuff are you helping it with?"

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"There's an egg it wants hatched."

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"And you're suspicious of it because, what, it might not play nicely with the metal heads since it works for the Precursors and they're full of dark - Oh. That's why it sent you here. Because it still talks to me and I'm full of dark eco too."

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"I guess that's a reason. The dark eco did not, uh, quote unquote turn you evil?"

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He laughs evilly. "Depends who you ask."

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"I'm asking you."

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"He's fine," Daxter says.

"...Daxter came back for me. Broke into the fortress, found me something normal to wear, told me how much things cost now. When I woke up with him sitting on me I..."

Daxter starts to say something.

"Don't, okay? I - tried to kill him."

"Just a little case of mistaken identity!"

"It's not better that I didn't bother to figure out who you were first. So. That's my answer."

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"So you - were affected but not in the sense that you endorse the effects?"

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"I don't know." He says this very softly, like it's an even more terrible admission than the last thing.

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"Wow, that's rough."

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"...Yeah." Very slight smile. "The oracle doesn't - get angry or afraid or talk like I got taken over by a monster. It just teaches me how to use my powers and how to... not have more accidents like the one I told you about."

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"What kinda powers do you have?"

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"Cool ones," Daxter says.

Jak grins. "Yeah. I grow claws and move fast, some people think that's scary. I can use dark eco now, not the really concentrated stuff but if a metal head bleeds or I run into one of the Krimzon Guard booby traps. I've been trying to see if I can get it out of the air and water. That's what I've figured out just experimenting. The oracle taught me to take all the eco I've got and sort of throw it in all directions."

"Which I call the dark bomb," Daxter says.

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"Is that... useful?"

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"I spend a lot of time in enclosed spaces alone with metal heads. It doesn't poison them but the blast has force." He wouldn't add anything to that if he weren't pretty sure Cam could just kill him anyway. But he is pretty sure of that. "I'm out of eco afterward, can't do any of the rest of it till I fill up again."

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"Well. I hope your superpowers are serving you well. The idea is you're a proof of concept that the Precursors can tolerate dark eco these... sections of the timeline?"

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"Probably. You're big on tolerating dark eco, huh?"

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"I mean, it sounds like I don't really want it on me, but I don't hold with how they reacted to the metal heads, who seem as a species adapted to it."

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"...How did they react? All the oracle told us was that there was a war."

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"Oh, they kidnapped some of the the leaders and tried to edit them to hypothetical non-dark-eco-influenced versions of themselves, which made them rather repulsive to the rest of the species and kicked off both civil and retaliatory conflicts."

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"That's..."

"Creepy?" Daxter suggests.

"...like Praxis. Um. Are you staying for dinner? We have enough." They only arguably have enough, but at any rate the meat is done.

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"I can make you some more if you like."

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"Do you do chocolate?"

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"I do!" Chocolate for everybody.

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"Yes! Finally! I haven't had chocolate in centuries! Have some meat, it does not have any dark eco in it, thanks to Jak."

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"I'll make my own, just to be safe, I have yet to develop a taste for the local cuisine anyway, but enjoy. Anything else I should hear about?"

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"Well, I think you might like to hear about the time I -"

"What are you interested in hearing about?" Jak asks.

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"Things relevant to interspecies politics and also infrastructure construction!"

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"Well, in my opinion, the infrastructure around here is terrible. The pavement should not go up or down by more than I am tall, and also the city should not be designed around the checkpoints. It's terrible, they're always congested. And I should have my own palace with a swimming pool and palm trees and a freezer so I can have ice cream."

"They use lurkers as slaves," says Jak. "And I know Praxis had a plan to destroy the water slums and build something new. Ashelin might've changed the plan but you shouldn't go along with it if she hasn't."

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"Good to know," Cam tells Jak. "Who precisely is using lurkers as slaves?"

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"I'm not sure. I never paid much attention."

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"I will do further research on the subject then. Thanks!"

He flies back oraclewards.

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The oracle has not moved.

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"Hey, if I just talk at you can whoever you're hooked up to write me responses and save on whatever you're running down to reply?"

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"Yes."

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"Cool, they may feel free to label things 'letter to Cam' for me. I went and met Jak and talked about the dark eco thing which we surmise is why you wanted us to meet. It's encouraging, but the fact that you had him killing metal heads in exchange for lessons is less so and I would like no more of that. I'm curious about how the oracle thing works in general, like how the time travel comes into it and how the communication is happening with whoever is on the other end and how it got here and stuff. I'd like to know the prognosis if the Precursor egg is hatched for - things in general, really."

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They're still many light-minutes away and that merits a thought-out response so it'll be a while before there's an answer. Eventually one of the Precursors writes something with his mail label. (And if he's checking his entire inbox, multiple other people have also written him letters.)

He was at war with the metal heads. There was already a market for their skull gems. That he sold his to the oracle is hardly worse than if he had sold them to a jeweler or used them for interior decoration. That said, it would be helpful to the oracle if you could, and would, provide it with skull gems. They are somewhat useful to its maintenance and make it slightly more able to do things like teach people to use eco more effectively and with more self-control.

Time travel is an extremely complicated topic which this language does not even have a good vocabulary for. Further, communicating with people about it is annoyingly tricky even when there is a shared vocabulary.

The oracles were left behind on that planet long ago. They are not from the future. They have access to all our information about the planet they are on, some of which may come from the future, but they themselves only see what is already in the present. This may include, for example, the way an old man from the future talks to a pair of children about dark eco. They have some ability to draw inferences, but they are not omniscient.

If the Precursor egg is hatched, the resulting Precursors will gather strength and fight the dark makers. I cannot impress upon you strongly enough how important it is that we stop them. Unless there is some misunderstanding of an even greater scale than that with the metal heads, they want to destroy everything, preferably in a way that involves exposing life to dark eco before it is destroyed.

Also, if the egg hatches, there will stop being an ancient unhatched egg in Haven City. I must warn you that the destruction of any one of our eggs from that era has a several percent chance of causing the destruction of the entire universe. We are working on fixing the design flaws that make this possible. We have already made it much less likely. We do not expect to need to reproduce again before we have solved it entirely.

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Cam will try making a skull gem in case he can do that but he's not optimistic.

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He can do that! Here is his skull gem.

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"Does this work for you?" he asks, holding it out to the oracle.

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"Yes."

It disappears.

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"How many you want?"

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"Hundreds."

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Box of five hundred gems.

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The gems disappear. The box does not.

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Cam sets the box aside. "I'm considering going and seeing if I can hatch the egg, or, failing that, putting it on a ship to send to its folks," he tells the oracle. "Do I have your assurance that should I do this you will not embark on any further campaigns of first-use-of-coercion against any other sapients?"

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The Precursor on the other end of the link eventually writes a response.

You have our assurance that, should we encounter another situation in which we are tempted to intervene, featuring a species we have little knowledge of, then except in cases of the utmost urgency, we will try to ask local advice and wait until we have a solution that would not be universally considered abominable by all involved. You have our assurance that we will act with respect for the flourishing of life even when it is different from ours. You have our assurance that we will act with respect for consent in the future; we cannot assure you that the form this will take will be recognizable to you, because we will sometimes receive consent after acting, rather than before, and we will sometimes infer consent from extensive knowledge of the people involved.

A great deal of our output as a civilization must be aimed toward the war with the dark makers and attempting (though the attempt may well be futile) to make contact with our elders. If these attempts are successful, a great deal of our time as a civilization must be directed toward contemplation of our errors. We will probably improve on the ideas laid out in this letter, but not until we have had time for contemplation. Only after that will we seek to create again.

Of those currently present on the planet where you are, the one with the best chance of opening the egg is the Heir of Mar. The younger, but bring the older as well.

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"Is hatching the egg dangerous directly?"

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"No."

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"I'll go run this by the metal heads. Any last minute additions?"

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"Hurry, because the dark makers are coming."

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"- like this week, this year, or in an hour."

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"Close to the second."

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"Okay, cool."

He flaps off to the metal head nest.

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It is where it's been. Their leader is present this time.

"Hello, Cam."

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"Hi! The Precursors, perhaps unsurprisingly, want the egg hatched; but they are claiming they'll leave you be and cut it out with the fucking with strange species, especially since they're busy fighting their purple conspecifics. Do you want to read the transcript of the conversation?"

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"I would like that, yes."

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Cam presents him with a printout.

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"I do not blame them for wanting us dead and I am not angry about it. Hm. The Heir, yes, that is how I would have done it, too. If the dark makers are truly coming for us we are all in grave danger, and I will even stand with the Precursors to protect this star system - but if they are lying, they will regret it."

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Cam runs a check on - let's say spaceships in the system, that will perhaps turn up fewer false negatives than looking for Precursors themselves -

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There's a non-purple Precursor ship in the system. (The dark maker ship that was within a light year is still not in the system, but is heading for where they're going to be in a few months.)

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"There is a light Precursor ship in this system and a dark one plausibly on the way."

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"Then you must let the government of Haven City know that I seek not only a temporary truce but an alliance of mutual aid and protection."

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"Uh, sure, can do. Is this going to postpone your colonization plans?"

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"It might be unwise to be settling in on new soil when the dark makers arrive, but then, it may be more unwise to anger Ashelin as they approach. And we can pilot a space force just as well whatever planet it must refuel on, if we have the ships. Speak to her of this as well, if you would."

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"Can do. Anything else?"

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"Will you trust us enough to offer us better food?"

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"You probably could've talked me into that the other day, honestly, just don't poison the wildlife with it and we're good, whaddaya want?"

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He names a couple of animals whose flesh is tasty.

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Vacuum sealed packages of couple-of-animals meat. "I could make you a meat vat," he says.

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"I would appreciate it very much but is it portable?"

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"There are actually household models! They're like this big and fairly heavy, I could push one around on a smooth floor but not lift it, but you're pretty big. A household model won't do more than like yea much per hour and you have to refill it with some stuff - the stuff is shelf-stable though - I could make you a big one that is not as portable and can outfit your ships with those when it's time for that."

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"A portable one for now, and more when we leave, then. Thank you."

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Cam makes a household meat vat and a supply of refills. He puts samples in of the animals they like to eat for it to start growing cuts of - they will be fairly undifferentiated cubes of tissue, since all the presets are for things like chickens and lambs, but should taste fine - and translates the labels on the buttons for them out of Korean.

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"This will be a great boon to our people. Ah, now that I think of it, I do have one other question." Not that he needs to be told, at this point, but it'll be useful to know how Cam reacts. "Were anything to happen to you, is there a way I might bring you or another of your kind here again?"

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"I don't know if it'll work for you - it probably will but I can't perform summonings, wrong species, so it could be that you are also a wrong species - but sure, here's a circle for me, you fill it in there." He hands over an unbound circle for himself.

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"Thank you. That is all for now, I think."

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"Mm-hm, later!"

Okay, what's the rest of his pending mail.

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Veger wants to invite him over for tea and conversation. Sig wants help finding someone. One of the metal heads is interested in having a human pen pal. Jak has more details about slavery in Haven. Krew wants Cam to swing by the Hip Hog at some point so they can talk about his goals. Erol wants to set up a meeting at some point, preferably one of this handful of times all of which are several days out at the earliest.

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Far too many people here have names, it's inconsiderate. Slavery first, seems most pressing.

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Krew tells me lurkers are mostly used in farms and factories in the yellow and red zones, about a third of them by private citizens and the rest by the city. Not all of them are as smart as us but some are.

There are people trying to rescue lurkers. I've accepted a job helping them. You won't get in my way, right?

Torn says Ashelin's letting most of the humans go. I don't trust that but I'm giving her some time to surprise me. If she has plans for the lurkers I haven't heard about them.

If you want to have a chat with their owners, try looking up Krimzon Animal Control or the Ministry of Extreme Labor. They should have public contact info.

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Cam will look up these institutions.

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Krimzon Animal Control has a number for the public to call. The ministry doesn't publish one, but with demonic digging he might find one anyway. They both also technically have headquarters in the city, although the animal control is just using one room in the fortress.

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...Cam doesn't have a phone, so he just flies to Extreme Labor in person.

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Their public-facing headquarters, located in the green zone, is bland and businesslike, with a small decorative waterfall in the lobby. A slightly startled receptionist would like to know if he has an appointment.

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"I do not. Is that typical? People make appointments with you?"

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"It's fine, I'm sure whoever you're here to see would be happy to pencil you in, sir," she says, putting a very slight emphasis on you. "Um, who are you here to see and what should I tell them is the purpose of your visit?"

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"I am here to ascertain if there is any reason for this organization to exist. Anyone of the opinion that they can defend that position may try."

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Blink blink. "One moment." She types some things. "All right, you can have a seat over there and someone will be out in a -"

Someone, in fact, is ready by the time she's done with that sentence. And the someone in question, a scowling person in a suit with her hair up in a bun, makes a not very successful attempt to smile at Cam.

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"Hello. What is it you do here besides slavery, anything?"

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She raises an eyebrow. "We would never do anything so barbaric as slavery but I can certainly explain our various functions as an organization. Mm, I have an office, come inside?"

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"Sure." In comes Cam.

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She takes a seat behind her desk and gestures for Cam to take the other chair.

"We organize unskilled and semiskilled labor for a variety of clients including farms, factories, construction firms, mines, and even the hospital and the port. At the new, mm, governor's orders, we also have people on assignments including watching the races and enjoying the library pending their release from ministry custody. Haven City runs on the admirable sacrifices of its workforce, many of which are voluntary. We provide generous compensation including room and board and we help our workers manage their schedules and finances."

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"Many of which are voluntary, according to what standard of volunteerism?"

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"That is to say, many of them have signed contracts with us and weren't sold to us or brought in by the Guard. I'm sure some of the others are quite uninterested in trying to run."

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"What motivates people to voluntarily sign contracts with an organization called 'Extreme Labor'?"

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"Well, we provide room and board, we try to protect them from violence, if they sign up voluntarily they can generally avoid a criminal proceeding that might complicate their future job prospects, we take pride in the excellent work ethic we instill, and, last but not least, they can get work without having to fill out job applications or show up for interviews."

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"How long do people usually stay employed here?"

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"It varies, of course. A year, or five, or ten, or indefinitely."

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"How old is the youngest person you employ?"

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"The new governor is raising the minimum age to fourteen. For humans, of course. We deal with too many lurker species to have a fixed minimum age for them."

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"By what means do lurkers tend to fall into your purview?"

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"Hang on, I can find..." She looks in a drawer for a folder and looks through its contents, angling it so Cam shouldn't be able to see what she's reading. "Recently we've gained lurkers because our lurkers reproduced, private citizens' lurkers were repossessed, lurkers were convicted of crimes, lurkers signed on with us voluntarily, and miscellaneous other reasons."

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"Can I get, say, a case study of a lurker signing on voluntarily."

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"A specific accurate case or a composite?"

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"First one."

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"There's a processing fee to access specific records and a fee to compensate for reputational or other damages to our clients and workers for the breach of confidentiality. And, ah, we're not taking payment in cash right now."

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"And then do you give the workers the fee?"

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"Of course! Minus our cut."

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"Which is how much?"

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"I don't have the exact number convenient. - Look, you don't like what we do, I can see that. The reason the Ministry of Extreme Labor exists is because there's always a need for more workers. You and your friends want to stop by right now and wave your hands and, hey, presto! everything's perfect, but you'll get bored or the population will grow too much - or none of that, and you'll do your best to train us to eat out of your hands, and who knows what then. You find nice uncontroversial flaws in our existing infrastructure - the eco grid is unsustainable, Extreme Labor is the least popular branch of the government, the metal head war is stupendously expensive and gets people killed - and, you know what? I could stop you, at the very least I could give you the runaround here, but you could also make it worth my while to not. I just want to retire to a nice, safe country estate and live in boundless luxury for the rest of my life, and if you'll make that happen I'll get out of your way - hell, I'll even help."

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"Yeah, I can work with that. Safe from what, I'm already going to be escorting the metal heads off the planet."

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"Lurkers. My former employees. The weather. Assassins. Bugs."

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"I am somewhat limited in my ability to protect you from assassins of any species or employment status but I can get you a weatherproof bugproof house in a nicely landscaped bit of not-currently-occupied, somewhere, and then not tell anyone where I put it?"

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"Security by obscurity, huh. But there'll be wild lurkers a lot of places, they wouldn't necessarily have to know. You can't do electricitical force fields and motion-sensing cannons?"

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"Force fields have not been invented. I can do an electrical fence that shocks creatures that touch it."

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"If it can be a dome that's good enough."

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"Yes, you can have an electric fence dome. Do you have any other architectural requests?"

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"Mm. Do I ever. I think I trust you to swing by again after work to spend an hour going over bathroom tile designs and swimming pool shapes, though. I can call someone in who'll have more details on some lurker than name and time since they signed on and disciplinary record but what are you hoping you'll get out of hearing about that?"

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"I was assuming you'd find me the most sympathetic single excuse for having one working here and if that excuse didn't hold water I could set about seeing how to replace any useful functions you're incidentally serving and dismantle the entire department."

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"Oh, the single best thing we do for workers is letting them dodge a conviction that'd follow them later, there's no - secretly paying for their children to go to school, nothing like that. Given we're going from 'if you visit your folks in prison you might not be able to come back out since clearly you're a sympathizer' to the governor being in love with a famous traitor I think no one will care half as much about that in a couple of years, it'll solve itself. The functions I think you'd call useful are... keeping the dumber lurkers in check, limiting how bad the justice system can get, and keeping labor cheap enough and available enough that there's no incentive for eco-intensive automation that'd take power away from the shield wall."

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"Is there some reason the smarter lurkers do not have some functional system for managing their dumber cousins?"

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"Well, I guess the same reason moncaws don't have a legal system for seagulls."

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"Are these, like, multiple species of lurker, not variation within one?"

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"Yeah. Well, both, but there's a really big difference between a babak and a lurker toad, if the babak doesn't have brain damage."

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"I would like to meet a smarter lurker."

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"There are some free ones in the city, mostly in the yellow zone, or I can have someone bring us one."

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"One who has had - contact with your system - might be most informative."

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"I can have one here in a couple minutes, then." And if not stopped she will call someone.

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He waits, tail lashing.

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And eventually they are brought a lurker. This one is currently walking on all fours, but could stand up and use their hands. They're sort of apelike. Maybe if apes were members of the order carnivora. And purple.

The minister tells the lurker's minder to shoo, and he shoos.

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"Hello, I'm Cam," Cam says to the lurker. "What's your name?"

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"Urru."

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"It's nice to meet you, Urru. I've never met a lurker before."

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Probably safer not to say anything other than to answer questions, Urru figures. That being how humans are, and this guy being sort of human probably.

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"I'm trying to figure out whether the Extreme Labor department should keep existing, or stop, and if it should stop what is needed to replace it if anything, and one of the things it does is - to put it kindly - interface between lurkers as a group and the humans around here. How did you wind up here?"

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Well, far be it from Urru to criticize these people, but obviously this is the worst form such an interface could take.

"Seemed like a big opportunity for career advancement." She speaks with a noticeable accent and slightly stiltedly.

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"...how's that working out for you so far?"

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Oh, come on. The humans can get away with using that euphemism without being mocked about it. "Very great, thank you."

The minister, meanwhile, is trying not to smile and almost entirely succeeding.

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"I am somewhat concerned that you have been coached and/or threatened into producing a glowing review but I'm not actually looking for one of those."

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"Whatcha looking for?"

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"I want to know - why there is a particular interfacing job to be done between humans and lurkers, what would happen by default without one and if whatever that is is bad, what would be better, as opposed to, uh, an institution called 'Extreme Labor' which appears to do hereditary slavery in an unconvincing paper hat."

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First of all what in green tarnation is a radical reformer like this doing hanging out in the minister's office? Could be a trap. She's not sure, though. And, well, he might not be human, and he's definitely not local.

"...Lurkers try to live in Haven City since outside Haven City is dangerous. And sometimes lurkers break laws or do not understand things."

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"Are there specific laws, specific things that are hard to understand, which are more a problem for lurkers than for humans?"

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There wouldn't be if humans were held responsible for glubs and crocadogs but that's not a productive train of thought, now, is it.

"Yes, lots."

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"What are those?"

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"Lots of lurkers do not read or talk or know what a law is."

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"Should I even be thinking of lurkers as a group, here, or are you just a bunch of species some of whom are animals and some of whom are people who don't have a lot of interests in common with the former?"

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She can't answer that in a way that will both help an alien reformer and not get her in trouble. She hesitates.

"...Oh, not if you believe them when they say we're all animals. - And not everyone speaks -" She could leave it at that, it would be safe-ish to leave it at that and very dangerous to not... "- the same language the humans do. You hear I have an accent?"

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"Yes, though I wasn't sure if that was because it's your second language or because your mouth is shaped differently."

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Well then. He's almost definitely legit if he's willing to admit she speaks another actual language.

"Both. And yes. We don't have much in common."

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"Okay. How many people-species of lurkers are there and what are they and which kind are you?"

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"I am not sure what you think is a person and how you count species. I am a babak."

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"Are there edge cases who are smart but not enough to speak - what's your language called - or are the edge cases able to speak and just not too bright -"

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"It's Atalu. Atalu is not the only lurker language. Most babaks can speak it or something else. Not all but I know that happens to humans too, that some are just not as smart as others. I don't know who is our species to you, there are some we can have children with but the children can't have children - you probably think most of those are people, but maybe not the ones with wings. Those ones understand lots of words but - lots like hundreds and they don't make sentences bigger than 'chase food'. Maybe you would think  there are three species of lurker people, I don't know. It's very easy to say I'm not a crawler but it's hard to say 'these species are the people'. It isn't like 'this is a human and this is a worm', you know?"

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"Yeah, I get it, there are ambiguities like that in ecosystems I'm familiar with too. If the children can't have children then probably I'd consider them different species."

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"Maybe five species of people, then."

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"If it weren't for humans lumping you all together would you think of yourselves as a particularly close collection of species at all? Is there culture in common?"

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"Dunno, they've been lumping us all together long enough there is now. Maybe we have as much culture in common as humans and moncaws? - Are you, uh, gonna get me out of here or are you gonna run out of questions and fly away."

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"If you are concerned about retaliation or something I can bring you in particular with me when I leave but I am not actually ready to dismantle the entire mess today."

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"...Wow, you don't even know what you've been asking for. In front of the minister. Yes I am very worried about that."

The minister makes a dismissive gesture and mutters, "I don't care."

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"Okay, I can bring you along. I do not think they will try very hard to stop me but this is the time to tell me if they have creepy mechanisms to control you even after you leave the premises."

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"Nah. I mean, blackmail, calling the Guard, just that stuff."

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"Okay. Is the danger outside the city that folks are trying to get away from mostly just metal heads?"

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"Pretty much. And the wasteland not having things growing in it so much anymore."

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"The metal heads are no longer a concern, if I put down some topsoil and plants and drop you off outside the city would that be cool or do you wanna stay?"

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"I really like the idea of a big multi-species city but yeah nah I'm out of here."

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"Cool! Do you wanna maybe design a lurker city for me to build for you guys?"

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Bounce bounce bounce!

"No but I know who to ask. You know, we had one before the Guard raided it." They still have the other one but she is not going to tell any humans about that.

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"Wow, that sucks! Uh, I can't make eco and don't know eco-related engineering, so I might have to adapt some things, but it can look however you want and stuff. Who should we ask?"

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"...How about instead of naming names here I talk to them and get back to you."

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"I thought you wanted to leave with me? They're not here?"

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"They're not here here. Might be in the city, though."

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"Okay, sounds good to me. Is there anything else I should be asking the minister, or anyone else here-here I should talk to or imminently rescue, or do you just wanna skedaddle?"

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"Let's skedaddle."

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"I trust there will be no problem with that?" Cam asks the minister. "You can send me your house design specs by writing 'letter to Cam' on it."

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"Will do." Will also make sure that the letter to Cam mentions some of the other things she might be able to help him sort out in Haven City. Just in case he thinks he's done with her.

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"Thanks for all your help." He beckons to Urru and heads out.

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Urru follows.

And meanwhile the metal heads have been up to something. One of the most dextrous ones has been very carefully making an exact copy of the fairy circle Cam gave Kor.

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A fairy appears promptly! "- hahahaha, holy shit, what the fuck is you?"

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The metal head does not smile politely because his metal mouth doesn't move that way. "Unfortunately our word for us is just 'people', but the aliens have some nicknames for us," he says in one of the languages the fairy has just gotten from him. "Thanks so much for answering my circle! You can take your pick of one of these things just for coming," he gestures at an assortment of human pants and skirts, necklaces, metal head literature printed out on actual paper, and a skull gem from someone who died of illness a few days ago, "or two if you'll stay and answer some questions."

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"I'll answer your questions - oooh, that's pretty -" She takes the skull gem. "What is this?"

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"It's a skull gem." He taps his, gently. It is in fact located in a socket in his skull. "It's sort of like bone - won't rot or anything."

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"Neat! What are your questions?"

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"First of all, it true that those who summon daeva become daeva when they die?"

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"...I dunno, I guess maybe they do? I was always a fairy, personally."

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"What's it like being a fairy?"

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"Oh, it's nice! I don't know what it's like being a - jewelbug - thing - we mostly just hear about what it's like being a human or an angel or a demon - but I like being a fairy and wouldn't trade 'em."

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"It seems strictly superior to being human but what's better about it than being an angel or a demon?"

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"Well, they have to flap their wings to fly, and go to the next room to get something they don't have on hand - or make a new one, but then they pile up - it just sounds so inconvenient."

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"That makes sense! But it seems like demons know everything - do they really, by the way, or can you hide things from them?"

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"There's a fancy kinda computer you can get that means they don't get what's on it. ...I dunno if it'd work for a jewelbug, it works for us and humans but our brains are basically like humans' brains."

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"Huh! That sounds pretty convenient. Next thing I was wondering is - what can you tell me about how daeva, especially demons, think about right and wrong?"

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"I mean, demons can't come to Fairyland, I don't know any socially. I don't think they're especially wacky? Except they don't like angels for some reason and angels don't like them even though they're both fine and it's stupid."

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"...Hm. Uh, I have less context than the average human on what baseline they're not especially wacky compared to?"

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"I guess that makes sense since you're a jewelbug. Uh, you shouldn't hurt people or fuck with their stuff? I guess maybe demons don't care about fucking with each other's stuff, considering."

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"That sort of makes sense. Uh, last question, how big a thing can you take with you when you get summoned and unsummoned?"

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"Bigger than me but not like ten times bigger than me. It's a volume limit not a weight limit but I've never had to get real exact, I just eyeball it." She picks out one of the necklaces, spins it in the air admiringly.

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"Thanks for everything! And now I just want you to go home, right?"

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"Right! Takes about a minute. Hey, how come this circle's in English when you don't speak it?"

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"Got it from someone who knows how to summon safely and don't know enough to make my own. At least not for strangers."

And he wants the fairy gone.

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And she goes.

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They went back and forth about how to record this conversation; they have witnesses, of course, hiding, and they've devised a system for taking very ephemeral notes in eco, but... if Cam knows enough to look for their notes then he knows enough to get the circle. So the summoner takes notes, writes what might be his last letter to his family, and lets the other jewelbugs know he's ready.

He spends a terrifying moment learning just what it's like to be their prey, and then -

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- he is in a glowing city. Instead of sky, there is glow; instead of ground, there is glow, yielding like marsh with structural integrity under his feet. Around him are humanoids, more symmetrical than average, some of them in more interesting colors than normal, with feathered wings, chattering in languages he doesn't know and having picnics and doing maintenance on buildings and flying around in the cavernous brightness.

They are all very startled when he appears but he can't understand anything they're saying about it.

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It worked! He can't talk to them but he tries waving in case that's a friendly gesture around here. He is, at least, on the humanoid end of metal head jewelbug body plans - four limbs, two hands, no tail - and can therefore do that.

He tries to levitate and then he tries to conjure a miniature version of Cam's current surroundings and he can't think of a safe test for the last kind and stands there hesitating and watching the other daeva.

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He can't levitate and can't conjure. A handful of them are trying different languages on him.

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He expects it won't work, but tries speaking his own language to them. He figures he'll be able to talk to them if he can get summoned by not-his-family but he doesn't know how to do that yet.

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They are maybe asking each other if any of them recognize that language. Or the species.

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That would make sense.

There... isn't some kind of circle that people step onto to vanish, is there. Is there anything else in the environment that seems like it might be the other end of a summoning circle?

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He can feel - somethings - whishing by, fast but not so fast that he couldn't catch one -

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He tries to catch one.

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He appears in a circle with a human standing before him. The human shrieks. Also now he speaks Portuguese and a little English.

"Uh," says the human. "Uh, you. Uh."

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"Hi, summoner," he attempts to pronounce in Portuguese. He really needs different mouthparts if he wants to be consistently understood, though.

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"Is that, uh, a takeoff from a movie I haven't seen or your... own design."

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"...Second one. You like it?" He looks down and tries to read the circle.

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The circle is many paragraphs' worth of legalese wrapped around a circle, which makes it kind of hard to read. It says things about what he is not allowed to change in and out of the context of a task.

"Uh, if you wanna be a movie monster I can - I can hook you up."

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He shakes his head, hoping that means the same thing here. "Tempting, but I'm not looking for anything long-term right now."

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"Yeah, I was actually looking for set design people but that's long term too. Okay, uh, bye."

An awkward sixty seconds later he's back in the glowy city.

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"Does anyone speak whatever this is?" he asks whoever happens to be nearby, in Portuguese.

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"Oh, I do!" says a nearby angel. "Wow, that's really something, how long did that take you to figure out? You've gotta have been studying biology for a thousand years, wow."

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"I was born with it. I'm an alien summoner from another planet. Actually, I was hoping there was some kind of orientation for new people?"

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"...whoa, I thought for sure we'd have heard about it if there were aliens," the angel says. "Um, yeah, there's an office - I think I remember where it is - it's - oh, you can't fly, can you, I don't know how to get there walking."

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"I could... turn my arms into wings? But I don't know how."

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"...you turned yourself into that and you don't know how to do wings?"

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"I did say I'm an alien but maybe I should figure out a more articulated mouth before I say it again. Is the orientation place itself flying or could I climb to it?"

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"Oh, I think there is a walking path, but I don't know it, I always fly. Wow, an alien, a real alien. Do you hatch from eggs, did demons figure out how to make alien eggs?"

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Oh, fuck. There's one technical difficulty in the way of demons doing that and he's already figured out how to get around it.

"Definitely yes to the first, I think also yes to the second."

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"Yikes! They treating you guys all right in Hell?"

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"So the funny story about this is that I actually died and came here because my planet is in the process of being conquered by a demon - it's a very quiet conquest because it's not like anyone can stop him and it's not like he's particularly done anything wrong by human standards - and I wanted to know if there was... prior art on what to do about that."

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"...why isn't the demon who made you doing anything?"

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"Ironically enough this would be easier to explain if you could conjure things - our planet was just a human planet before we started living on it, and we're dealing with a summoned demon, and I don't think it's in hell although if hell has stars in the sky then I can't confirm it isn't - anyway, I know this sounds ridiculous, and I don't need you to do anything about it, I just want the orientation and to know how demons think."

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"...right, okay. I'll fly there and ask for walking directions for you." She takes off, she's back about five minutes later. "This way."

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"Thanks." He'll go this way, then.

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She leads him to an office which has Portuguese as one of many languages on its sign saying "New Angels". "I don't know if they have a Portuguese speaker in right now," she says, "did you get anything else?"

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"A little bit of something, I guess I can take another summons if I have to but I don't think I'm very useful to the summoners yet."

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"Okay, well, they might have one, lots of people speak it." She pushes through the door and holds it for him. "There you go. Do you have a Portuguese -"

"I can get along in Portuguese as long as it's Martian dialect?" replies the angel condensing water out of the air to sprinkle on the office plants.

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He'll step inside, then. "Is this Martian dialect?"

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"...close enough, yeah. Uh, if you're new... are you some kind of really hardcore kin-plan type? Got into fey fruit and acid at the same time? What's the deal?"

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"...No, I just - what's a kin-plan type?"

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"Oh, the way indestructibility works is that you stay the shape you should be but some people get very wild ideas about what shape they should be and can kind of force themselves into something - usually not quite that weird - without knowing enough biology to make their own parts and stick them on. I don't know why it's called 'kin-plan' but the plan part is probably from 'body plan'."

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"That sounds cool. But no, this is actually not as much of a change for me as you might think." Quick check: can he believe hard enough that he's a real angel and real angels should look like humans with wings?

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Nope.

"Well, we do have some fey fruit if you need a quick fix, or - I could try to make wings for you but I honestly don't know where I'd attach them, I'd go with the fruit if I were you. It's not imported, but my colleague can get it close enough to work even if it doesn't taste identical."

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"The fey fruit makes people have wings? That sounds very useful."

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"What it does is loosen up your attachment to your body plan, and also specifically makes you feel like you should have wings. It doesn't provide a lot of detail on the wings and fairies usually go for the bug kind, but those don't work, so you need to go in firmly convinced that your wings should have bones and feathers and things."

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...That sounds pretty hard considering everyone he knows with wings has the bug kind - okay, but the wings are a signifier of daeva type, right, that's why Cam's don't have feathers and fairies have bug wings and angels have feather wings. So as an angel he should have angel wings.

"I would like to try that."

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The angel offers him a little red fruit.

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He eats the fruit and tries to keep in mind that he should have feathery wings so everyone can see he's an angel. Very feathery, very strong, very statistically average angel wings. And maybe a vocal tract that can mimic human voices really really well.

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The fruit doesn't seem to actually do anything.

"You have to let it hit you," the angel mentions. "It's a drug, not a magic wand, you have to let it work."

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"How do I do that?"

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"You just decide to, it's not complicated, but you might not do it without thinking about it."

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He is definitely of the opinion that these fruits should work on him. He's not so sure they can if they're not magic and they're designed for humans - can he just declare that his brain chemistry should allow that - well, probably he can't unless the fruit works. "...Can I try again or...?"

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"...sure." She gives him another.

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He hesitates and mentally takes a step back and figures - whatever governs his body now is not biology. It is not physics. It is not that his metal plates have a certain resistance to being deformed or ground down. It is not that his central nervous system might change state in response to the addition of a new chemical. It's magic. It would just be silly for the physical and chemical makeup of his body to be relevant here. He is a daeva. It should work. And he sure wants it to work.

He eats the next fruit and thinks that he wants the fruit to work.

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It doesn't.

"I'm not sure what the issue is, maybe the bug thing you're doing just won't accommodate wings?"

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"Ugh. I don't know how to stop doing the bug thing, though. Uh, anyway, I assume there's more to the orientation than fruit?"

...If what the fruit does to him does depend on his body plan he might end up sick from the fruit not being food. He sure hopes that's not how it works.

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"I guess we can postpone the flying lesson. Uh, here's a complimentary computer," it's not like Cam's, it has more input peripherals attached to it, "and I can teach you to use that if you don't know how, and it comes pre-loaded with machine translation so you can go between Portuguese and whatever else comes up - the local primary language is Tamudir, but we have plenty of human languages spoken too and a substantial minority of Choul speakers."

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"That sounds very useful! I don't know how to use these yet, I'd like it if you'd teach me."

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She will provide an introduction to computer use and show him where the typing practice program is. "I'd say you can get a chiplock install once you have the money but I don't know where a surgeon would even begin on you."

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"...Yeah, that, uh, makes sense. Is there anything I should do for you, since you've been so nice and all?"

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"Just pay your taxes, we're publicly funded. I'll walk you through how to do that." The angels have an electronic banking system and do everything through that, so the government can automatically take a small cut of relevant properties and transactions as long as he's not trying anything shady.

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He has no interest in trying anything shady when all they've done is start things off by being nice.

"How do I get money and is that the kind of thing I should just be asking the computer?"

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"Well, you get a job. You can take summonses and resell what they pay you through a flipper, but it's hard to get a regular summon arrangement if you don't have any special skills - it's not impossible, but you'd have to try a bunch of times to get a waste disposal or a tunneling job or something like that you can do without an education in something. Most people just get jobs here in Heaven. What do you know how to do?"

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"I know a lot about the biology of some species that I bet there aren't any of here yet, I know things about physics and the scientific method, and, uh, I have good aim with a sling?"

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"Okay, maybe you can talk to some biologists about whether they have anything for you to do. The nearest biologist lab is..." She looks it up. "Next town up of here, Calsabrua. I think if you can't fly you can go through the cave pocket, that way, and come out in Calsabrua. But before you go we should talk about the law." She goes over the legal code for this collection-of-towns-and-cave-pockets with him - where he's allowed to take cloud fluff from, where he's allowed to put a new cave if he doesn't want to get an apartment he has to pay for, noise and traffic and nuisance ordinances.

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Oh, good, where he can take cloud fluff from was close to the top of his list of things to research.

"If I put a new cave in one of those places, is someone else allowed to take it later, like if I leave?"

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"If you register with the pocket manager they'll keep the cave for you for up to five years but after that it'll be filled back in so someone else can use the space."

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"Sounds good. Oh, and is there a way to tell the difference between people summoning angels and people summoning me?"

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"Oh, yeah, if someone summons specifically you that will feel very different - it's never happened to me personally, but I've never heard of anyone having a hard time telling the difference."

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"Thanks! Anything else I should know before I head out?"

If there isn't then he'll make a beeline for the nearest place he can take cloud fluff from legally.

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He can take some from a certain edge of the city, or he can register for a cave space in the cave pocket and hollow it out and use that fluff.

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He'll take it from the edge, then. Not a lot, he doesn't need a lot for this. Is it about as intuitive as it seems like it should be to turn cloud fluff into fabric?

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His fabric doesn't turn out very good at first - the threads wind up clinging together instead of being woven but individually free - but he can fix that with a little more attention.

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Interesting. Once he's good enough at fabric he can put some clothes on and take some metal off. Parts of his horns and chestplate are neither structurally necessary nor supplied with blood or nerves, and stick out enough to contribute to how inhuman his silhouette is. And with them shorter he can put on a wide-brimmed hat to hang a veil from, and a loose enough shirt that it's vaguely plausible his torso could be human under it, and gloves (his claws need to be a little shorter and duller for that, which feels wrong even though he's indestructible and has magic), and a floor-length skirt under which it's hard to tell what shape his legs are. That leaves some sharp metal protrusions from his wrists but he hopes maybe they look like jewelry. Now maybe people will think he looks less weird?

Next order of business is to figure out whether he can stand around looking at his computer somewhere in public or if he needs to get a cave for that. Does that seem like the sort of thing other people are doing?

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Yup. He'll want to stay out of the middles of things but people hang around computing plenty.

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Excellent. Now, what is available for angels to read about safe summoning?

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There's nothing preloaded on his computer about it. He can find some very low-grade explanations on the Heavenly internet but it's clear that nobody expects angels to do or teach summoning.

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He'll have to get that some other way.

Cam probably doesn't think of himself as evil and daeva are probably relatively similar to each other, so what does the Heavenly internet have to say about right and wrong?

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They have lots of ethical philosophy; the stuff he can read in the original or well-translated into Portuguese by people instead of machines is all human-originated, though.

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So are some daeva, so he'll skim some of it and download some for later, if that's possible.

Next up: what does the Heavenly internet have to say about demons?

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He can download things no problem.

A lot of angels don't like demons, but it's pretty clearly a petty, superficial sort of thing; no one has any actual grievances besides "we were having a fistfight in the concordance and they pulled on my feathers, which is no fair" and things like that. Some angels also hold demons' culture in contempt (anarchic, disrespectful of intellectual property, casually wasteful).

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Well, he doesn't love the anarchy, but otherwise that makes them sound great. (He bets demons would've believed him about being an alien. And if he were a demon he could be doing this research from anywhere.)

Okay, he needs books on safe summoning. He suspects he can get those from just about anyone who might summon him, but he'll need to be able to do some kind of job. Which means more practice here. Which probably means visiting that lab. He heads for Calsabrua.

On the way he learns what a circle for him specifically feels like and answers for just long enough to let them know he's still busy with research.

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Calsabrua has a lot of plants in it on the buildings, some of which hang, stalactite-style, from the ceiling of the city cavern. The first people he tries don't speak Portuguese and the first one who does doesn't know where the lab is but the next person is able to point him in the right direction.

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What a cool design for a city. He's not as fond of it as he would be if it were more homey and less alien, but still.

He'll go show up at the lab and see if it has a greeter or a sign out front or anything like that.

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It has a sign that is only in four languages, none of which are Portuguese, and doesn't look like it's intended to be inviting to visitors, but he can open the door.

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Hmm. There was some kind of machine translation, wasn't there? Can he turn any of the versions of the sign into possibly-badly-mangled Portuguese?

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Yes he can! The sign says "Calsabrua Biology Group".

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Well, that's heartening. He'll go in the door, then.

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The door leads to a lobby with potted plants and backless benches and a sign reading, in the same four languages, "press button to page someone", next to a series of labeled buttons with various names in various alphabets beside them.

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This does not seem like a setup that is meant to deal with random walk-ins at all. He has no idea which person he should be paging, after all. Maybe they have some other way for the public to get in touch with them that isn't this; can he find anything like that if he tries looking them up online?

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They have an email address!

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He... needs an email address of his own, and then he can email them to ask what they do and if they're hiring.

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Getting his own email address is not hard.

He doesn't get a reply right away.

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He'll play the summons lottery again while he waits.

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This circle is someplace with higher gravity and it's outdoors! On a beach! "Hi!" says the summoner, apparently not instantly noticing that this is a really weird looking angel. "Huh, you don't have wings." She speaks English and a few words of Mandarin.

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"Haven't figured out how to make them fit with the rest of my setup." His articulation is much better now but his voice still has an odd metallic echoey ring to it. "I'm looking for short-term work that doesn't take specialized skills I don't have, is that what you're looking for?"

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"Shouldn't be too hard! There's high bacteria levels in the water today and we just want you to wade out there and be a water filter till we can reopen. Don't hurt the sea creatures. Sound doable?"

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"I think so. You want the water just plain?"

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"Plain for seawater. Salty. If you don't get the mineral concentration exactly right that's fine."

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"That sounds doable! I came here hoping you'd have a summoning book - you know, from your end, I know what it's like from my end - but I'd consider other things if you have other things."

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"Huh, I've never - I have my summoning textbook from university and I don't need it anymore. I will give it to you in exchange for five hours of water filtration or until our test buoy reports safe concentrations, whichever comes first, deal?"

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"Deal!"

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The summoner sends a gofer to fetch the book, and supervises his angel at work in the water.

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He hasn't studied local bacteria but he does know a bit about the microorganisms native to two different unrelated biospheres, so he's pretty clear on what this person probably wants. If he can aim for the bacteria specifically he'll turn them into water; otherwise he can... turn the water into water but specifically into water that doesn't have bacteria?

With his skirt wet enough to cling to his legs it's clear they're not human-shaped.

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His summoner is looking at him but it's not clear if this is because he's weirdly shaped or because he's Supervising.

He can't aim for the bacteria specifically.

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It would probably be very useful to try to engage the alien human in small talk but he has no idea how he'd go about that. He makes water into different, cleaner (but still slightly salty) water for five hours or until the buoy is satisfied.

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The buoy is satisfied in hour four. "Great, thanks!" says the summoner, handing over the book.

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Meanwhile, back in Haven City, things are still happening. Urru talks to some other lurkers about specs for a lurker city. The minister writes Cam about what she wants from a house and lists off some other ways she thinks she can be useful to him; she also mentions that someone else has just freed several lurkers and destroyed some Guard property in the process, and that she's telling anyone who asks that she hired this person to do pentesting for the ministry.

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Who was this? Does Urru know any of the escapees?

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Seems to have been Jak, and Urru can tentatively put names to three of the lurkers in question but doesn't know them well.

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Cam will attempt to put Urru and the escapees in touch so they can collaborate on the city, since there are different kinds and everything.

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She can try to get them and the other people she knows who have ideas about lurker cities talking, sure. (Seems unwise to mention that she suspects they already are or will be in touch with each other whatever she does about it.)

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And Cam would like to talk to Ashelin or Ashelin's transition team or whatever.

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Torn, formerly the Underground's second-in-command, is sort of working for Ashelin at this point and is available to talk to Cam.

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"Hi! I think the Ministry of Extreme Labor should cease to exist, what do you think?"

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"I'm too official these days, I'm not allowed to say someone should burn their headquarters down and lose all their records. Why?"

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"I went to visit it and check if it was doing anything important and I don't think it really is. I'm going to build the lurkers their own city."

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"How long do we have until we lose a double-digit percent of our labor force?"

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"Depends how long they take to get back to me about city specs and how many want to go right away. What labor are they mostly doing?"

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"I'm not sure. I think mining and farming. I can find someone who'd know more and get back to you."

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"What do you currently have in the way of automation in those sectors?"

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"We have drills and things for mining - I don't know much, I was never assigned to a mine. I've seen farms, Samos would know more but they've got sprinklers on timers and threshing machines. We have designs for other things that take too much eco to be worth running, maybe you can make them electric."

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"I probably can! I will put looking up equipment you might want for those things on my list. Also I can in the short term make food and whatever it is y'all mine for, but you don't want to be relying on that indefinitely, I bet."

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"We mine a lot of eco but dumping a lot of iron on the ministry might help. - Also, they're not the only sl... 'forced labor' business in town. They're just the biggest and the most subsidized. So you know."

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"Oh boy. Do you need anything from me to take apart the rest of 'em?"

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"Electricity might do it by itself but not very fast. If you're waiting for the city government we're busy with security, road maintenance, urban modernization, public education, restructuring the KG, and transitioning back to a peacetime government structure." He ticks these off on his fingers. "In that order."

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"Most of those are not my comparative advantage. You'll let me know if you need any material objects, right? And when it's time to put in an electrified neighborhood and generators and stuff?"

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"Yeah. We're almost ready to go on that - Ashelin's hoping to get everyone out of the condemned section without a fight, for that we need that hotel Samos wanted, but before we can put that in we need to clear space in the city or put up a force field in the wasteland somewhere. Should have that sorted out in the next couple days. But if you ran around in the mean time making better bridges for the rest of the slums I wouldn't complain."

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"Do you need specifically a force field? I sold the lady at Extreme Labor on an electric fence dome."

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"...I wouldn't trust it if we didn't have a truce with the metal heads but maybe it'll do. If you put one up around a nice hotel near the beach right now people will complain that you didn't wait for their go-ahead but I think we can move faster that way."

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"I can go put a hotel near the beach if there's a clear plot, sure. Who should have a key to open the fencing door?"

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"Me. Ashelin. Samos. Can you arrange it so anyone inside can open it to get out?"

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"Yes, that's standard." Keys.

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"...We're gonna need something completely different for keeping people out of places they're not supposed to be, aren't we."

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"Only if the people you want to keep out are demons. And that's harder than not giving us keys."

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"Know of any way to do it?"

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"...obscurity plus not having any demons who really, really want to get into your place around. And bindings, when you're summoning more. I'm not going to, like, casually commit home invasion, here."

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"I know you won't. But if teaching everyone to summon will make them immortal..."

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"Yeah. Unfortunately if someone summons their grandma unbound there is not a ton you can do about it besides shoot the grandkid."

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"...If killing people just makes them daeva I don't know if we need to execute people more or less but - hotel now and I'll think about that."

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"Hotel!" agrees Cam. He flies to the beach and surveys it for suitable sites.

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He could fit something with a smallish footprint in on top of a cliff if he clears some trees out of the way and is careful of the pipes underground. Or he could maybe do something with the area currently taken up by the ruins of what was a particularly nice section of the city and is currently a bunch of rubble leaching something caustic and brown into the water. Or he could move a little inland and try to figure out how to safely put something next to a pond of dark eco that absolutely nothing wants to grow near except for some thick black stalks with what look a bit like skull gems near the tips.

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Wow, an entire pond of dark eco, he was not expecting them to just kinda leave that lying around.

What if he puts it on a platform out in the water, any major environmental hazards there?

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A robot which does not yet know that Haven City is at peace with the metal heads or that leaving is allowed lurks near some of the more scenic coast trying to shoot anything in the water but it doesn't patrol the entire ocean and he can avoid it. Farther out there are some amazingly aggressive fish but while they can and will bite through solid wood there are plenty of materials they can't and won't. The caustic water near the ruins doesn't have any robots and its local monsters are soft and squishy and incapable of biting through solid wood.

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Well, he doesn't know exactly what the caustic substance is and doesn't want to bet he can come up with something that it won't eat. He tests the bite strength of the monsterfish and makes a platform out of stone and steel and puts the hotel on that and arcs a swoopy bridge from the platform to the cliff.

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That works. If he examines the fish while he's doing this testing he may notice its lower jaw looks characteristically lurkery.

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He does notice that! He does not take particular actions about it. He releases the fish unharmed.

He installs tidecatchers all around the hotel's platform and runs wire along the underside of the bridge to continue on from there when the time comes; he caps it off neatly at the cliff. If he's done this right nobody will even particularly notice the wire's traces among the aesthetic flourishes.

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The robot manages not to take issue with this. It patrols under the bridge.

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Oh good.

He goes to report about where the hotel is and tries not to sound judgmental about the state of the build site.

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Finding someone to reprogram the robot can go on Torn's to-do list somewhere below ending slavery.

Once everyone who needs to sign off on the plan does they'll be able to start moving people into the hotel and tearing their houses down; they'll let Cam know when they're ready for him to put in replacements. That should be in a few days.

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"Do you have any design input?"

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They have (obsolete due to electricity and Cam) blueprints and they're aiming for traditional yet modern - obviously strongly influenced by and respectful of the grandeur of Haven's past but doing its own thing. They want something a little bit boring. And they want some gardens. Just small ones, where there are convenient places for them.

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He would like species lists for the gardens, please, or possibly historical gardens to copy sections of, the biosphere here is not familiar to Cam and it would be terrible if locals turned out to be allergic to lilacs en masse.

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He could copy parts of the gardens in front of the stadium or pick out something nice from the forest. Minus the trees, there won't be enough room for their roots. Or just do dirt and Samos can lovingly place each individual flower at some point.

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Can do!

He starts putting stuff up as they clear space for it, making occasional trips to check on lurkers, feed the metal heads and inquire if they still want a colony ship while the precursor egg question is up in the air, and build the ministry lady a house.

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The lurkers have blueprints for him after a while, not drafted by professional architects but they're something, and lots of details on why they want things the way they do so if he has to improvise he can do it well.

The metal heads want a colony ship and some warships and help mining eco from nearby asteroids and the non-eco parts of an anti-spacecraft weapon installed on the next furthest planet from this sun, and of course an entire ecosystem when Cam has time to get to that. They can promise they primarily want to use the weapons against the dark makers. Either way it'll still take some time to wind down everything they have happening on this planet - they have people to call in from other continents, they have eggs that wouldn't survive being uprooted from their dark eco pools, and so on.

The minister is pleased with her house and reminds Cam he can ask her if he needs her expertise again later on.

The younger Samos accosts him after a while to complain that the plants in the new gardens are terrible conversationalists.

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Cam can think amateur blueprints at CAD software until it has usable ones.

Cam would like the metal heads and the humans to have more of a treaty than "Cam went and talked to them so they're cool now" before he starts issuing anyone warships, and he does not want to make a trip to another planet just yet since that will take a while and he has many things to do, but he will do it when there is a spare week.

Cam has no idea what Samos was expecting. "I'm... sorry?"

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The metal head leader will talk with Ashelin, then, and wants to know if that will be enough or if they need treaties with the other humans too.

"Hmph. It's like pulling weeds to try to talk to them," Samos says. "But maybe they'll be smarter when they have more experience."

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With other humans too will be ideal.

"I'm - I'm sorry, are you being - literal -"

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"What else would I be doing, composing an allegory for my frustration with the inadequacy of mankind?"

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"Maybe you think flowers should be more asymmetrical or something, I don't know! What were you expecting?"

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"Well, in Haven Forest, the plants have things to say about recent events and how they feel. Just like they do in the gardens everywhere else in the city. Even the grass on the beach has things to say, even if it's only repeating what wiser things have told it."

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"And, again, you are being literal, and not talking about - like - accumulated physical evidence on the plants about things that have gone on around them."

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"I'm talking about telepathic conversations in which they show me visions!"

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"Okay, uh, plants don't... do that... where I'm from... even when they have not been created by demons, to be clear, like, demons do have a specific deficit in creating things with minds that work right but this is not normally an issue with plants at all."

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"Huh. Well, maybe they'll get more talkative as they're exposed to eco or maybe they'll have seeds that are better. I should have paid more attention when you said you didn't know plants had feelings but I thought you were just being prejudiced."

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"The seeds should be fine, animal eggs made early enough in the developmental process are fine."

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"I won't worry, then. At some point when we're both less busy maybe we can find out what happens if plants you make send out runners."

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"I do not know how to make them do that but I would be mildly curious to find out."

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"I do know how. You'll probably have to remind my older self about it later, though, I don't think I'll get to it before I leave - speaking of which, what's the holdup with the Stone?"

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"With what, hatching it?"

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"Yes. My older self thinks the kid will be necessary for it and if it's all the same to you I'm impatient to take him somewhen he won't be recognized."

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"Yeah, okay, I'll check in with the metal heads, make sure they won't freak out, go drop a jewelry store on the oracle and ask some last minute questions, and then we can track it down and hatch a baby precursor."

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"Sounds like a plan. I'll call Kor; I think it'd mean a lot to him to witness it."

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"Sure, why not, we can have a whole baby shower about it."

Cam goes to the oracle first since it's closer and its replies take more time. "Hey, we're about ready to locate and hatch the baby, is it going to need anything? Are there special procedures besides people who might be pure of heart giving it a pat?"

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A Precursor writes him a reply eventually.

It will be very new and would appreciate access to the rift gate to get it out of the immediate path of the dark makers. It will not kill any metal heads on the way into or out of the gate if we must agree to that to secure safe passage. This is for its safety, but not necessary for its hatching. For that, the pat will suffice.

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"It's not supposed to kill any metal heads even if that isn't an express prerequisite of safe passage, we've been over this."

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Its path may cross those of metal heads who are not yet party to this agreement.

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"If you could be more specific about that I could go talk to those too."

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You have. But you had not.

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"- oh, it's going to the past. I guess that makes sense. I'm not going to say it can't defend itself if absolutely necessary but I'd rather it avoid fighting them in the first place if possible."

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As would we all. Ideally it will pass unnoticed easily.

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"Do you happen to know, since it's going to happen in the past, whether it succeeds?"

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It provoked no alarm and escaped alive. I do not know for certain if anyone was silenced to facilitate this, though I suspect not. I could find the answer eventually but it is probably not in local storage on this planet and may never have been set down in a form you could conjure.

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"I'll ask the metal heads."

He goes to the metal heads!

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Their leader is for whatever reason not at the nest right now but Billy and some others are available to talk.

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"It's getting to be about time to hatch the Precursor egg. It will apparently need to go into the past, and it's going to try to sneak past everybody in the past from before we had a truce, do you know if it does that successfully?"

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They confer for a while and then Billy writes.

This is the first we've heard of that despite the gate being watched nearly all the time but that sounds possible for a Precursor.

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"Cool, that sounds promising. Do you need anything else before I go do that?"

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I suppose not.

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So Cam goes and meets up with the relevant Samos and checks for surroundings of the egg.

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The relevant Samos has rounded up Kor and the Heir of Mar and Jak and Daxter and Keira. The egg is currently held in brackets affixed to a statue in the Tomb of Mar.

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Well then, they can go on an expedition to the Tomb of Mar. By shuttle, if it's far away.

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It's hidden underneath Haven City. The entrance is hidden within the pedestal of a giant statue of Baron Praxis. That just lets them into an antechamber where a carving on the wall that looks a bit like the oracle invites Mar's heir to enter and face the tests.

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"Tests?"

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"The tomb is said to be the site of the tests of manhood, which Mar's heir must face," Samos says.

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"...I suppose we know for time travel reasons that this is fine and won't kill him or anything?"

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"Well, actually, I was planning to make Jak do it."

Jak, who was frowning pretty intensely about the whole thing, relaxes.

"Oh, well then, good luck, Jak, have fun in there, bye," says Daxter.

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"Do we know it won't kill Jak or anything?"

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"I'm hard to kill. It's fine." He casually picks Daxter up on the way to the door.

"You could check if we make it home later," says Keira. "This rift rider is spoken for but I can find the artifacts again and make another one."

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"Okay, no further objections. Yell if you need help."

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They'll do that.

"Thank you for making this possible," Kor tells him.

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"You're welcome! Probably! I'm crossing my fingers that nothing blows up in my face. Metaphorically. Literal explosions had better be in my face and not anywhere else where they might hurt somebody."

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"I think that would get boring after a while but it's very considerate of you anyway."

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"What, explosions? Yes, I would prefer that they not just persist as a background fact."

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He laughs and shakes his head. "That too, I'm sure."

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"What is it you meant would get boring?"

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"Not having anything explode in anyone else's face. But perhaps we're due a little quiet retirement."

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"I don't normally find explosions spice things up much. Except fireworks, I do like those."

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"I for one agree with you there."

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Cam offers Samos a sparkler.

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Ooh, nice. "Thank you, Cam. You know, there's a lot to celebrate recently, and fireworks are arguably traditional for such momentous victories. I expect there'll be a show soon - well, soon for you, if not for me."

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"I will make a point of watching it."

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There are a few things to chat about, and nothing on fire enough to necessitate running off to deal with it.

Eventually, the door opens again and Jak and Daxter come out, looking a little soggy and bruised. Jak has the Stone cradled carefully in his arms. Daxter, perched on his shoulder, waves like a celebrity to an adoring audience.

Keira bounces a little. "You did it!"

Kor reaches for the Stone, stops, draws his hand back. He watches with an inscrutable yet intense expression.

Jak kneels and offers the Stone to the kid, who hesitates and steps behind Samos.

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"Can I try? I'm just so curious if I'm pure of heart."

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"Seems unlikely to hurt anything if you do, anyway."

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Pat pat?

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It's sort of smooth and inert and stays that way as Cam touches it.

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"I must have too much latent wickedness or something. Hey kiddo, you look nervous, what's up?"

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The kid does not answer out loud - he never does, despite being old enough he ought to be able to - but after another moment's hesitation he taps the Stone himself.

A glowing humanoid figure appears in the air above the Stone. The figure seems to be made of sparkling motes of light, not all one mass - in fact it's not the figure has any mass at all. Kor draws a sharp breath and stares; actually, pretty much everyone stares.

The Precursor turns so that, if it had eyes (which it does not), it would be looking at Cam. "Thank you, great peacemaker. Through your efforts, the universe may yet find healing beyond what we dreamed possible."

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"- you're welcome," says Cam, blinking.

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The Precursor addresses Jak next: "Take hope, brave one. The darkness inside you is now balanced by a glorious light. We will meet again."

Jak doesn't seem to know what to say to that, although he looks pleased about it, which is just as well because the Precursor immediately turns to Kor after that.

"You," says the Precursor.

"I'd like to know what you have to say for yourself," says Kor.

"I would like the same thing," the Precursor says.

"Would you really."

"We did not know much of evil, once. We knew yet less of darkness. We had a duty to help, if we could. There is yet a path to the light for you, if you choose to seek it. I expect you will not, but I have not seen your future beyond this day."

"You insult me."

"We are sorry."

"I am considering whether to forgive you."

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"...I feel like I'm missing something," says Cam.

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"Yes," says Samos, "do either of you care to explain yourselves?"

"No," says Kor.

"We are grateful for your support against the dark makers, leader of the metal heads," says the Precursor, before dissolving into its constituent sparkles and disappearing.

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"Your head does not look very metallic now," Cam observes.

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"Indeed it does not," Kor says, as Keira edges away from him and Samos steps in front of the kid. "Now, if you'll excuse me I have no further business in Haven City."

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"...o... kay... I'm not sure whether to say 'sorry about the baby precursor outing you' or 'wow that was a dick move dude' but, uh, whichever of those is appropriate pretend I said it."

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"Are we just letting him go? We're just letting the leader of the metal heads walk out?" The answer seems to be yes, since he's managing to walk out without being stopped. "Man, gotta say, I thought he'd be intimidating, you know, at all."

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"Has he been... walking around like that... for a long time?"

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"Quite a while, yes, and reporting on metal head activity in between trips to the wasteland. I suppose I have to give Praxis some credit, we really were working with the metal heads after all."

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"Uh-huh. He got a summoning circle off me."

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"Well, that's disheartening. I wonder how many metal heads have already gotten miraculous powers that way."

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Cam conjures for valid circles.

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Well, first they copied Kor's fairy circle exactly. Then three circles, demon and fairy and angel, all unbound, for a name which clearly belongs to a metal head since it couldn't possibly be a human or lurker or moncaw name. Then a few unbound circles a day since then, all for that same person, as an angel.

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"Okay, they have turned one metal head into an angel - this guy -" He conjures the guy. "Nobody else, yet."

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"But when we kill them more will end up as daeva and we'll never be rid of them. Not that I'm saying we should be the ones to break the truce, of course."

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"Yeah. I mean, if you somehow got them all at once nobody would be around to summon them back but yeah. I can go - find out what their plans are, I guess."

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"I'd appreciate it if you did. You'll probably have to remind my older self to thank you for it later, though."

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"If it ever seems opportune perhaps I will."

He lets himself out of the tomb and heads to the metal heads.

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He can just beat Kor back, if he takes off immediately, though probably not by much.

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Cam will be waiting for Kor's arrival. Maybe he will get to see him shed his disguise.

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He comes in already in metal head form, flying even though his proportionally very small wings don't look at all like they should support his weight.

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"Hey. How do you do that? - the disguise but I'm also curious about the flying, fairies use magic to fly because bug wings can't lift someone of a person's size."

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"Eco can be used in some counterintuitive ways. Flight is very common. Shapeshifting, somewhat less so, and it is rare to achieve more than a change of color scheme." He sounds smug.

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"Congratulations, I guess. Is there a particular reason you were surreptitiously doing summonings? And posing as a human?"

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"I was posing as a human to gain information about happenings inside Haven City. I was, in other words, spying. As for the summoning, yes, I wanted to read material from your internet."

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"You could have, like, asked."

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"For specific material from the internet or for the ability to access information about your kind's motives and abilities that you did not have the chance to filter?"

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"...either? I mean, there's a lot of information in the world, I would not in fact have time to filter if I just dumped enough of it on you. Demons do not have consistent motives, though, we're all different folks."

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"I did not know enough, before, to believe those claims. Now I do."

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"I see. Now that you have done this research what's next?"

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"Those who would rather live forever will summon. At some point we will have either a finished translation of a summoning textbook or a metal head demon, at which point we will find out whether we have any other afterlife. We may, at some point in the distant future, if it seems both wise and feasible, arrange stable transit between the daeva realms."

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"Cool, sounds exciting. Uh, do you want to name somebody dead so I can check the afterlife sitch for you right now?"

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"I would appreciate that." He names someone dead.

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"...this might have a weird result if they time traveled, but a negative should be a true negative." Conjure?

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Nope.

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"I don't see anything. - which is a true negative in the sense that it means they're not physically instantiated somewhere at this time but if you, like, all get resurrected in a few centuries by some sort of mass revival event I wouldn't catch that, or if you become beings of pure eco when you die."

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"But it is more information than we had before, and it is good news. Thank you."

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"Why is it good news?"

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"I am not sure I know of any species where every member would like to be immortal. And there are people it would be tremendously awkward to see alive again, whatever their own preferences."

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"That's true. Daeva can be kept unconscious, if we want."

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"I will pass that on; I think there are people it might influence."

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"The place to look up is called the Poppy Gardens, in Hell, I assume there are equivalents in Fairyland and Heaven but don't know for sure."

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"Thank you."

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"You're welcome. Do you want to just, like, keep murdering people till you have a fairy who'll transport you anywhere you care to go and your own demon to supply you, or do you still want ships from me?"

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"We would prefer the second but can arrange the first if need be."

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"I can make 'em. You're gonna go pick fights with dark precursors?"

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"We intend to take a stand, but not to venture out of the system hunting them."

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"That's legit. Where do you want me to put your ships?"

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He can point out various metal-head-controlled open spaces.

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Cam puts in the ships. They have daeva, warships aren't going to make much difference.

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"Thank you. Your experience is still of tremendous value."

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"My experience at what?"

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"The safe use of daeva powers. And other things to do with the daeva realms, as well."

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"Ah. Happy to help. Do you need anything else right now?"

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"Not urgently."

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"Cool. Uh, see you around, I guess."

Are the lurkers ready for a city yet?

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Only a small fraction of prospective residents are actually available at the moment but they have enough people to get things up and running.

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Cool! He will iterate on little model cities put together based on their criteria in his computer aided design program of choice and when they like one he can find a site and it can appear.

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Then they can get it up and running and be slowly joined by others as more lurkers escape Haven City or venture out of hiding places in the wasteland. Eventually they even get a couple of moncaw immigrants.

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Delightful.

He adds electrical infrastructure as space is cleared in Haven City and supplies interim material support to prop up industries lurkers (and other forced labor) are fleeing from.

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Since construction costs are basically zero, the city government buys up most of the slums to have Cam remake with electric power, taller buildings, better storm drains, and more even pavement. Maybe he could fill some of the biggest ditches in with soil and then someone else can go find seeds to sow in them.

Slavery wanes. The Ministry of Extreme Labor pivots radically in its mission statement and less radically in its day-to-day business until it's a temp agency with a lobbying arm that's trying to sell the city on a minimum wage and a forty-hour workweek. Some of the farmers whose lurkers are suddenly obsolete turn them out with nothing but the fur on their backs.

Sig, one of the people who wrote a while ago and wants Cam to find things out for him, writes again.

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Cam checks his mail at inconsistent times but does do it every day! What has Sig written?

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He still wants to find someone. Now he also wants to learn summoning and get an explanation of what's going on with the metal heads. He has information he thinks Cam might find worth trading for those things, not much that Cam couldn't conjure for but plausibly things he wouldn't think to.

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All right, things have slowed down enough that Cam can find him a meeting time.

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Sig, it turns out, is the guy who was talking with Damas five years ago. Since then he's gotten a prosthetic eye, which is clearly made of metal and glass. He shows up to the meeting wearing armor. Part of it seems to have been made from part of a metal head skull.

"Hey there, cherry. Some of what I have for you is the kind of information where, once I tell you what it is, you'll have it. I'm thinking you find who I'm looking for, I tell you something I think you'll think is worth it, then we keep trading off. Sound good?"

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"Why are you looking for this person?"

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"He's my cousin's kid and he's not old enough to run off on purpose. I want to take him home."

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"How old is he?"

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"Four."

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"Name?"

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"Mar."

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...hm. "And how'd he come to run off?"

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"Not sure. Might've been taken."

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"Do you have, like, a suspect, here -"

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"What's it matter if I do?"

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"If you know exactly when he disappeared I can find out what happened but if he just was noticed missing after possibly hours that's much harder."

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"He was with his mother when she died. I only know the date but I could narrow it down to a couple hours if I talked to the right people."

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"Not quite narrow enough. Well, let's see."

...it's Jak.

"I have good news and bad news."

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He recognizes Jak and frowns slightly. "Let's hear the bad news first."

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"Your nephew time traveled to the past and grew up there."

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"That's a pretty incredible story."

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"Yes, but the good news is he's fine and around and you can go catch up with him. He goes by Jak now."

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"I'll talk to him. Well, for that I'll tell you light eco is real and there's a lot of it on this planet. Even a vent or two. There's just not any near here."

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"Cool, where is it instead?"

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"Other places. I hear there's monks with a stockpile of it in a temple out on a desert island."

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"...aesthetic. Okay. Did you want to know anything else?"

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"I want to know what the metal heads are up to, whether Haven's planning to expand, and how to summon demons."

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"Metal heads are going to colonize another planet, if they are they haven't told me where to put buildings yet, and that's a four-credit university course in the general case."

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"How much would the four-credit course cost me?"

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"A lot, my time is in high demand."

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"Eh, I'm not so much of an intellectual anyhow. For the rest of it - why don't you ask me something, I know a lot about this city and not a lot about what you want to know."

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"I actually don't feel I'm in burning need of intel right now. I guess I'd like to know what the reception is generally of the electrification and anti-slavery projects?"

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"It's a big change and around here change isn't safe. But I hear from some folks that think it's all for the best in the long run. I know a guy who's looking to learn electrical engineering when you're ready to teach it."

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"Inconveniently my electrical engineering education was all of the for-demons variety."

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"...Please tell me you have a plan for maintenance."

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"I mean, I'm sure I can figure out the maintenance requirements from books, I do know how it all works, there just might be an awkward gap where you don't know how to make relevant alloys yourselves and have to have them conjured."

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"Now that sounds like a headache for someone smarter than me."

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"I think it'll be fine, just a little annoying."

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"Hope you're right, cherry."

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"Why are you calling me that?"

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It's a casual term of not-quite-endearment from a city that fell years ago and didn't leave any survivors who could've traced the etymology. It's a memory.

He shrugs. "'S just how I talk. You don't like it?"

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"I wouldn't claim to like it, no. Have a nice day."

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He does have a nice day. He has the nicest day he's had in years. He tracks Jak down.

Meanwhile, the most urgent infrastructure problems are dealt with. The number of people enslaved in Haven City shrinks and seems likely to keep shrinking for a while. Ashelin mentions in public once that she's sympathetic to the idea of banning slavery entirely.

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Much groundbreaking, very emancipate, wow.

Once the urgent infrastructure projects are handled Cam will announce that he is going to open a school somewhere in between Haven and the new lurker city and open an integrated school for things like summoning, electrical engineering, and suchlike.

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A handful of lurkers, a lot of humans, and eventually a whole flock of talking birds want to know how to enroll.

But not any metal heads, or at least not anyone openly admitting to being a metal head. They have a planet for him to terraform and otherwise stop bothering him.

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He will teach an accelerated introductory course to anyone who wants to teach, leave them to run less-accelerated courses with the next batch of students, and go on a terraforming trip. Or a.... metalforming trip. Whatever. It will be fun.

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It probably will. They want the climate equable and warm, and they're capable of tolerating a lot of carbon dioxide to make it that way. They want spaces that will hold lots of shallow pools of dark eco (they can mine it themselves and have some to start with), surrounded by lush mosses, some of them host to something like mangroves and others empty to await a new batch of eggs. They want pools of bubbling green ooze (they can describe the exact chemical composition) and huge purple flowers that breathe and spiky black shrubs and trees with grey-blue tubing spiraling up their trunks. They want oceans of water mixed with just the right amounts of just the right colors of eco - while they're mining the eco they'll have to start with lakes, but someday - full of drifting organisms somewhere between seaweed and jellyfish that accumulate different colors of eco and glow slightly after they mature.

While he's at it they want an old public library. They can handle most of their infrastructure themselves, but this they want, down to the smallest details of the mural that covers the outside.

They want an entire world of creatures and scenery they thought they'd never see again, and even if Cam can't make every creature it's still more than they've hoped for for hundreds of years.

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It is fun, even if the resulting ecosystem is not especially attractive to his sensibilities.

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When next he checks his mail, the Precursors have written. They have a lot to say about the dark makers, of course; those are still an impending threat that they'd like Cam's help with. But beyond that - they're more grateful than a letter can really express. They offer to show him how much he's accomplished, someday, after the impending threat is past. And they let him know they'd like him in their world for as long as he'd like to be there.