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8 people head out on a camping trip, 9 arrive
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The drive to the trailhead is long and meandering. When the group of eight campers arrives, the sun is threatening to touch the horizon. By the time everyone settles their gear onto their shoulders, it already has.

They head into the trees, where the darkness is gathering quickly. One by one, they begin turning on their headlamps, until there are eight points of light moving through the trees. They reach a slow, broad river where instructions are shouted and people are told to go slow. Their headlamps double themselves on the surface of the slow, rushing water.

They each reach the other side, clumping together and turning their lights to the far bank.

And then, all at once, every light goes out. The group clamors and shouts and asks questions. People fumble in bags for spare batteries, for phones, for anything that can break the darkness. 

For a long moment, nothing does.

And then the light returns. Nine headlamps shine out, into the night.

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Wei Ying (compsci major, bisexual, never been hiking before) hasn't stopped talking for more than two minutes at a time since they got in the minivan, and that's not changing now. 

"Haha, Jiang Cheng, you screamed like a girl just now!" He elbows his brother but misjudges in the dark, nearly making both of them lose their footing on the slippery bank. 

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"Did not! That was you! And don't shove me, you're gonna knock both of us in the river, idiot!" 

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"Is everyone alright?" Duy, the trip leader, calls out. 

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"I'm fine."

Kristopher has stepped away from the group and is sweeping his light across the ground in broad strokes, looking as if he's trying to find something.

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"So are we," Macy says. 

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Ted, her boyfriend, nods in agreement. He's tucked up against her side, arm looped through hers. 

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"I wish the darkness had lasted longer," Fever says, "That was too short even to see any stars." 

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"That is inconsiderate," the quieter Asian guy tells Fever disapprovingly. His name is Lan Zhan, but the other hikers only know that because Wei Ying has said it (or yelled it) at least 50 times while constantly trying to get his attention.  "Someone could have been hurt."

Also, it was very startling. Lan Zhan dislikes being startled. 

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Wei Ying bounces in Kristopher's direction. "Ah, did you drop something? Want me to help you look for it?" 

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